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From Cook show to being married.. Life journey of Shivaangi and Ashwin... Behind screen... A Life journey... Daha Fazla

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1 - THE FIRST DAY
CHAPTER 2 - THE FIRST SHOOT
CHAPTER 3- THE UNEXPECTED FIRST DATE
CHAPTER 4 - THE HANGOUT
CHAPTER 5 - FIRST TIME PARING
CHAPTER 6 - confused feelings...
CHAPTER 7- WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?
CHAPTER 8 - MR . POSSESSIVE KUMAR
CHAPTER 9 - MR. Confused Kumar
SHALL I CONTINUE OR NOT?
CHAPTER 10 - UNKNOWN FEELINGS
CHAPTER 11 - First Heartbreak 💔
CHAPTER 12 - GUILTY FEELING
CHAPTER 13 - SURPRISE
CHAPTER 14 - JEALOUSY
CHAPTER 15- BREAK 💔
CHAPTER 17- SEARCHING HER
CHAPTER 18 - GAME STARTS NOW
CHAPTER 19 - CALM BEFORE STROM 🌪️🌪️🌪️
CHAPTER 20 - PACIFYING ROWDY ❣️
CHAPTER 21- PACIFYING ROWDY 2
CHAPTER 22 - MEMORIES BRING BACK
CHAPTER 23 - MBM 2
CHAPTER 24 - A LITTLE ROMANCE
CHAPTER 25 - posa posa...
CHAPTER 26
RECEPTION
THE END

CHAPTER 16 - GOOD BYE 💔

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Ashwin couldn't control his tears..  he didn't know how to react when he uttered those three words to her..

He was confused.. he questioned himself again and again..

Ashwin : Naa edhukku avata I love you nu sonna? Is it moment of weakness or i am really in love with her?

He grabbed his hair and pulled it in frustration...

Ashwin: oruvela enna thappa ninachuruppalo? It's a mistake theriyama solitannu sonna enna solluva?

Suddenly he heard someone knocking the door...

Shivu: Ashwineey kadhava thoranga...  Na unga kitta konjam pesanum..

Ashwin don't know what to do.. if he opened the door and she will definitely ask why he said I love you..
& He didn't have a answer for that question..

Shivu: please kadhava thoranga...

He sighed and opened the door... She hugged him tightly but he stood without any reaction...

She cupped his face and asked,

Shivu: solitu yen ipdi odi vandhutinga ? Naa evlo bayandhuta theriyum ah? Ennachu ungalukku?

He removed her hands from his cheeks and moved into the room to balcony..Shivu followed him,

Shivu: Ella prachahanayum seekiram mudinjuruchu ashwineey.. unga fan's kandippa ungala purinjupaanga..

But he didn't said anything.. she moved infront of him and tried to cup his face but he turned his face aside making her confused...

Shivu: ahmmm .. ash

Ashwin: it's a mistake...

Shivu: adhaan naanum solra... Neenga stage la pesunadhu oru mistake.. oru slip up avlodhaa...

Ashwin: Naa stage la pesunadha sollala.

Shivu: apram?

Ashwin: ippo Naa Velila un ta onnum sonnaney adhu..

Shivu froze in shock and unknowingly tears started to form in her eyes... She couldn't control her sob when Ashwin whispered I love you maa.. she thought he finally realised his love for her but ..

Now he is saying it's a mistake? A mistake? A slip up?

Ashwin: I know Naa apdi solirka koodadhu.. but even I don't know WHY I said that... You & me is not gonna happen..

Shivu whispered, "why?"

Ashwin: why na ? Enna solradhu... You just attracted to me you know by my looks.. it couldn't be love..  I mean..

Shivu: wait... Ippo neenga enna soninga?

Ashwin: ahmm.. couldn't be love..

Shivu Adhukku munnadi.

Ashwin: You just attracted to me..

He widened his eyes and realised what he said...

Shivu: a face attraction? Enna paatha ungalukku epdi theriyudhu? Ah..

Ashwin: maa apdi mean pannala maa..

Shivu: vera Epdi mean paninga? Ah..

Ashwin: maa Naa...

She grabbed his collar and shouted at him...

shivu: enough.. enough... Ini oru vaartha oru vaartha pesadhinga... You just literally labelled my love for you as just an attraction? Avlo kevalama theriyudha enna paatha?

