Yeh pyaar naa hoga kam (On Ho...

By PrakritiAkuli

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#TejRan, a happily married couple. They have one 2 years old daughter Kavya. They live with both of their par... More

Prologue
Character sketch and a brief
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Thank you πŸ™
Part - 9
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Shower your love
Part - 12
Pause
I will be back shortly
Thank you
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Hey!

Part - 10

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Disclaimer : This is a work of fiction. Any businesses or places, events or incidents, are fictitious. Any resemblance to actual incidents or actual events is purely coincidental.

P.S. Imagine all Teju's dialogue in a baby voice

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KK angrily : mujhe hospital ki CCTV footage check karni hai?

Receptionist: sir we can't allow this. We have some rules

KK yelled : jab meri biwi apne room se nikal rahi thi aur waha koi bhi nurse nahi tha attend karne me liye tab kaha tha aap logo ka rule?? Haan aise aap log khayal rakhte hai patient ka? Agar meri biwi ko kuch bhi hua na toh dekh lena kisiko nahi chorunga.

Meanwhile one nurse and wardboy come to KK

Nurse : sir hume mill gayi hai ma'am. Wo store room mein thi. But wo aa nahi rahi humare sath. Kisi Angel ke liye ro rahi hai.

Hearing this Karan asked the nurse to take him there. They didn't find her there. Karan was this close to burst out on the nurse, when they heard a soft sobbing sound.

KK softly : Laddoo!!

TK : Angel.. angel tum kaha chale gaye the?? 😭 Dekho na inha kitna andhera hai. Sab black black hai. Main aur bholu kitna darr gaye the. 🥺😭

Karan took her in his arms and told

KK : na bacha nahi rote. Aa. Main aa gaya na..

TK : hmm 🥺🥺

Then KK took her in arms and she had teddy in her hand.

He directly goes to the car with her in his arms.

TK : wow hum ghumi ghumi jayenge?

Karan nods. He makes Teju sit in the passenger seat with the teddy only. Then he drives the car towards their mantion.

In the mantion,

KP got a call from Adaa. She shared the whole conversation with Karan regarding the baby and talked about Teju an baby and the situation in hospital. They disconnected.

KP : iska matlab mera shaq sahi tha

KM : kaisa shaq ji?

KP narrated the whole matter.

TM and KM broke down listening this. All tge parents were angry on Karan but they thought to talk to him once he is in sense to be able to atleast listen them.

KM : maine apne bete ko ausi oarwarish toh nahi diya tha 🥺🥺 kya kar raga hai yeh ladka.

KP : aane do uss khotyea ko. Do char chittar padenge toh akkal thikane aa jayegi.

TP : nahi Satpal! Abhi kuch mat bol usse. Neeta, tum ekbaar naat karo usse. Woh tumhari baat kabhi nahi talta.

TM : haan main Sunny se baat karungi. Magar mujhe nahi kagta iss bar wo meri bhi baat sunega. Agar nahi suna toh?

TP : toh kya! Agar ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle toh?

KP : ungli tedhi jarni padti hai. 😎

KM : aaplog paheliya mat bujhaiye.  Saaf saaf bataiye kya karnevwake ho aaplog?

KP : kuch nahi pahele Neeta bhabi aap baat karo usse. Aur humari beti ki swagat ki taiari to karo koi. Wo log hospital se nikal chuke hai.

In the car,

TK : angel angel!!

KK : han bacha!

TK : hum kaha ja rahe hai?

KK : hum apne ghar ja rahe hai . Waha aapko aur bohot sari toys milega. Hum khub khelenge aur dher sari masti bhi karenge.

TK clapping : yaaayyyee

Karan smiled seeing her happy and enjoying.

Like this they reached mantion and Karan makes Teju come out from the car. They started going towards home. Teju was keenly obseving everything, garden, swing, gates, plants etc.. Seeing her looking at the things so keenly Karan thought she is trying to remember everything.

KK : kya hua bacha?

TK pointing towards swing : wo..👉

KK : wo kya baby?

TK shouted : jhulaaaaa. Mujhe jhula jhulna hai??

And saying this she ran towards the swing with her dearest bholu. Karan ran behind her. 

KK : Laddoo aramse bacha.. gir jayegi! Chot lag jayegi..

Teju did not listen and stumbled 2 3 times in stone but reached to swing soon. And sat there with her bholu.

TK : Angel hume jhula jhulao na ..

Karan goes behind the swing and starts to motion the swing little

TK : are baba itni dheere kyun kar rahe ho? Zor se jhulao na..

KK : nahi bacha .. chit lag jayegi aagar gir gayi toh..

TK : nahiiii girungi naa.. zor se karo aur zor se ..

KK : abhi nahi .. baad nein hum bohot achi tarha se jhulege. Thik hai?? I promise

TK : thik hai. Pinky promise (she forwarded her little finger)

KK strangles his little finger with her: pinky promise.

TK : yaaayyy..

She ran towards the plants and seeing them .

KK somehow managed to take her towards the door and rang the bell

All the parents were  on gate to welcome her. But again she got scared seeing them🙁

TK : hum inha kyun aaye hai angel?? 😠 Mujhe nahi jana andar .. hum jaha pahele the waha chalo.

