Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

6| Day 1

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By niabhatti

It was a beautiful morning! Hamza and Zaira surprisingly woke up early without tantrums!

Naziya walked into Haadi's room to wake him up breakfast was about to be served in 15 minutes and he only got 30 minutes altogether before school starts!

"Haadi uthoo!" Naziya nudged her son!
After 5 minutes of shaking up he finally sat up straight he rubbed his eyes and saw his mother!

"Me apse hu naaraz hu!" He pouted and turned his face!

"Acha or wo kyu?"

"Agar apko me itna hi bura lagta hu or ap chahti ha ke me apka peecha chordu toh ap mujhe batadeti ye kia hota ye apne bete ko khud bhooke sher ke hawale krdoo!"

Naziya was not having it she whacked his shoulder!
"Subha subha kia bakwass karahe ho? Tammez se bolo!" She scolded!

"Bhaiya mama bhaiya! Unko kyu dia apne mere test apko pata ha wo mujhe ruler se marne wale they" He complained!

"Usne Mara tumhe?"

"Nhi bach gaya mee!"

"Abhi jakr danti hu me usse! Atleast ek do dafa to martaa! Deserve krte ho tum Maar meri or apne baba ki to sunte ho nhi!" She scolded again!

"Late horaha ha mamaa!" Haadi rushed to washroom before his mother starts her angry lecture!

Hamza was completely ready! He was about to wear tie! He still gets confused on how to wear ties so to save himself from embarrassment he follows youtube video steps!

He was engrossed in following the steps that is when Haider entered the room last night he came to check on him but he was fast asleep so he left without disturbing him!

Haider paused the video and started doing his tie by himself!

"Itne bare hogaye ho ab tk nhi ati na tie bandhna?" Haider asked

"Ati ha bs aj bhool gaya tha isliye video dekhraha thaa?" Hamza scoffed and Haider rolled his eyes at blatant lie!

"Kyu pareshan ho itnaa?" Haider asked after finishing his tie and settling on a bean bag in his room!

"Dar to lagta haina Bhaiya  life me first time office aungaa bachpan me baba sath tafree krne jata somase kha kr ajata thaa! Ab wahn jakr kam krna wo bhi apke jesa boss!" He muttered last line to himself but Haider heard!

"Hamza jitna daroge na log utna darenge! Wahn kisi ko pata nhi hoga to ke tum Ahmedaani ho sirf ek naye intern hoge dont show your fears to them! Aj se kuch saal bad you will be their boss don't let them know your weaknesses! Or jahan tk meri batt ha as a boss kia krunga me ziyada ziyada datunga na thora leken koi help chaiye hogi to me honga bhai jaan hoge Maad hogaa you won't be alone kis kis ko life me aise perks milte ha batou? Kisi ki job itni easy hoti ha? Count your blessings!" Haider explained calmly!

"Agr meri wajah se koi loss hogya toh?"

"Ek to tumhari ye faltu ki batein! Tumhe kia lagta ha ek summer intern ko me itna sara kam dedunga ke uski wajah se loss hojaye? Ziyada se Ziyada important kaam tumhe milega na wo hoga important files ki photo copy!" Haider told him!

"Matlab zaruri kam nhi to daant bhi nhi?" He asked!

"Filhal to neeche jau nashta kro late hue na to sab ke samne datungaa! Admin department me jana wahn se apna Id card pick krna phir 10th floor pe ana wahan Rafiq sahab honge meet him! And just call yourself Hamza Hassan meri puri din meetings ha so I won't be there! I will treat you as I treat my employees its upto to you ke meri bato ka bura maan kr Mu phula kr beth jau ya take it like a Man and learn! Don't expect any favours! I wont even acknowledge you just how I don't acknowledge my other interns! Abhi bhi chate ho ke I introduce you as my brother to tell me!"

"Nahi I am fine! Me rafiq sahab se dosti krlungaa!" Hamza replied grinning!

"Chalagaa pataa!" Haider muttered under is breath!