Ashwin: maa naa apdi mean pannala .. Naa solla vandhadhey vera ma...

Shivu: podhum Ellam podhum .. Idhukkku mela ennala tolerate panna mudiyadhu... Mudichukkala ellathayum ingaye mudichukkala.. ini nee yaaro Naa yaro..

Ashwin: maa.. Naa..

Shivu: neenga mistake ku sollirndha kooda enakku Ivlo valichurukadhu... Vinay appavey sonna.. nambadha nambadha nu ... Naandha kekkala muttal..

She smacked her forehead in frustration...

He tried to touch her hands but she backed away from him...

Shivu: don't touch me.. en manasula oru oorathula oru chinna nambikka irundhuchu.. enikkachu en feelings ah neenga purinjupingannu but ippo .. ini namma kulla Edhum illa .. we are done... Good bye..

She tried to leave from there but Ashwin got hold on her arms...

Ashwin: Shivaangi...

She pushed him aside & went from there...

Ashwin shouted in anger and braked everything in room...

Ashwin: ayyoo... Ippo Naa enna pandradhu.. Ava poita enna vittu poita...

That goodbye was echoing in his ears again and again... He looked around the room and saw alcohol bottle & took it & chunked everything in bottom sip.. he wants to forget everything..  when he finished the bottle..  he went to balcony and saw Shivu was crying in garden.. he lost his consciousness and fell asleep on balcony....

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OUTSIDE:

Kaadhal illai ithu kaamam illai
Intha uravuku ulagathil peyarillaiii

A single tear dropped from both of their eyes .. they opened their eyes and looked into each other for long time 💕... But suddenly Ashwin jerked away from her & ran towards to his bedroom and locked his room door,
Leaving bewildered shivaangi near swimming pool...
Everyone one was confused what just happened?

Everyone rushed towards shivaangi who is standing like a statue in garden.  

Rakshan: thangam ennachu ma?

Shivaangi still standing like a statue without replying to him,

Sunita hold shivaangi's shoulder and shook her ,.

Sunita: ey Shivaangi enna aachu pesu?

Shivaangi came back to this world, looked around for Ashwin but he's now where her, she realised he really ran from there, she started to run towards his room,

Again everyone tried to go behind her, but this time Sunita & Shakthi stopped them,

Shakti:iruga... irunga.. irunga ... Ellarum enga poringa?

Pugal: illa da papa .. .

Sharath: illa da papa thaniya poirukkala adhaa...

Sunita: dei part time paithiyakara , couples naduvula nee poi enna pudunga pora?

Mani: apdi kelu di en chella kutty...

Hussain: Adhellaam Avanga pesikuvaanga... Ellarum poi thoongunga...

Raksha: illa da....

Hussain: experience la solra... Vaanga polam...

Bala: Avanga solradhum sarithaan.... Maapilaya Papa paathukkuva...vaanga namma poi thoongala...

Shakti: sari ellarum guest house kelambunga....

Pugal:  guest house ku edhukku da?...

Mani: Ada loosu payaley... evanlaam epdi kalyanam panni pulla pethaan?

Shakti: avangalukku privacy venumla.. chumma noi noi nu Kelvi kekama guest house ponga ellarum... Shameless fellows...

Sharath: dei thakkali chedi..  un madaikkulla ivlo arivu irukaa daa... Nee oru village vingyani da...

Shakti: enna moonjikku munnadi pugaldha enakku adhu pidikkadhu...

Mani: dha chi... Vaanga enakku thookam vardhu... Pasi vera edukkudhu...

Pugal was silent all along and lost in his thoughts...

Bala: Ada sooniyame... Inga evlo kalavaram nadakkudhu ... Ana unakku epo paathalum soru, thookam... Innoru dhadava sotha pathi pesuna suduthanni EDUTHU moonjila ootiduva...

Mani akka 's eyes widened at mentioning "hot water",

Mani: edhe..  marubadiyum sudu thanniyaa? Aala vidunga da saami...

With That she ran towards guest house,

Everyone laughed at her, Sharath asked Hussain,

Sharath: epdi dha indha sooniyatha samalikkirungalo?

Hussain laughed and said, "kashtam dhaa... aana ivala adakka ipa kidachurukka orey Vali sudu Thani mattum dhaa "

Everyone laughed at that,

but I didn't reach pugal's ear,

Rakshan saw pugal lost in his thoughts…. Shake his shoulder, “dei pugalu enna aachu? Enna yosikira”

Pugal shaked his head,
Pugal: onnula da … vaanga polaa..

