Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

5| scared

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Soon after breakfast everybody was resting in their rooms enjoying the last day of holidays! Hamza was using phone in his room. He was waiting for Hammad to barge in!

Hammad was not like Haider but he can be very strict and scary if he chooses to be! All three of the older brothers were strict but Hammad since himself was not the oldest he was a little calm! But a thing like cigarette he would never ignore that!

He made Hamza leave because he is aware of Haider's anger and he knew that if Haider will see Hamza in bad company he will make his life hell and he doesn't want his younger brother life to become hell so he will himself make sure that he doesn't do anything bad!

After not finding Haider anywhere close Hammad went to Hamza's room! Hamza stood up from his bed and hugged Hammad as soon as he came closer!

"Thank you bhaiiii! Ap nhi hote to meri ek adhi hadi abhi tooti wi hotiii!"

Hammad pushed him and whacked his head hard!

"Aise dost ha tumhare? Ye jo tum bare hone ki acting krte hona bache ho abhi mat boola kro ye batt!" He scolded!

"Bhai promise mene khabhi life me hath bhi nhi lagaya in cheezo ab koi or peeraha ha to me rok thori sakta hu dost ha mera acha or I promise me nhi peeunga!" He spoked while rubbing his head!

"Hamza mene khud college me cigarette pee hi dosto ke sath or patanhi kese bhaijaan ko pata chal gaya thaa mujhe aj bhi doubt ha ye haider ka kaam tha leken Hamza un ka jo gussa mene usdin dekhaa haina I can't tell you! Bhaijaan phir ache haa leken tumhara bhai sach me tumhari band bajadega please mere bhai aisa koi kam na krna dosti rakhne ka mana nhi karaha leken is age me hame sab try krne ka Maan krta ha or is hi age me lifetime ke liye adat rehjati ha! Tumhare peeche to Hitlero ki fouj please na krna he kam!" Hammad explained!

"I promise bhai me nhi krunga agr koi mujhe offer bhi krta haina to bhaiya ki darwani ankhen mere samne ajati ha! Wese ap apna bataye apne sachi me pii thi or pakre bhi gaye? Allah bhaijaan ne bhot gussa kia hogaa! Pitayi hui thi apki?" Hamza asked with amusement!

"Faltu ki bate mat kroo!" Hammad glared clearly embarrassed!

"Bataye naaaa!" Hamza pestered

Hammad just nodded shyly!

"Ohoo itne sharif bhai ko bhi Maar pari haa!" Hamza teased!

"Or yahi shareef bhai tumhe Maar sakta ha agr tum do second me chup na hue" Hammad glared dangerously!

Hamza raised his hands in surrender!
"Sare khadoos Allah ne ek sath is ghar me bhejdie haa!" He muttered!

"Bhai please ek batt to bataye! Bhaiya office me bhi aise hi jalad ban kr ghoomte ha?"

"Patanhi hamara department pura alag ha leken Han uske department me discipline bhot haa!"

"Bhai Mujhe apne under lelena me apka peon bhi banjaungaa sab kaam krdungaa mujhe bhaiya se bachalee!"

"Hammad mere under interns nhi haa me sab fuzool ke lafro me nhi parta me international projects handle krta hu or me khud bhaijaan ke under hu!"

"Bhaiya to pure office ke same maardenge agr koi choti se bhu galti ki thii!" He told sadly!

"Mujhe nhi lagtaa he will behave professionally han ghar akr dante to dantee! Mere sath to bhaijaan yahi krte ha office me as a boss thora sa dante ha or kyu ke wo hamre bhai ha to itna bura nhi lagta tha leken ghar ake bhot dante the bahee!"

"Bhaijaan bhi itne khadoos ha?"

"Bhott choti si choti galti unko pata hoti haa I am sure Haider unse to better hogaa!"

"Bs daraye ap sab mujhe! Dadu se to me khabhi batt nhi krungaa" He whined

"Haider ka mood acha rakhna ha to un dono ko samjhou Zara thora parhle wrna roz raat ko gussa wo dilwange or phasoge tum!" Hammad suggested!

"Apko lagta ha wo dono meri batt man kr parhengee?"

"Try kroo!" Hammad shrugged and Hamza rolled his eyes!

At night Hamza was getting genuinely scared not only because of Haider but because this was the first time he have to work he was scared of disappointing his family! His father grandfather all of his uncles and even his elder brothes all them were way good in their field! He was scared that will he be able to reach their expectations!

He walked towards the pool side as all three of the younger clan were busy studying! Mishaal forcefully made Haadi and Zaira study!

Hamza was sitting by pool his feet dangling inside pool and he was lost in his own World! He looked at side when he felt someone's presence!

It was Harib he took Hamza in one handed hug and he rested his head on his chest allowing his heartbeats to soothe his mind!

Harib gave him his time! He stayed quiet and chooses to silently provide comfort!

"Daar lagraha ha bhaijaan" Hamza spoked after a peaceful silence hiding in Harib's chest!

"I can understand! 10 Saal phele dadu ne mujhe pe bhi asie hi bomb phora tha! I was 19 and he made me go office! Bhot dar lagraha tha kisi ko dissapoint na krdu ye sab dar se me kai din tk soya nhi tha!" Harib told him!

"Phir?" Hamza asked looking up!

