ANASTASIA STEELE
Okay, not a bad name, but WHAT IS THAT LAST NAME?!
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Ana is shown to be a determined but shy and kind-hearted person.
Because god forbid that we have a confident and kind of cruel female character, am I right?
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She loves books (particularly British Literature) and is studious-
*In British accent*
Why, hello, Madam Anastasia-who-to-be-quite-frank-is-a-terribly-written-character-with-the-cursed-nerd-stereotype-Steele! It is a pleasure to meet you.
*Ding*
-maintaining a 4.0 GPA in college.
Well, ain't she a special little snowflake! (it would be impressive if she was a well written character) God, barely five minutes in and this is already making me wanna vomit. 10 sins for just how utterly bad this is.
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Also, she tends to be highly insecure about her appearance and does not realize her natural beauty.
Excuse me, ma'am; but what is there to be insecure about?
You got good grades, a fairly decent face, the chance of a very good job depending on your brain and even kinda decent looks : HOW- NO, WHY ARE YOU INSECURE?! (I am aware that body dysmorphia is a thing however I am done with "You Don't Know You're Beautiful" thing)
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She hates attention and like to live a humble life-
Ah, yes. The classic 'nerdy girl stereotype' in the flesh.
*Ding*
- so she had a hard time adapting with who had such an expensive daily life.
Okay.
So, till now she's a humble, smart, shy, caring, good old Y/n stereotype.
This deserves three sins for just how bad it is.
Congrats.
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It is mentioned she is a workaholic and hate when Christian said she doesn't need a job after they got married.
See what I meant by the classic Y/n stereotype?
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She is described by Christian as beautiful, very attractive, and alluring.
It is obvious that Christian has little to none taste in women.
* 50 dings*
Ana appears to have very little fashion sense.
That's true. And because of that I'm adding three sins!
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She is shown to be rather insecure about being slim, pale, and scruffy.
Despite millions of women wanting to be EXACTLY THAT.
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Ana has a small frame and a delicate profile, upturned nose, and soft full lips. She has flawless pale skin, a beautiful body with assets, and is slender and petite.
"I aM nOt pReTtY" she says, despite the above two sentences.
*20 dings*
+1 for Ray's training doing wonders for her personality
Shoutout to @Starlight-Sparks for reminding me of this sin.
TOTAL SINS : 102 .
SENTENCE/WORD: BDSM bottom.
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