"Huh?" Hamza asked!

"Sure! Krna unse dosti abhi jau sahi se nashta kroo!" And Hamza scurried!

"Mishiii!" Zaira ran to Mishaal's room!

"Han?" Mishi asked while combing her hairs! Mishi's college was starting from next week so she had one more week of holidays!

"Yar meri colourless lip balm dekhi ha? Tum apni dedoo na meri mil nhi rahii!" Zaira started searching on her table!

"Tumhe khabhi apni koi cheez milti ha kia? Ye loo!" She gave her hers!

Zaira applied and looked in mirror to check if she is looking okay!

"Me sahi lagrahi huna?" Zaira asked

"Han bahe thori deair mein sabka bura haal hojata ha mujhe to samjh nhi ati tum school itna tiyar hokar kyu jatii hoo!" Mishi told her!

"Kia matlab? Sirf moisturizer sunscreen tint or lip balm hi to lagaya ha! Ye konsa makeup hua ajeeb!" Zaira roller her eyes!

Mishi chooses not to reply as she herself was not a girl to do makeup before school it was not that she doesn't like it but she prefers to do it where it is actually required!

"Wese tumhari kabse ha college?"

"18!"

"Oh usko to abhi bhot time haa!" Zaira shrugs

"Zaira aj 11 ha 18 means next monday 20 se exams ha tumhare!" Mishi replies and Zaira froze!

"Aj..aj sach me 11 ha?" She asked stammering!

"Han kia hogya haa?"

"Shit yarrr! 13 ko prelims ka result haaa!" Zaira sat down!

"Or tumhe yadd nhi thi ye batt? Zahir ha finals se phele prelims to hote hii ha!"

"Yar agar me fail hogai too?"

"To kia khana Maar sabkii!"

"Zairaaaa!" Zeenat called from downstairs!

Zaira kissed Mishi's cheek!

"Wish me luck!!" And she ran off!

Zaira and Hamza were sitting by each other!

"Iruu!" Hamza whispered in her ear!

Zaira raised her brows allowing him to speak!

"Bara wala galaxy lakar dunga promise please bhaiya ko gussa na dilana thore din!"

"Me khud dariwi hu apko apni pari ha!"'she whispered back!

Galaxy was Zaira's favourite chocolate she would do anything if you bribe her into this!

"Tum to sara Saal hoti hona please paka chocolate ladungaa atleast ek hafta please?"

"Paka bara wala?"

"Han meri Maa!"

"Okay phir soochungii!" She winked

"Kia batein karhe ho dono?" Hatim! Their youngest chachu asked who sitting right in front! This caught Haider's attention!

"Kher rahe honge koi Khurafat plan (nonsense)" Haider spoked!

"Ji nhi!" Zaira replied glaring at him and Hamza pinched her side hard! She can't control herself!

Zaira glared at him and he gestured her to shutup!

"Chalo Haadi or Zaira me drop krduu!" Hatim stood up!

"Tum direct sight pe jarahe ho?" Hassan asked!

"Ji bhai!" Hatim replied

"Aur bhai ap kha office jarahe haa?" He asked his oldest brother!

"Nhi me to factories ke visit pe jaunga ajj!" Haroon replied

"Ap to aynge na aj office?" Hamza asked scared!

"Nhi mujhe to ek party se milne jana isliye hi poochraha thaa!" Hassan replied

"Matlab me office me akela?" Hamza asked

"Akele kha se ye teeno honge na?"He pointed at oldest siblings!

"Matlab inke sath hi me akelaa?

"Hamza drame band kroo chachu jaye ap or baba iski fikar na kreiga me sambhalungaa!"
Haider spoked in between!

Hamza reached office exactly at 8:50! He collected his Id card from admins office and took a lift to go to his brother's floor!

Hamza reached 10th floor and found a old Man probably in his fifties sitting in a small lavish cabin! The name plate gave it away he was Rafiq sahab! He was looking very grumpy and irritated!

