Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

8| Over speeding

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By niabhatti

Next morning Haider came downstairs for breakfast every body was present there but Hamza. Haider wanted to ask about him but chooses not to He wants him learn the importance of time he have to be at work not a university or school he doesn't needs to be shaken up he have to be responsible enough to get on his job on proper time and if he doesn't makes it on time than the lecture and scoldings he will receive in office will wake him up next time on time!

All of the elderly Men and younger children left for their respective works and Hamza was still not up! Mishaal noticed it and decided to shake him up!

"Hamza ke bache uthooo! 9 baje office ha tumhari!" Mishaal nudged him and shakes him hard!

"Han to 9 baje haina abhi 9 me time haa sone doo!" Hamza replied sleepily!

"Han bhot time ha pure 20 min!" Mishi taunted!

"Kia ha yarr!" Hamza settled on bed and looked at the clock!

"Shit shittttt! Tum pagal hoo? Mujhe phele kyu nhi utaya bhaiya mama kisi ne kyu nhi utaya?" He yelled!

"Choti Mama tumhari nani pass gai ha or bhaiya ka patanhi ab jaou nahanee!" She replied and left!

Mishi descended the stairs and walked towards kitchen!

"Ap please do sandwiches pack krde!" She asked to their Maid!

Hamza rushed downstairs with his hairs dripping wet and rushed towards the door! It was only 10 minutes left to reach on time!

"Hamzaa yee loo raste me khana!" Mishi gave him sandwiches! Hamza took it and left on a speed of light!

Hamza was getting absolutely scared! Rafiq sahab warned him just yesterday and now he was actually late! He was over-speeding without even realising! He decided to grab a bite as he was hungry!

He was eating his sandwich and was over speeding suddenly he saw an elderly man right in front of his car! He abruptly put a break! The man was unharmed but the sudden breaks makes him flustered and as a result he fell down!

"I am so sorry unclee!" Hamza came out and gave his hand to the Man!

"Ameer ke bapp ke bacho ke agey hum keere mokare hi hote abhi me mar bhi jata tab bhi tum sorry khe kr nikal jate" old Man probably in his early 60s scoffed at him!

"Aise koi batt nhi ha uncle I am genuinely sorry ap aye please bus me late horaha tha isme galti se hogaya!" Hamza holded his hand and walked him towards a bus stop on the opposite side!

"Arey rehne doo! 200 ki speed me gari chalana ajkal ke bacho ka shoq ha tum jau apne daftar (office) me chala jaungaa!" He shrugged him off and settle down!

"Uncle apko lagi ha to me hospital lejata hu please chaliye!" Hamza tried again!

"Arey kaahana tumse jau? Tum ameero ko sirf achai ka dikhawa krne ata ha mujhe tum logo ke chakar me nhi parna maff kro!" Old man pretty much screamed!

Other came to his help and Hamza left helplessly he was already getting late! He was absolutely hating the idea of over speeding his brothers would kill him if they gets to know!

He reached office at 9:12 am. He stepped out of the life waiting for Rafiq sahab to bounce on him but much to his luck he wasn't there must be somewhere else!

He quickly walked towards his desk! Asad gave him a disappointed look but kept his mouth shut! He assigned him todays work! And Hamza settled down to complete it!

It was almost 4 pm when Haider was working in his cabin! Suddenly his phone rang it was an unknown number! He picked it up!

"Assalam Alikum kia mein Haider Hassan Ahmedaani se batt karaha hu?" Someone asked!

"Ji me batt karaha hu ap kon?" Haider replied!

"Haider sahab ap bare admi ha apki izat ha isliye apko warning dene ke phone kia jaraha ha!"

"Me samjha nhi apki batt please zara khul kr batt kre!"