Everyone arranged sleeping bags in hall to sleep together & chatting, but pugal still lost in his thoughts sitting far away from them facing garden,
Rakshan noticed that, goes beside him, put his hands on his shoulder, sat beside him
Rakshan: enna machan romba theevirama yosichutu irukka?

Pugal: manasu edho pannudhu macha … edho thappa nadakkapodhunnu thonudhu…

Rakshan: idha paaru pugal… couples kulla la sandalla sagajam…  adhoda ashwin naala thangam kooda pesama irukka mudiyadhu… avan ipo theliva illa … adhanaala dha avan papa ta kova patutaan… nee vena paaru kaalaila rendu perum normal aagiruvaanga…

Pugal : apdi nadandha santhosam dhaa…

Rakshan: nee edhayum ninachu kolambadha … vaa thoongalaam…

Pugal:mmm… thappa edhum nadakaadhullA?

RAKSHAN: adhellaam onnu nadakadhu da... Vaa..

Everyone slept peace fully not knowing the upcoming strom,
Rakshan opened his eyes felt heavy in his stomach ,&
Saw sarath sleeping with legs on him, he rolled sarath aside, saw it was 11’o clock,
Rakshan: 11 mani aachu… innuma ivanuga thoonguraanuga…ivanugallem manusha jenmam dhana?

Rakshan saw pugal sleeping on stomach in sofa, he waked pugal up ,

Pugal: dei machan… endri da 11 mani aachu..

Pugal opened his eyes & saw rakshan , the first thought crossed his mind is his papa & hi maapla,

Pugal: dei avangala poi paathiya ? enna pandraanga ? samaadhaanam aagitaangala?

Rakshan: poruma saami poruma… naaney ipo dhan endhiricha … innum yaarum endhirikkala..

Everyone got up & freshened up,

Mani: dei vaanga da… en thambi yum avan aalum enna pandraangannu paapom…

Everyone agreed for that,
Sharath suddenly shouted stop,

Hussian: enna da?

Sharath: illa … avasiyam poi paathu than aganumaa?oru phone panni kettutu polamey...

Rakshan: en da?Inga irukura veetukku phone ah?

Sharath: adhu vandhu….. avanga…. Thaniya…. Nightu...

Sunitha, mani  & bala understood what he is trying to say,

sunitha: adei  part time paithiyakara, ava china ponnu da…

bala: dei paradesi naaye… ava en thangachi da…

mani: seruppu piya piya adichu puduvan naaye… en thambi ya pathi enna ninachutu irukka? Avanga rendu perum kolandha pullinga  da…
Sharath raised his eyebrows,

sharath mv: edhu avanga kolandha pullingala?evanuga ennallam pandraanugannu rendra varusama naa paathutu dhana irukka… kolandha pullaingalaamnla…

rakshan , pugal , shakthi & hussain was confused & don’t know what they are talking about,

rakshan: edha pathi da pesuraanga? onnumey puriyala ye .

Pugal: ila , enaakku puriyala?

Shakthi: ennavaa irukkum?

Hussain: ey choti , edha pathi pesuringannu solitu pesuninganna nalla irukkum…

Sharath,sunitha,mani,bala face palmed themselves,

Sunita: neengallam epdi oru kalyanam panni kolandha pethingannu theriyala..

Shakthi: hello, naa single…

Mani & sharath: apo nee sathyama kadaisi varaikum single dhaa..

Pugal: sari apdi enna dhanda pesikitinga?

Sharath mv: ayyayo… ivanukku namma enna somnomnu therinja adippaaney… sari samaalipom

Sharath : ahh… adhu vandhu…

Rakshan: dei naaye uruttama unmaya sollu…

Pugal: sollu da…

Hussain: ivan mulikira muliye sari ilaye...

Sharath mv:kandupudichuruvaanga pola irukkey… divert panni viduvom…

Sharath: dei enna ellarum enna valachu valachu question kekuringa? Modhalla avanga rendu perum enna aanngannu paapom vaanga…

Everyone went inside beach house , neared ashwin room,

Sharath mv: kadavule , paapaka koodadha dha edhum paathura koodadhu paa…

Rakshan opened door , everyone shocked seeing room……..

Continued….





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