The poll results stated that I should start writing about the adoption track. So here I am with my new write up.
So here is my opinion about this certain track.
Writer's Opinion about track : Even though I have many complaints I agree to this one thing with the makers or in a way with Neil if the reaction was in a way justified. Even if we face that type of situation in our life. Suddenly something comes up in front of us for which we have been kept in dark since long we will also be shattered. So Neil shattering is justified. But misbehaving with Akshara who has no fault in all this was just offendable act for me. Even Abhimanyu misbehaved with her along with the so called mother India who was before that all in praises for Akshu.
Now coming to the chapter :
The story starts with the scene in which Akshu founds that Neil is in Birla House and she rushes their to console him as she was also feeling bad for Neil. Even though she was not responsible for all the happenings but in a way she got hitched to all this commotion due to the good for nothing sister of hers who has a habbit of poking nose in every matter even if it concerns her or not. And she very well knew that if Neil was snatching the concerned file which has adoption papers from her then Aarohi is related to this in some way or the other.
Akshu comes to Goenka House amd then taking the plate of kachori decorated it with smiley using ketchup which she knew was Neil's favorite. She forwarded it to Neil who turned his face. Aarohi who saw all this told Akshu to let him be as she thought that in front of Akshu ka pyaar Neil will bent and all her sajish will fail.
Ar : Akshu use man nahi hai to mat force kar na use.
Ak : Chup kar Aarohi tujhse better jaanti hu main Neil ko. (To Neil) Neil please.
N (Jerking off Akshu's hands) : Bhabhi please. Nahi jaanti hai aap mujhe. Agar jaanti hoti to aapko pata hota ki meri takleef thodi si kam ho jaati agar... Ya to aap mujhe puri baat batati ya kuch bhi nahi batati. Lekin aapne to dono me se kuch bhi nahi kiya na.
Ak : Neil aisa nahi hai Neil. Tum please ek baar meri baat sun lo.
N : Mujhe aapki koi baat nahi Sunni hai na hi samajhni hai.
Abhimanyu who reached their some time back saw all this but he completely ignored Akshu and directly came to Neil as at the moment he was mumma's boy and seeing everything with just her maa's point of view and just like her even he was thinking Akshara to be responsible for all these things.
(From here story goes to my imagination)
Abhimanyu anyhow convinced Neil to come with him to Birla House but he not even once told Akshu to come with him. And went completely ignoring her. Akshu who was accompanying them till the door step was shattered to the core and turned to look at her maternal family who were also having questions in their eyes. As by now Aarohi has told them that Akshu poked her nose in a matter which was hidden from a longer period of time and the result is all the current happenings.
Ma : Jab koi Raaz chhupa tha to tumhe kya jarurat thi Akshara in sab baaton me padne ki. Are nayi family thi apne rishton ko better se best banane ki bajaye tumne dukhti nabz par hi haath rakh diya.
Ak : Bade Papa ye aap kya keh rahe hai. Maine aisa kya kar diya jo aap mujhse is tarah se baat kar rahe hai.
Ma : Aarohi ne bata diya hai hume sab kaise wo raaz to itne time se chhupa hua tha Teri wajah se is tarah sabke saamne aaya. Ab agar bigada sab kuch tune hai to sambhalna bhi tujhe hi hoga. Jaa apne ghar aur sambhaal sab kuch.
Ak : Aap to bahut achhe se jaan ne lage hai Bade Papa mujhe. Itne time se aap mere guardian bane huye hai aapko to itna yakeen hona chahiye tha ki aapki Akshu aisa kuch bhi nahi karegi. Lekin khair jab bura waqt aata hai tabhi pata chalta hai ki kaun apna hai aur kaun apne ki bhesh me dikhawa kar raha hai. Waise ek baat sahi kahi aapne jo cheez bigadi hai use sudharna to mujhe hi hai.
Before going Akshu turned one last time to see the faces of all who were till now dear to her and saw Aarohi smirking. And then she left from their.