"Me traffic control department se batt karaha hu black Honda number *** *** jo apke nam per registered ha subha uski complain ayi ha subha ke time over speeding ki wajah almost accident karchuki ha! Next time agr aisa kuch hua to car seize karli jayegi or fine alag dena hoga! Ap dihyan rakhe agli dafa aisa no ho bhot shukriya!" The Man completed!

Haider joined the points Hamza's car was registered on his name as Hamza was 18 when their father got him a car his official documents weren't complete so the Car was registered on Haider's name!

"I understand sir me Maafi chata hu! Koi nuqsani (damage) hua to me bharne ke liye bhi tayar hu apko ticket file krni ha ap wo bhi krsakte ha me Wada krta hu aisa dubara nhi hoga!" His voice turned absolutely sharp by the end!

"Is bar to jane derahe ha agli dafa khayal rakhiyega Ahmedaani khaandan ek bhot bara namm ha koi bhi complain FIR aplogo ka nam uchalegi kisi mazloom (innocent) ki jaan ka sawal hota in mamlo me aithiyat krna zarurri ha agey se khayal kijega Khud Hafiz"

"Ji zaroor Khuda Hafiz!" Haider hung up!

To say he was livid would be an understatement! He was absolutely furious! His siblings doing mischief, fun was different but them doing recklessness was absolutely not allowed!

"Ali come in" Haider ordered on Intercom!

"Yes sir" Ali came in immediately!

"Kal wale intern ko bhejoo!" He ordered angrily

"Sir intern ko kyu?" Ali asked hesitantly

"I said go and call him and than leave!" Haider ordered and glared furiously!

"Yes sir" He scurried away scared!

Ali went towards Hamza who was super engrossed in his work!

"Boss ne bulaya ha tumhe!" Ali came and told him!

"Kyu?" Hamza asked

"Patanhi leken jaldi jaou!"

"Aur aa late kal ki daant bad bhi asar nhi huana!" Adi taunted from behind and Hamza rolled his eyes!

Hamza wasn't as scared as yesterday because Haider was calm even when he was dumped with coffee so he won't be that Mad for being late that is what he thought!

Hamza knocked on the door and Haider allowed him to enter!

Haider's office was at the end of Hallway so nobody can snoop around because Ali's desk was placed in a way!

"Yes sir?" Hamza asked respectfully!

Haider furiously walked towards him!
"Kitne baje aye ho aj office?" He asked dangerously low!

Hamza took a step back he wasn't expecting Haider to be this furious!

"9:15" He replied scared

"Aur uthe kitne baje hoo?"

"8..8:40" He stammered

"Itni jaldi kese poocnhe office?" Haider asked with a raised voice!

Hamza remain silent which added more fuel to fire!

"Kis speed pe gari chala kr ayee hoo? Haider yelled!

"Over speed" Hamza murmured

"Speed batou" Haider yelled again and Hamza flinched!

"180..Bhai.." Hamza started but his Words dissolved inside his mouth as his face jerked to other side!

Haider have slapped him hard! The slap was harsh as Hamza stumbled back!

"Sharam nhi ati tumhee? Kuch hojata us inssan ko? Lag jati hadi tooti jati tum hote responsible itne bare hokar bhi sahi time se sone uthne ka khayal nhi ha tumhe? Kal bhi kha tha galti kroge to daantunga leken thora sa late hone ki wajah se tum apni or dusro ki life risk me dalogee!" He yelled furiously!

Hamza's eyes filled with tears! His cheek was hurting bad and he was also feeling bad for that Man!

"So.sorry" He replied crying

"Sorry Hamza sorry? Dosre logo ki jan itni sasti hai? Tumne boldia sorry batt khatam nhi?" Haider scolded harshly

"Bhaiya wo jan.." Hamza tried for an explanation!

"Save it! I am absolutely not interested in your excuses! Give me your keys you won't drive until you learn how to!" Haider asked in no nonsense tone!

"Mee..Mein ghar?" Hamza asked scared

"Take a bus! Taxi se jau paidal jau I don't care I am not trusting you with an vehicle anytime soon! Give me your keyes Now!" Haider's voice was harsh enough to make Hamza obey with fear!

