Aspara The Legendary Super Sa...

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Follow the journey of my Oc Aspara, the 1st child of Bardock, into many trials and adventures which will cont... Lebih Banyak

A Legendary Birth
Double or Nothing
Frieza Day
The Challenge of the Prince
The Ceremony
Another Rival ?
The Sibling
The Bardock Crew
Let's go into Space!
Playtime on the Bug planet
The two Brother's
Saibaiman study and Kinda Siblings Bonding ?
Unexpected Visit
Not A Chapter
Raditz The Determined
Kakarot's Fate
A Perfect Execution?
The End of an Era
Not A Chapter Pt.2
First Alien Contact
Rude Awakening
Settling in and...who's this guy?
Luck isn't Gine's friend
Not a Chapter Pt.3

Fights aren't for babies

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𝙿𝚕𝚊𝚗𝚎𝚝 𝚅𝚎𝚐𝚎𝚝𝚊, 𝙱𝚊𝚛𝚍𝚘𝚌𝚔 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝙶𝚒𝚗𝚎'𝚜 𝙷𝚘𝚞𝚜𝚎, 𝙰𝚐𝚎 734, 𝙹𝚞𝚗𝚎 12𝚝𝚑, 9:00 𝙰𝚖

"WHAT?!?!" An almost 4 yrs old Aspara's scream of terror was heard as her parents had asked her something she did NOT think she would ever have to do...

Babysitting Raditz...

Oh. My. Kami.

"You cannot be serious Mother! I have training to do!" She complained, outraged

"You can train later, it's only the rare times where me with your Father have to go and cannot have him with us, so, because you are never spending time with your little brother, today you will have to watch him... you can even take him to the castle and let him play with Kassava if you want and if your training really cannot wait a day, you can train with Vegeta while you two keep an eye on him"

"...Fine..." She reluctantly agreed as her Mother sighed in exasperation at her obstinate daughter over training

"I'm ready" Said Bardock, entering the hallway "I know that you really don't like your brother but still try to keep him alive in the meantime..." Bardock advises as Gine sighed again

"Well, we are leaving, you can either stay here or go to the castle but be back at 9 PM to put Raditz in bed alright? Have a good day and please take care of your little brother for us!" Gine said as they flew away, leaving an annoyed Aspara alone with a 7 month Raditz just looking at her with a weird look and his humongous hair

"...You really look ridiculous with that hairstyle you know? Seriously, when you become an adult, I am sure you will be able to hide 3 children in your hair, and it will be absolutely not good for fighting and when you're already a weakling... it doesn't look good for your fighting career sincerely... I suggest you just work in the kitchen like Mother so you could at least be useful for once and not waste my time..." She spoke seriously at her younger brother, trying to get him to understand how annoying it was to be in his presence, but Raditz didn't understand a single thing of what she said and just yawned...

"Tch... that's right you're too young and not smart enough to understand me... fine, I will remind you when you're older how annoying you are... Unless you prove your usefulness... But I am really not hopeful... Anyway, let's go to the castle before I die of boredom" She said as she picked up Raditz and locked him in her armpits as she locked the door and blasted away in the direction of the castle, with her annoying little brother already crying...

9:15 𝙿𝚖

Aspara had arrived at the castle where she was supposed to meet her friends, who were already fighting

She let fall the 'bag of potatoes' she had with her beside the lake as she observed their battle

Vegeta was throwing fast punches at Komatsu, who the latter was avoiding his attacks rather easily as she tried a 360 kick with her leg on the side of his head but Vegeta ducked beneath it just in time and succeeded at grabbing her leg and with a yelp of surprise of Komatsu, she was thrown like a hammer into the hard ground with a *BOOM*

"Ha! In the ground once again! Admit defeat~ you can't beat me, girl" He taunted as the ground where Komatsu was buried suddenly exploded upwards with a barely bruised Komatsu smirking "It was kinda pathetic this mighty throw of yours, I barely felt it, reassure me, you can do better right?" She asked as she rotated her shoulder

"Oh, it was just a breakfast, now, if you want the dinner I will gladly oblige" He said as he flew in the air with Komatsu following him

"Are you ready for the showdown?" Vegeta asked as he got in preparation for his Galick Gun

"Oh~ I am more than ready" Komatsu said as she ignited her ki at the max and got into a new stance with her arm to her sides as she flipped her right arm one time like a bird as her right hand was enveloped with bright purple color, then she proceeded to do the same with her left arm as she then pulled both her arms back and extended both of her palm as it got even brighter

Finally, she made one giant flap forward as a giant ki wave of orange ki suddenly flew towards Vegeta as she announced her attack "PHŒNIX BREATH!"

