Karna The Mortal God

By MAYANKKUKREJA26

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What if when Kunti abandoned Karna Surya Dev the Father of Karna save him and take him to his lok Surya lok w... More

Karna Birth
Sangya accept Karna as his Son
Kunti Marry Pandu
Birth of Kauravas and Pandavas
Karna goes to Parshuram
Dronacharya
Karna Vs Indra
Karna return to Surya lok
Karna to became Dev
Bleesing from Gods
Suryaprasth
Contest
Karna Vs Arjun
Gurudakshina
War on Drupad
War
Coronation
Krishna visits Suryaprasth
Karna Slays Arankasur
Lakshagraha
Pandavas in Rakshasavrat
Dhristdyumna The Fire Born Prince
Draupadi The Fire Born Princess
Duryodhan Yuvraj Abhishek
Krishna meet his Sakhi
Invitation of Swayamvar
Karna's Birthday
Truth
Ghatotkach
Draupadi Swayamvar
Karna Draupadi Marriage
In Search of lost Pandav Prince
Visiting Hastinapur
Pandavas Arrival
Finding Answers
Karna Kunti
Karna Kunti Confrantation
Acceptance
Indraprasth
Indraprasth 2
Pandav Wife's Cast
Unknown Fellings
Krishna's Boon
Swayamvar
Nakul Naiytri
Journey to Dwarka
Saving Subhadra
A Proposal for Naiytri
Nakul Naiytri Marrige
Nakul Naiytri Marrige 2
Welcoming Newly wed
Arjun's Exile
Arjun Subhadra Vivaha
The End of Asurasur
Blissful Night
Good News
Cravings + 9 Month's
Birth
Rajyasuya Yagya
Revenge of Humiliation
Karna In Patal Lok
Dyut Sabha
Cheerharan
Aftermath
Vanvaas
Tapasya
End of Vanvaas
Agyatvas In Matsya
Keechak Vadh
Virat War
New Generation New Entries
Attack on Hastinapur
Sambha abducts Lakshmana
Uppandavas In Matsya
The First Meet
Tara's truth
Aditya Saves Tara
Marrige
Propsal of Peace
Krishna Vishwarrop
Kurukshetra

Mission To Dwarka

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Shri Krishna returns Dwarka

Virat Matsya

Karna gets a letter from his spy in Hastinapur regarding what happened in Hastinapur Rajya Sabha with Shri Krishna Karna left the place and went to meet Everyone

Virat- Rajkumar Yudishter what you think about Peace Propsal

Yudishter- Maharaj Virat I think Hastinapur will accept our Peace Propsal I know Pitamah Guru Drona and Maharaj Dhithrashtra didn't want war

Bheem- But Bhartashri what about Duryodhan do you think will he accept Peace Propsal

Yudishter- Bheem Maharaj has the authority for accepting or rejecting Peace Propsal and I think he will accept it

Karna enters in the sabha

Karna- I recieved a letter from my spy regarding peace propsal we sent to Hastinapur

Virat- And what happened in the sabha Samrat did Maharaj Dhithrashtra accepted the Peace Propsal we sent

Karna nodded in No

Karna- They have declined our Peace Propsal and insulted Vasudev Krishna and tried to Imprison him

Everyone gets angry

Bheem- Jyshat Kauravas have crossed every limit they tried Imprison Vasudev Krishna they have declined our Peace Propsal now we should get Ready for war

Nakul- Bharta bheem is right Jyshat now we should start preparing for war

Arjun- Yes Jyshat time has come to punish kaurvas for their every Adharma they have committed

Virat- Samrat I agree what Rajkumar Bheem Nakul and Arjun said declining of Peace Propsal considered as Invitation of war

Karna- Ok then If everyone in the sabha has same opinion then we should not waste our time we should get Ready for the war

Hastinapur

Duryodhan- Pitashri now we should start Preparation for war we should send letter to all our allied kingdoms Vasudev Krishna gave us invitation of war then he and his favourite Pandavas will get that

Shakuni- Yes Maharaj what happened in the sabha was a challenge to Hastinapur to you

Dhithrashtra- Taatshri you will be the Senapti of the entire army

Bheeshma- I know that Putra I am tied by my Vow but I suggest that we should return everything to Pandavas if Duryodhan return what he has snatched Pandvas will surely forgive him

Duryodhan- Pitamah did you forget what happened I won everything fairly by Dharma now everything is final a War

Both the sides start Preparing for the war

Matsya

Karna completed his Yagna and created a strong army of 5 Aukshani

Arjun- After creating this Army we have total Army of 14 Aukshani including Suryaprasth and all our allied kingdoms