He took his keys out and gave it to his brother!

"Now out" Haider ordered!

Hamza immediately ran to washroom he doesn't wanna look a like punk in front of others!

He washed his face and when he looked at his face his one cheek was completely red! It was evident that someone have slapped him harshly!

He was too embarrassed to think about anything he immediately took a lift and walked outside! It was stilll almost half an hour to 5 but he was done he was not able to control his tears!

It wasn't the first time where Haider have slapped him and It wasn't his brother's reaction which was making him cry it was disappointment it was guilt!

Hamza called an uber and waited outside! Harib car passed by as he just left the office! Hamza sighed in relief when car moved ahead but much to his bad luck car got reversed!

"Bethoo!" Harib asked from driving seat!

Hamza was too sad to disobey he quickly settled in passenger seat!

"Kia hua tumhari gari ko?" Harib asked!

"Wo woh" Hamza tried to reply but wasn't able too! Harib looked towards him and stopped the car!

Hamza was absolutely not liking his mother at this moment because she never allowed her boys to have longer hair she always preferred short hair! Hamza wants nothing more than long strands of hair right now so that he can cover his face!

"Mara kisne tumhare?" Harib asked shocked!

"Bhaiya ne!" Hamza mumbled

"Ek min tumhari gari bhi usne confiscate ki?" Harib asked somewhat understanding!

"Ji" Hama replied slowly and looked down!

"Or wo Kyu Hamza?" Harib asked his tone was completely changed!

"Over speeding" He mumbled again!

Harib was not sure if he heard it right or not! He sharply tilted his head and looked at Hamza!

"Speak up" His voice boomed

"Over speeding" Hamza replied scared

"Why the hell would you do that?" Harib asked sternly

"Late hogya thaa isliye" Hamza replied

"Or kitna jaldi poonch gaye tum ye harkat kar ke? Accident hojata toh?" He asked harshly!

"Hone wala tha hua nhi" Hamza replied and closed his eyes scared anticipating another slap!

Harib wanted nothing more than smacking him but since Haider have done it he won't do it!

"Bhot shoq haina tumhe jaldi office poonchne ka? For the remaining week tum subha 8 baje office aoge sari files properly set kroge! Or Mein Haider se khedunga jo bhi yahn wahn ka kamm ho wo tum kroge and since you don't have an car subha tum bus se aoge or sham ko hamese koi free hoga tab tumhe off milega!" Harib dished out the punishment!

"Sorry bhaijaan!" Hamza cried out

"Ofcourse you are!" Harib scoffed and drove ahead!

Next day It was 13th Zaira was absolutely nervous it was her prelims result day! She was anticipating an absolutely horrible result!

"Mama ap mujhe pick krne aynge ajj?" Zaira asked her mother

"Kyu?" Zeenat asked

"Woh aj prelims ka result ha kisi ek parent ko ana zaruri haa!" She asked her mother as her father left for dubai yesterday!

"Theek ha me ajaungi" Zeenat replied

Zeenat and Zaira walked toward the counter and the lady gave them her result! She looked at Zaira and rolled her eyes she absolutely dislikes her as she was one of the most naughtiest child in entire school and her result wasn't too good aswell!

Zeenat opened the file and it was 69%!

"Kia ha ye Zaira?" Zeenat asked

"Sorry Mama" Zaira replied

"Kia bologi apne bhai se ab? Uski batt man kr parhleti to ye sab na hota! Acha ha tumhare baba yahn nhi ha aj to I will let Haider deal with you mujhe finals me ye result nhi chaiye! Mishi se parho Haider se prho do whatever you want but improve it in this week only!" She scolded

Zaira was way to nervous to tell Haider about it! Last night he was Mad at Hamza so much that when Hamza went to ask for an apology he asked him to leave as he was way to Mad to deal with him!

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