OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING...

By virangna_2005

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BASED ON SHOW PANDYA STORE, THIS STORY IS A PARALLEL WORLD OF SHIVI..... DO READ TO SEE WHAT WOULD HAVE HAPPE... More

PART 1: SECRET
CHANGES
PART 2: RELATIONS
PART 3: NAATAK
PART 4: WHATSAPP WALA PYAAR
PART 5: DEV-RISHITA
PART 6: SORRY
PART 7: SHAADI
PART 8: DEALING WITH FAMILY
PART 9: HOW TO MANOFY BHABHI
PART 10: RISHITA'S DOUBT
PART 11: KIDNAPPED
PART 12: SHIVI IN JUNGLE
PART 13: TIME TRAVEL
PART 14: FIRST KISS
PART 15: DEV'S REVENGE
PART 16: LOCKET PLAYS CUPID
PART 17: SHIRT KA CHAKKAR
PART 18: PARATHA DID POL-KHOL
PART 19: FIGHT
PART 20: THE ONE
PART 21: YOUR CONSENT MATTERS
PART 22: BACK TO THAT DAY
PART 23: EVIL PLANS
PART 24: CONFESSION
PART 25: CONFESSION 2
PART 26: DATE
PART 27: ACCIDENT
PART 28: FEAR
PART 29: CONDITION
PART 30: BLAME
PART 31: AN UNEXPECTED STEP
PART 32: ALLIANCE
PART 34: TRUTH 2
PART 35: REQUEST
HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!
BONUS 1.1: CONFLICTS
BONUS 1.2: CAN'T STAY WITHOUT YOU
2022 Wattys!!!

PART 33: TRUTH

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"pandya pariwaar ne jo mujhe pe illzaam lagaye ha vo sahi hai....." says raavi shocking prafulla.

Pr: (shocked) ........jhut kyu bol rhi hai.....

Ra: jhut nhi sach bol rhi hu maasi.....maine pariwaar ki jaan lene ki koshish ki thi.....

Pr: (shouts) Jhut bol rhi hai tu......tune nhi milaya koi zehr halwe me...

Ra: (retorts) nhi maasi.....maine hi uss halwe me zehr daal tha.....

Pr: (shouts) nhi tune zehr nhi daal.....

Ra: (yells) dala....

Pr: nhi dala

Sh: hn isne sab ke samane maani ye baat.....

Pr: tu chup reh.....koi baat nhi maani.....usne kuch nhi kiya.....inspector aap jaiye....

Ra: nhi maine hi dala that zehr usme....

Pr: nhi.....mujhe nhi pta tu jhut kyun bol rhi hai par tune aisa kuch nhi kiya......

Ra: nhi...maine hi kiya ye sab

Pr: (angrily) jhut mat bol raavi.....main jaanti ki tune koi zehr nhi milaya...

Su: (yells) aree agr isne nhi milaya toh kisne milaya?.....

Pr: (yells) maine.....

Prafulla subcontsiously blurts out this. And then her eyes widen in shock. All other looks her with 'caught you' look except tarun's parents who were shocked.

Pr: (nervously) m..mm...mer..mera matlab ki maine kaha na....ki raa-

Ra: (comes in front of prafulla) kitna jhut bolo ge maasi....yahan sab ko sab kuch pta hai......

Prafulla looks her horrified. Anita comes and stands beside her.

An: aapko kya laga aap ye khel kheloge aur kisi ko bhank bhi nhi lagegi.......

[a/n: italics is the flashback....]

While getting ready for party, anita got confused that the which ear ring she should wear. She thought to ask raavi. As she came to her door, her eyes fall on prafulla who was hiding something in pallu and going to the kitchen. She felt something awkward so she followed. As she reached the door of kitchen she heard prafulla saying 'ab tute ga shiva-raavi ka rishta'. As anita felt that prafulla is coming back, she hide behind the door.

An: (to herself) phui ne aisa kya kiya hoga ki.....

She goes inside and sees the tiffin of halwa and kheer. She realised that prafulla has surely done something to this. But before she could check or tell, raavi came down getting ready for the party. Anita tries to talk but raavi was in no mood.

Ra: agr pehle hi di ki baat sunli hoti toh.......

Sh: (comes forward).....(angrily) tujhe kya laga maami tu humaara rishta itni aasani se tod degi

Pr: (retorts) rehne de.....tu kabhi nhi karta raavi pe vishwaas agr anita tujhe sach na batati.....

An: (sarcastic chuckles) huh....yeh aapki galtfemi hai phui

Shiva holds raavi hand and looks at her with a slight smile. Raavi holds his hand tighter.

Rishita was immediately admitted to hospital. Gautum, shiva and anita accompanied.

As they reach hospital and rishita is taken inside,

An: (tensed) shiva mujhe-

Sh: pehle tu yeh bta kit u yahan kyun aayi....ghar me ruk jaati....

An: shiva, mera aana jaroori tha....mujhe kuch-

Before anita could complete, doctor came out of room. Everyone rushes to him. doctor told them that symptoms rishita is showing indicate that is consume some sort of position but may be in less quantity. They are treating her and will try to find what exactly happened. Everyone got confused.