"Hamza I was the first one from second generation mujhe bhot dar lagraha tha phir baba ne mujhe samjhaya unhone hath pakar kr ek ek cheez samjhai phir bhi somewhere I felt alone but tumhare pass to teen teen bhai ha! Koi choti garabr ho ya koi bari garbar just come to mee I promise me sab sambhal lungaa!" He patted his back!

"Agr mene kuch ulta seedha krdia to ap dantoge nhi?" Hamza asked!

"Nhi wo kam krne ke liye Haider ha!" Harib laughed sofly!

"Bhaiyaa unka to ziyada dar sabke samne to nhi datenge na?"

"Hamza He is a great boss bacha uske under ka staff sab se disciplined ha not because wo strict but because he knows how to handle people! Wo kuch khayega bhi agr to usko dil se na lagana balke use seekhlenaa hmm?"

"Aur mene koi bhot bari garbar krdi? Mujhe to ye bhi nhi pata ye sab staff laptop me kia krta ha? Bhaiyaa to bhot gussa krnge!"

"Har cheez tumhe sikhai jayegi mujhe Haider Hammad ham sabko nhi ata sabne seekhlia na! Or agr koi bhot bari galti hojaye to mere cabin me ajana I will handle Haider akhir mera to chota bhai haina!" He joked!

"Wahan pe to sabko pata nhi hoga na me ap ka bhai hu? I will be just an intern na?"

"Do you want this?"

"Jii! I cant handle the pressure of being your brother! Sab mujhe usi nazar se dekhnge I need to build it on my own!"

Harib was super proud he hugged him a little more tight!

" I am so proud of you! And I believe in you! Galtia sab krte ha bs galtio se seekhta koi koi haa learn from your mistakes and you are perfect to goo! Don't let anyone bully you or underestimate you! Kam se piyar krna or piyar se kam krna ha bs or kisi ki tension nhi leni okay?" He kissed his forehead!

"Thank you bhaijaan!!" Hamza kissed his cheek!

"Ab jau sojaou time se office nhi aye to big boss tk complain poocnh jayegi!" Harib smirked!

"Ye big boss kon ha? Bare baba? Baba?"

"Find it out yourself!!" Harib ruffled his hairs and stood up!

After completing 1 and half chapter! Zaira was done she was exhausted!

"Yar Mishi thak gaii!" She laid on couch!

"Zaira please parhloo tumhe shoq nhi ha tumhare ache grades aye? Daar nhi lagta tumhe bhaiya se?" Mishi asked!

"Mujhe koi shoq nhi a single sheet of paper can not decide my future!" She shrugged!

"Tum deserve krti hu ruler se Maar khana! Ab jake sojaou school ha tumhari kal!" Mishi told her!

"12 bhi nhi bajee yaar!" She whined!

"To jagti rahoo!" Mishal was done for a day!

Both of the girls were sitting in lounge upstairs talking until the three oldest brother came in!

"Sona nhi haa?" Harib asked Zaira and ruffled her hairs!

"Abhi neend nhi arahii!" Ira replied

"Toh kab sone ka plan ha madam ka?" Haider asked

"Bhaiya please thori deair?" She asked cutely!

"Zaira.." Haider started but Harib cut him off!

"Tang mat kro Haider sojaegi thori deair mee!" One more person to spoil her Haider wanted too bang his head!

After two minutes of silence! Mishaal finally asked she was curious since yesterday!

"Bhaiyaa?"

"Han?"

"Ek baat poocho?"

"Bolo?"

"Apko Haadi ka test paper kisne diaa?"

"Tumhe bhi pata tha is bare me?" Haider glared at her

"Bataa na bahee! Kal se pareshan ha ye log!" Hammad butted in!

"Chachi ne unhone ne hi dia tha mujhe!"

"WHAT?" Haadi shouted from behind!

"Aishta batt kroo Haadi!" Harib scolded!

"Sorry.. Sachi bhaiya Mama ne bataya apko?" Haadi asked!

"Bhot achaa kia unhone tumhe khud to apni fikar ha nhi!" Haider somewhat scolded!

"Or khbardar jo tumne unse battmeezi ki!" Haider warned!

"Nhi krunga bhaiyaa!" Haadi smiled at settled closer to him!

"Hamza khaa ha?" Zaira asked without realising her brother was right in front of her!

"Ouuchh" Zaira rubbed her neck as Haider whacked her lightly!

"Hamza bolte ha?" He asked glaring!

"Bhaiya Mishi bhi to Hamza bolti ha!" She whined!

"Wo unka mamla ha leken tumse se Hamza 4 saal bara stop calling him by his name samjhi?"

Zaira huffed but nodded!

"Wese ha kha yeh?" Hammad asked!

"Sogaya ha!" Harib replied nonchalantly!

"Itna jaldi?" Haadi asked!

"Office haina uski kal shayed isliye! Mishaal spoked!

Haider was quick to notice! He decided to go to him and comfort him a bit!

"Theek haina woh?" He asked Harib slowly!

"Ab sahi haa!"Harib replied!

"Chaloo bachaa party get to bed subha nhi utha jata donoo se!" Harib told them!

"Bhaijaan!" Both of them started to whine until Haider spoked!

"Jau forran donoo!" He glared dangerously and both of them rushed!

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