Her face was tear stricken and she was unable to see the road. She heard someone whistling from behind (Akshu even though was shattered but still her presence of mind was intact so she turned the voice recorder of her phone on ) and then she turned to look and found Aarohi there.
Ar : Teri problem pata hai kya hai. Tu sabko apna maan ne lagti hai aur sabke dard me dukhi hoti hai. Aur in sab me khud ke baare me sochna bhul jaati hai. Are Akshu reality me jeena seekh le ye 21st century hai yaha log sabse pehle khud ke baare me sochte hai. Teri tarah mahaan koi nahi hai. Manjari aunty agar itni hi mahaan hoti na to Neil ka sach itne time tak nahi chhupati. Aaj dekh na ye sach saamne aaya to jaroor lekin usme bhi wo mahaan ban gayi kyu ki sab sach jaan ne ke baad bhi unhone apne pati ke nazayaz aulaad ko apnaya. Ek tarah se unhone us aurat se badla bhi le liya uske bete ko apne pita ka naam nahi milne de kar par phir bhi wo to mahaan hi hai na. Aur tera Abhimanyu agar itna hi tujhse pyaar karta na to in sabse tu kitna affect ho rahi hai wo ye jaan leta teri aankhon me dekh kar hi. Par dekh na apni maa ke aankhon me aansu kya dekh liya usne to ye bhula hi diya ki tu bhi uski kuch lagti hai.
Ak : (After hearing all this Akshu came to her aid as now she got that no one is coming to defend her) Baat to teri sahi hai Aarohi. Sach me koi nahi hai mera apna par dekh na jise main humesha galat samajhti rahi wo hi meri well wisher nikali. Tune agar ye kaha ki tu humare rishte ko mauka dena chahti hai to tune apni baat ko dil se nibhaya hai. Main hi galat thi mujhe hum dono behno ke beech me Abhimanyu naam ke kaante ko aane hi nahi dena chahiye tha. Jab se wo aaya hai tab se sab kuch aur bigad gaya humare beech me. Lekin ab mujhe hosh aa gaya hai ab main in sab baaton pe jyada dhyaan nahi dungi. Thank you aaru thank you so much mujhe moral support Dene ke liye.
Ar (even though was shocked to see this sudden change in Akshu's demeanor came in her words) : Chal der se hi sahi tujhe hosh to aaya. Lekin tujhe pata hai use humare raste se nikalne ka intezaam maine pehle se hi kar rakha hai. Wo file to tujhe pata hai ki maine hi nikalwayi hai waha se lekin in sab me pata hai fasaya kise maine tujhe taaki tujhe bhi nazar aa jaaye ki wo koi pyaar vyaar nahi karta hai tujhse bas dhong karta hai tujhe apna samajhne ka. Ab dekh uski asaliyat aa gayi na tere saamne. Aur waise man to nahi hai par ek secret bata deti hu wo jo Abhimanyu hai na bahut shauk hai use dusro ke maamle me naak laane ka. Kitna achha mauka mil raha tha mujhe wo Rudra mujhe apne hospital me bade post par rakhne wala tha lekin us Abhimanyu ki wajah se mere haath se wo mauka nikal gaya. Ab wo in sab me vyast rahega to uska dhyaan meri taraf se hat jaayega aur main ab finally successful ban paaungi jo ki uski wajah se nahi ban paa rahi thi kyu ki wo khud se jyada superior kisi aur ko dekh hi nahi sakta hai.
Ak : Achha sabak sikhaya tune use. Chal ab main chalti hu. (Turning off the recorder when she saw that Aarohi has all her attention in her talks she left)
After this instead of going to Birla House she went to Birla hospital. And went to that area where she to ask for the file in the morning.
She asked the official there that did anyone came to ask him about who has collected the file. The man there informed her that Abhimanyu sir had come there but left without hearing his full sentence.
Ak : Aapne kya bataya unhe.
Man : Mam main abhi bata hi Raha tha ki aap aayi thi file lene lekin mere dene se pehle hi mujhe call aa gaya aur mujhe jaana pada. Phir yaha nurse Reema thi meri absence me unse puchna hoga ki ye file kisne collect ki hai. Lekin sir bina sune hi chale gaye yaha se.