"Assalam alikum sir! I am new intern! Hamza Hassan I was asked to meet you!" He gathered his confidence and greeted!

"You are 4 minutes late!" He told him angrily!

Hamza was only two minutes late but he can't answer back he needs to behave like a grown up not like his true self!

"I am sorry sir!" He apologised respectfully!

"First day and late ye ajkal ke bache internship to krni ha leken kam ko serious nhi lenaa! Yahn pe time ko bhot serious lia jata ha! Next time I want you at dot 9:00 clear boy?" He asked sternly and Hamza gulped!

All the plans of befriending him vent in vein he was more grumpy than Haider himself probably it was his company which is making Haider behave like this he thought!

"Yes sir clear!" He replied scared!

Rafiq sahab called someone and a minute later a young boy probably in his late 20's entered! Rafiq ordered him to show Hamza around!

They walked out of office and he introduced himself!
"Hii! Asad here!" He gave his hand for a shake

Hamza was now scared his first day wasn't going exactly how he planned!

"Hi sir!" He shook his hand respectfully

"Arey call me Asad I am probably the only guy you will find happy here!

"Sab aise hi ha?" Hamza asked pointing at Rafiq sahab's door!

"Hahah inke jese nhi ha sare leken sab ziyada tar serious rehte hamare boss ko ziyada hasi mazak nhi pasand he is a very strict guy!" Asad told him

Hamza gulped finding the exact same guy who did his tie in the morning would be very difficult to find here!

Asad noticed his fear!
"Tension nhi loo boss ka interns se itna interaction nhi hota until and unless ap koi bhot bari garbar krdoo ye apka koi kam pasand agaye if you ever meet him or whenever he is at round don't pretend he hates fake people ziyada has kr butter lagana ye sab unko sakht na pasand ha! Greet him respectfully wrna dant paregi and Mind you he scolds bad"

"I know!" Hamza spoked without realising!

"Huh?" Asad asked confused

"I mean mene aisa sunaa ha!" Hamza replied

"Oh common I will show you your desk!" He took Hamza to his desk! Showed him a around
A little gave him his laptop and explained how to work!

"This is the file isme kuch accounting errors and correct it and enter the correct entries in computer!"

"Thank you! Me apko check kara sakta hu after I am done?" Hamza asked

"Wese to sab files end me rafiq sahab check krte ha but since it you first day you can take my help yahn tumhare barabr me bhi sab interns ha to kuch help chaiye to ask them okay?" He smiled and left!

"Hi dude! Finally meri age ka koi dikhaa!" A guy beside his desk asked!

"Hi! I am hamza!" Hamza greeted

"Adnan here but call me Adi please!" He whispered!

"Yahan batt krna allow nhi ha?" Hamza asked

"Patanhi mujhe to ek dafa daant pari thi uske bad se me nhi krtaa!" Adi replied

"Rafiq sahab se?"

"Arey unse roz parti ha! Haider sir the main boss wo agaye thee!"

"Shit phir?"

"Phir kia do din tk rona araha tha bahe bhot khadoos ha wo unse bach kr rehna interns ko to chote bacho ki tarah daant parti ha itni daant to Mujhe school me bhi nhi pari khabhi!"

Hamza gulped and cursed his luck! Getting scolded as a child if his brother does it too others than he will definitely beat him!

He started working on his files! He was able to to do it! It wasn't very hard!

"Chal dude lunch ka time hogaya ha!" Adi nudged him!

"Yar abhi sara tempo toot jayga me thori deiar me krlungaa!" He replied and Adi left

After completing one file! Hamza took a breath of relief he was hungry so went towards the cafeteria! Since he was late he was not able to finish his coffee there he decided to complete it upstairs while working!

Mishal messaged him asking how was he! He decided to text back he was texting when lift opened he walked outside and he bumped into someone without even realising. The coffee cup went flying and saw the white shirt of someone getting completely destroyed!

He looked up to see the person and it was none other than his beloved Boss! Haider Hassan Ahmedaani!

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