Yudishter- Now only Date and Place is left for this war

Karna- And Draupadi will decide the date because the place has been already decided

Arjun- Where Jyshat

Karna- Kurukshetra before Shri Krishna left for Hastinapur he told me if war happened then it will be in Kurukshetra

Karna Draupadi Room

Karna- Draupadi we have almost completed preparation of war but only Date is left for the war Adharma has happened to you now you should decide the date of War

Draupadi- I have decided the date Arya
After 1 Month this war will take place

Draupadi write the date and place in a letter for the war and karna send it to Hastinapur

Hastinapur

Soldier bring the letter in the Rajya Sabha

Soldier- Maharaj somebody send this letter

Bheeshma and Drona looked at the Arrow in which letter was attached

Bheeshma- Karna has send this letter this

Duryodhan snatched the letter and read it

Duryodhan- Pitashri Pandu Putra has decided the Place and Date of the war

Dhithrashtra- What

Duryodhan- Yes by sending this letter they have hosted the Red flag of war now they will get it

Duryodhan Room

Shakuni- Mera Bachha time has come to eliminate Pandvas

Duryodhan- Yes Mamashri now they will die in Battelfield

Shakuni- I know Putra but we have to increase our strength and reduce Pandvas strength

Duryodhan- How

Shakuni- My spy in Matsya informed me the total strength of their Army is 14 Aukshani and we have only 10

Duryodhan- I know that but till the time Pitamah is with us no one can save thier army

Shakuni- Mera bachha listen Krishna is with the pandvas but your Gurudev Balram has promised he and his Narayani Sena will support you in the war if Balram is with us then Krishna will not raise his weapons against his Dau and with Naryani Sena our Army strenght and number will increase do preparation to visit Dwarka

Duryodhan- as you say Mamashri

Matsya

Karna- Arjun we need Vasudev support
in this war Vasudev is the only person who we need the most

Arjun- But Madhav is always with us

Karna- I know that but this is war time and I know Gandhar Raj as well he will make a point that we didn't ask Vasdev support officially so he can't take part in the war

Arjun- OK jysht I will go to Dwarka and ask Madhav and Bhrata Balram support in this war

Next Day

Arjun Duryodhan and Shakuni departed towards Dwarka

Dwarka

Krishna was resting in his room when a soldier enter in the room

Soldier- Dwarkadeesh Yuvrani Lakshmana want's to meet you

Krishna- Send her In

Lakshmana enters I the room

Lakshmana- Pranam Pitashri

Krishna blessed Lakshmana

Krishna- You want to say something

Lakshmana- I am sorry Pitashri for everything my Pitashri has done with you in Hastinapur

Krishna(smile)- I am not angry with him neither with you Putri

Lakshmana- Can I ask you something

Krishna nods

Lakshmana- My Pitashri is visiting Dwarka and I want That you support him

Krishna(smile)- He will get what he wants

Soon Duryodhan and Shakuni reach Dwarka

Shakuni- Are you looking Mera bachha these 2 Men are enough to defeat any army any Maharathi in Aryavarth if they are with Pandvas has no chance to defeat us in this war

Duryodhan- Parnipat Gurudev Parnipat Vasdev Krishna

Balram- Ayushman Bhava

Krishna(smile)- Parnipat Yuvraj Duryodhan Parnipat Mamashri

Shakuni- Parnipat Mahabali Balram Parnipat Vasudev

Krishna- Lakshmana informed me about your arrival in Dwarka

Duryodhan- How is my Daughter and Sambha

Krishna- They both are good and their relationship has been improved

Shakuni- I am happy to listen that aren't you happy Duryodhan

Duryodhan nodded

Balram- So what brings you here Duryodhan

Duryodhan- Gurudev years ago when I come to Dwarka to learn Mace fight from you after my training completed I asked you 2 Promises First one was not completed

Balram looked Duryodhan

Duryodhan(continue)- But I come here to remind you your second promise
When Hastinapur need help in the war Dwarka and his Narayani Sena will stand with Hastinapur and now it's time for war

Balram- Duryodhan I remember that but let's not talk about this now it's been a long time I have not fighted with a good Mace warrior come have duel with me

Duryodhan- As you say

Dwarka Armoury

Balrma and Duryodhan were fighting
Balram was beating Duryodhan very badly Duryodhan didn't get any chance to attack Balram

Shakuni- Vasudev Krishna why I am feeling that Mahabali Balram is not fighting My Duryodhan but punishing him

Krishna- Mamashri this is between a Guru and his Student Guru teached student Mace War but he choosed Dyut over Mace now he is getting punishment