Ak : Suniye agar aapko main kal call karungi to kya aap meri help karne aayenge. Actually in sab me bina wajah mera naam fas chuka hai. Aur main sab taraf se guilty lag rahi hu agar galti meri hoti to naam aata to koi farq nahi padta lekin bina kisi galti ke guilty bana diya jaana to sahi nahi hai na.
The man who sympathised with her agreed to help her.
Then she went to singhaniya mansion as Naksh had left the keys with her. After going their she found that her phone has turned off. So she plucked in her charger. And then sat on the sofa thinking about the day's happenings. Being exhausted she slept without even giving a thought to her off phone.
Abhimanyu after knowing the half truth from the official suddenly remembered about Akshara and thought of confronting her. So he came to Birla House thinking that she will be in their room but finding it empty he remembered that he had left her in Goenka House so he went there.
He knocked the door. Kairav who came to drink water was surprised to hear the knock so he opened the door and found Abhimanyu there.
Ab : Akshu kaha hai ? Baat karni hai usse.
K : Akshu to shaam me hi nikal gayi Birla House ke liye. Usne kaha ki jo cheezein bigad gayi hai use wo sudharegi.
Ab : Sudharegi to tab na jab ghar aayegi. Lekin agar wo yaha nahi hai Birla House me nahi hai to wo hai kaha?
Abhimanyu began calling her to find her phone switched off. Now he became anxious as to where Akshu could go. He sat with Kairav and started calling all her friends whom were supposed to help Akshu. And then when everyone denied seeing or hearing anything from Akshara. Both him and Kairav left to search for Akshu and searched in every heck and corner for her. But they found her nowhere.
Next day Morning :
Abhimanyu and Kairav after searching whole night for Akshu came back to Goenka House. Seeing them all tired Bade Papa enquired and was informed that Akshu is nowhere found.
Here in Singhaniya mansion Akshu woke up and then she remembered to switch her phone on to find it filled with many messages as well as calls from Abhimanyu and Kairav, from Goenka house landline also as well as Birla House landline. She instead of calling on anyone's cell phone called on Goenka House landline which was picked up by Aarohi.
Ar : (Pretending) Akshuuuuu. Kaha hai tu. Sab pareshan ho rahe hai. Khoj rahe hai tujhe. Itna irresponsible koi hota hai kya tu bina kisi ko inform kiye kaha chali gayi hai.
Ab (came there and snatched the phone from her hands) : Kaha ho tum Akshu.
Phone conversation:
Ak : Yaad karne ki wajah.
Ab : What do you mean by yaad karne ki wajah. Bina kuch kahe koi aise jaata hai kya. Ye jaante huye ki in sab ke liye tum responsible ho sar chhupa ke baith gayi. Are kam se kam apni safai to de deti ki jo bhi kiya kyun kiya. Lekin nahi tum to bas gayab hi ho gayi ho.
Ak : SAFAI huuhhh... Haa safai to deni hai. Lekin mujhe nahi. As of now be rest assured jinda hu main. Aur aa rahi hu kuch time me. Jis jis ko bula sakte ho bula lo jinko bhi khud ko defend karna hoga. Kyu ki is baar Akshu shaant nahi rahegi. Har kisi se har baat ka jawaab legi. And then she cut the phone call.
Abhimanyu was shocked to hear the tone of Akshu. When Bade Papa asked him he told about the conversation.
Ma : Ye kis lehze me baat kar rahi thi Akshu. Aur kis se kya jawaab chahiye use. Itna bada sach saamne aaya hai. Sab itne pareshan hai aur yoon gayab hoke unki pareshani badha kar ab jawaab lena chahti hai.
Ab : Bade Papa ek baar use aane dijiye phir dekhenge kya baat hai.
He then dialled at Birla House and called them all to Goenka House.
Precap : Akshu confronts all. And then breaks all the ties with them.
Everyone feels guilty.
Chalo yaar 2200+ words likh daale.
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