"GALICK GUN!"

Both of their attacked then collided between each other as the winds sped up and Raditz got blown away, and with a sigh of exasperation made by Aspara, she teleported and intercepted him just in time before he fell into the lake

After two minutes of struggle, Vegeta was starting to get the upper hand

"I think this is the end of our battle!" Vegeta announced, smirking as he increased his attack but he was so in his instant victory that he missed Komatsu's smirk as she raised her right arm, disconnecting it from her attack and weakening the flow of ki, bringing it closer as an image of sword appeared just beside her right arm as she screamed her final attack

"EXCALIBUR!" Komatsu screamed and swung her right arm downwards in a arc motion and literally cut through both of the attacks with ease as Vegeta got a shocked expression as his eyes widened and he teleported away from the attack's path and they all looked to see it cut through a mountain and disappeared in the distance

"Surprised? It's my secret technique that I only use when I need to kill my opponent, but don't worry, I didn't wanted to cut you in half, I just wanted to test your reflexes and I assumed you would dodge that slow throw" Komatsu shrugged unconcerned as Vegeta's eyebrow twitched in annoyance

"Would you at least not go all out so close to him?" Aspara came flying down beside the two with her brother hanging limply in her arms like a bah of potatoes "You kinda made him fly and I don't want to be forbidden from my training because I let him drown..."

It was at Vegeta's turn to shrug "he doesn't have to be so close to us when we are training that's all, it's his fault, if he want to be so close to us, he will have to face the consequences" he said as he got naked and jumped in the lake, with Komatsu following just behind

"Tch, I guess it's me that has to deposit you to the castle because it does not seem like these two-" *sounds of fighting and splashing* "-will do it and I REALLY don't want to be forbidden of training if you somehow got in our fighting" Aspara finished as she got inside of the castle to take him to Queen Kassava

"Oh hi, long time no see, sorry we do not see each other very often, how are you?" Queen Kassava greeted her

"Hi Kassava, and I'm fine, we were just bringing him to you so he do not get caught in our fighting or I will get grounded..." Aspara pouted a little as she dropped Raditz to the floor

"Well, I will keep an eye on him until you and Komatsu return to your houses, until then I hope you have a good afternoon" Kassava said as she nodded in thanks and rejoined the other's...

"..."

"And someone drowned the forest... great. Why do I have a weird sense of déjà-vu... oh yeah I did it too ahahahah" Aspara laughed awkwardly to herself as she got to the others

"Alright, who stole my thing? Because drowning the forest is kinda MY thing so I have the right to copyright the culprit" Aspara joked

"Hey! It's not my fault Vegeta cheated and was hiding in the lake! I had to make him visible somehow!"

"Well, you didn't have to explode HALF OF THE LAKE"

"So you have to play fair next time and not hide like a coward! Maybe I will not have to do something so extreme!"

"How dare you-" They didn't have to finish the argument as they both took a big ki blast in the face that got them splashing back into the lake

"AHAHAHAHAH!" Aspara went into a convulsion of laughter as they emerged of the lake with a dark glare on their faces directed at Aspara

"Komatsu... What do you say we play the beat up Aspara game?" Vegeta proposed, smirking with revenge

"Oh~ I like this game~~" Komatsu purred as they flew towards Aspara as the latter realized what inevitable doom was coming straight for her as she speed up in the forest at full speed

"YOU WILL NEVER CATCH ME ALIVE!"

"Come back here!"

"NEVER!"

This is how this absolutely normal day of training went

//Power levels//

Aspara : 13.225
Vegeta : 9.500
Komatsu : 7.548
Raditz : 273

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