Duryodhan hold Balram's feet

Balram- What are you doing Duryodhan raise your Mace and fight me

Duryodhan- I accept my Defeat Gurudev I want your support in this war

Balram- Duryodhan me and Kanha will discuss about this and tell you

Arjun also reaches Dwarka

Krishna- Come Parth I was waiting for you

Arjun- Parnipat Madhav I come here for to ask your support in this war from our side

Krishna(smile)- Parth Bharta Duryodhan and Gandhar Raj Shakuni has also come to ask my support in
this war

Arjun- Madhav you know that Dharma is on our side then why will you support Duryodhan

Krishna- Parth Dau has promised Duryodhan when he completed his training under him

Arjun- Madhav why you don't try to explain our view our prospective

Krishna- Parth you will get what you want belive me

Krishna- Dau you know that Pandavas are right and why you want to support Duryodhan

Balram- Kahana he my student and I promised him that Narayani Sena and Dwarka will support Hastinapur and I know that Pandvas are right Dharma is on their side but the Pandavas also done Adharma Yudishter staked his elder brother Wife on Dyut Sabha when they were not here all this were a common topic that Pandu putra Yudishter staked his bhabhi his elder brother's wife and all were watching him

Krishna- So you are supporting Duryodhan

Balram- No Kahana I know he played Dyut he said to stake Draupadi but why Yudisther staked Draupadi if he didn't staked Draupadi nothing like this happen If Duryodhan has done Adharma Pandvas are also

Krishna- Dau all Dharma is a tree it's branches are Humans and thier wishes leaves are it's choice and the fruit is the result of their choice but Dau Roots of tree is Compassion if Duryodhan don't follow his Mama Shakuni's advice everything and situation is different Dau what Duryodhan did is because the tree of Dharma is dying because Humans are forgotten the meaning of compassion Think your self Dau and one thing once you decide what you have to do then send Duryodhan and Arjun to me who reach first to me will get my support

Balram was thinking what Krishna said and he has seen that the City of Dharma Dwarka and his people are also start forgetting Dharma all Illegal Activities are placing in Dwarka

Balram meets Duryodhan and Shakuni

Balram- I am in a very awkward situation one side is my Brothers which are related to me by blood and on other side you are my Student my best disciple so I have decided that I will not take part in this war rest decision will be of Krishna because he is Dwarkadeesh he said that the one who reach first to him will get his support

Pradyumana son of Krishna and Rukmini informed Arjun about this
Arjun reached in Krishna room he saw that Duryodhan was their sitting near him

Krishna- When you come Parth

Arjun- Just now Madhav

Duryodhan- Vasudev I am also here

Krishna- Sambdhishri when you come

Duryodhan- Before Arjun

Krishna- How can I trust you that you come before Parth

Arjun- Madhav Bharta Duryodhan is saying the truth he come first

Duryodhan- Vasudev I come here to ask your support in this war

Arjun- I also come here for your support

Krishna- What you both want Me or My Naryani Sena

Duryodhan- You Vasdev because you are more than a Sena you are enough

Krishna- I know why are you saying this Yuvraj because of my Sudarshan Chakra because it is the only weapon after Mahadev's Trishul and Indradev's Vajra that can Annihilate entire Sena but Sudarshan Chakra is not a weapon  like Dau said he will fight in this war I will also not raise my weapon in this war but I have divided my support into 2

1) My Undefetable 7 Narayani Sena

2) Me Weaponless

So what will you choose

Duryodhan- Vasudev I have made my decision I will choose Naryani Sena

Krishna- Yuvraj Duryodhan Parth is your Anuj let him choose first

Duryodhan- But I come here first Vasudev it's my right

Arjun- Madhav let Bharta Duryodhan choose what he want

Krishna smile

Duryodhan- Ok Vasudev I let him choose go Arjun choose what you want

Arjun- I have made my choice I choose you Madhav

Duryodhan- Then I choose Naryani Sena

Sambha enters in the room

Sambha- And from Dwarka I will be the Senapati of Naryani Sena and take part in the war Pranam Pitashri Duryodhan

Duryodhan bless Sambha

Krishna- Your choice Putra Sambha but let me remind you the rules of Yaduvansh if Naryani Sena gets defeated then the Senapti of that Sena will loose his position

Sambha- We will see Pitashri

Duryodhan left the room

Krishna- Why you choose me

Arjun- Madhav when you are with us our victory is assured

Krishna bless Arjun and Krishna has choose his Sarthi Duryodhan and Shaknui return to Hastinapur with Narayani Sena

Precap- Kurukshetra & Ruels of war

Finally update Sorry guys I am updating after 6 Months I was busy with 2 internship which was completed 2 back and now I have finally posted this update I will try to be regular 10-12 Ch Max for this book

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