She literally started to drag Karan from the door to outside. Karan tries to make her understand but he is fearing to say anything to her that may push her button and it can create pressure in her brain. He us seeing towards the parents helplessly.

Parents got sad seeing this. But TM wipes her  tears and thought

TM in mind : mujhe abhi sakhti se pesh ani padegi iske saath. Warna yeh aur bhi ziddi hoti jayegi aur jaldi se thik bhi nahi hogi..

TM shouted : bas.

Teju got scared and hided behind KK and hugged him from back.

TM : bas bohot hua tera.. abhi ke abhi andar aa.

TP : yeh kya kar rahi ho tum Neeta. Uski halat dekho. Wo iss halat mein nahi hai ki wo kuch samajh sake..

KM : haan Neeta. Usse aramse samjhana hoga.

KK : Aai please aap shant ho jaiye. Main usse samjhata hu. Aap log andar jaiye.

Karan could understand Teju was shivering and sobbing lightly clutching him from back.

TM : Nahi sunny. Iske sat abhi strictly pesh ani hi padegi. Nahi toh yeh ziddi banti jayegi aur thik bhi nahi ho payegi.

KK sternly  shouted : nahi aai. Uske sath koi bhi Shakti se pesh nahi ayega. Koi bhi nahi. Aap uski halat dekh rahe ho? Wo kaanp rahi hai darr ke maare. Agar aap log nahi chahte ki main usse leke kahi aur chala jau to please co-operate with me.

Their parents got shocked listening to him. Because he can never shout on TM.

KP : kya bakwas hai yeh? Meri bachi kahi nahi jayegi. Aur tu aise kaise baat kar raha hai apni aai se?

KK : thik hai.. toh please aaplog abhi andar jao. Main usse leke ata hu.

TP dragged TM and goes inside followed by KM and KP.

KP : dekh rahe ho Suneeta apke ladle ka behaviour? Bado se kaise baat karte hai yeh tameez bhi bhul gaya hai.

TP : tu chup kar. Hum sabko pata hai ki wo Teju ko leke pareshan hai. Aur Neeta , tumhe  kisne bola Teju ke sath strict hone se hi wo baat sunegi? Aab sab log meri baat dhyan se sun lo. Bhale hi Teju ko kuch yaad nahi hai par yeh sach toh nahi badlega ki Sunny Teju ka husband hai aur agar Sunny Teju ke liye koi faisla lega toh soch samajh ke hi lega so hum sab support karenge usse.

KP and TM : par...

TP : aur han koi bhi usse question nahi karega uski faisle ko lekar aur han, Teju ko hum waise hi treat karenge jaise ek Kavya ko treat karte hai.

KM : han .  Bhaisaab sahinkahe rahe hai.

TM : mujhe Sunny par pura bharosa hai. Par Teju ko samhalna muskil ho jayega.

KM : kuch nahi hoga.. hum sab haina hum sambhal lenge...

KP : han yeh bhi sahi hai.. chalo kuch khane ka banao. Bhukh lagi hai ..

Here outside the house,

KK : Laddoo baccha ! Aapne aisa kyun kiya?

Teju sobbing and not looking towards KK. Karan held her chin softly and made her see towards him. He can see her red teary eyes.

TK : mujhe.. mujhe nahi jana unke paas .. wo log mujhe nahi pasand . (Says between her hiccups)

KK : aisa nahi kahate baccha. Unko kitna bura laga na aapne aisa kiya.

Teju nodded and held her ears with her head down.

Karan smiles and says : are tumhara Bholu kahan gaya?? Chalo jsse leke ghar mein chalo nahi toh sara khana gayab ho jayega..

Saying this he wiped her tears.

TK : haaawww.. nahiii mujhe toh bohot bohot bohot bukh lagi hai.

She tried to explain her 'bohot' with ber hand spreading more and more.

KK laughs at her and give her bholu which was laying just there in the land.

KK : toh chale?

Teju nodded and held Karan's hand tightly and started walking following him.

They went inside and saw the parents are waiting for them.

Karan saw them and took Teju to their room. He take out a flowral dress for her and told her to change. Till then he will go and come back with yummy foods.

Teju happily nodded and started to change there itself.

KK just smacked his own forhead and went out of the room.

KK in mind : abhi wo aisi harqatein karti rahegi. Mujhe apne aapko control karna padega.

Karan then goes towards aai and stand infront of her with his hands in his ears.

TM moved from there.

KK runs towards her and hugged her tightly and sobbing slightly.

KK crying : sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry

TM crying :  bas sunny. Tujhe sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

KK : nahi aai. I am sorry. Mujhe aapse aise baat nahi karna chahiye tha. Main aapko aapki beti se dur nahi kar raha hu. Bas wo abhi iss halat mein nahi hai isliye main bas thodi din ke liye mana kar raha hu. Phir hum dheere dheere usse samjhayenge na. Tab samajh jayegi.

TM : han mera bacha main janti hu. Aur tere Laddoo ko tujhse bahetar aur kaun sambhal sakta hai bol? Tu fikr mat kar. Hum sab tere sath hai. Tu jo bolega jaise bolega hum waisa hi karenge.

Karan hugs her tightly. And then parents goes to dinning table. And Karan took his and her food and went upstairs to their room.










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