Ga: aisa kaise ho sakta hai?....saara khana toh ghar pe bana tha......

Sh: bahar se bhi kuch nhi laaye the....

Dev: (tensed) pta nhi rishita ne kya kha liya.....itni laparvah kaise ho sakti hai vo bina dekh kuch bhi kha liye

Sh: khana toh sabne khaya.....iska matlab hai ki khaane me kisine zehr dala tha....

Ga: synthetic zehr ka asar bahut jaldi hota hai......matlab rishita behosh hone ke thodi derr pehle hi kuch khaya hai......

Sh: matlab party khatam hone ke baad....

Dev: matlab uss waqt jab rishita kitchen gyi thi phir raavi ke saath halwa leke lauti.....

Ga: hn sayad ussi time....

Dev: kahin uss halwe me toh-

Sh: (yells) dev.....

Dev: *flinched*

Sh: (seriously) tujhe pta bhi hai tu kya bol rha hai....vo halwa raavi ne banaya tha woh bhi especially dhara Bhabhi ke liye.....

Dev: sorry bhai vo tension me muh nikal...main bhi jaanta hu raavi aise nhi kar sakti....

Sh: hmm....

Ga: abhi doctor ko aane dete hai....tabhi sahi se pta chale ga ki baat kya hai....

Anita was listening to all this carefully. She was happy to see shiva's trust for raavi. Then she thought to test shiva's belief on raavi. Of course, she wanted best for her sister. So anita decided to let thing go and tell the truth when it's the best time. Her trance was broken by gautum.

Ga: anita tu chahe toh ghr jaa sakti hai.....hum hai yahan...

An: nhi nhi gautum...main rukti hu na.....

Almost after 30-40 min, doctor told pandyas that rishita is now okay. They conluded that it was poison only which made rishita like this and some quick test will show which kind of the poison was. Shiva called raavi and told that rishita is out of danger and asked them to be careful about poison at home.

After some 15-20 min, rishita gained consciousness. All went to her and doctor to went to do the check up.

Doc: mr. pandya...inka blood sample check karne ke baad hume ye pata chala hai ki jo synthetic poison inhone intake kiya tha vo kaafi kam quantity me inki body me gya hai.....isliye jayada dikkat nhi hui.....please be careful next time....aap inhe kal subh le ja sakte hai......

Doctor left.

Dev: rishita kya khaya tha tumne.....

Ri: maine toh sham se sirf juice piya dev....bas...maine toh party me khana bhi nhi khaya

Sh: juice toh maine bhi piya....kuch toh khaya hi hoga....tabhi aap body me zehr gya...

Dev: thoda yaad toh karo rishita......

An: party over hone ke baad.....(trying to make rishita speak about halwa)

Ri: (straining her mind).....uss time toh bas ek chamch halwa khaya tha jo raavi laayi thi vo....

Dev looked shiva shockingly who was also shocked.

Sh: nhi....bhabhi apne aur kuch bhi khaya hoga yaad karo...

Ri: nhi shiva....mujhe clearly yaad hai...

Dev: matlab-

Sh: (retorts) nhi.....maine tujhse pehle bhi kaha tha....raavi aisa nhi kar sakti......

Dev: par kya rishita aur doctor jhutt bol rhe hai.....main bhi raavi ko bachpan se jaanta hu.....lekin jo doctor aur rishita keh rahe hai uska kya.....ek baar confront karte hai na raavi ko....

Sh: (angrily)nhi....confront karne ka matlab hai shakk karna aur main shakk vahan aata hai jahan yakeen na ho.....mujhe meri raavi par pura yaakeen hai.....

Dev: aur agr ye yakeen tuta toh....

Sh: toh aaj ka din mera tere samne aakhiri din hoga

This statement shocked everyone there.

Ga: shiva ye kya bakwash hai....

Sh: nhi gaumbi....aaj mere pyaar aur bharose pe sawaal utha hai.....aur agr sach me raavi ne mera bharosa toda hai, jo ki main dawe se keh sakta hu kin hi toda, toh mujhe aap sab ko apni sakal dikhane ka koi hakk nhi.....

Saying this shiva start leaving but anita stopped him saying "shiva rukk....uss halwe me zehr tha par vo raavi ne nhi milaya...."

Everyone looked at anita shockingly.

An: aur iske baad saari sachai shiva, dev, rishita aur gautum ke saamne thi.....

Dev: (from behind) bahut kamjoor samjh liya aapne iss rishte ko maami......

Ra: (coldly) shiva ke accident se pehle meri baatein sun kar aapko andaja ho jana chahiye tha maasi...par aap toh apni nafrat ki patti bandh kar baithi thi.....

Pr: (angrily) aee raavi tujhe kya lagta hai ki sach bol rhe hai.....aree jab pta chala ki tu kisi aur ke saath shaadi kar rhi hai toh aa gya....pta hai na tujh jaisi ladki nhi milegi isse kahin aur

Ra: (yells) maasi.....

Pr: (retorts)mujhe kya chilla rhi hai khud soch...tujhe itni baatein kyun sunayi....seedhe seedhe sach kyun nhi bataya.....

Ga: maami agr seedhe seedhe sach batate.....toh shiva raavi dono aap ghr aake khoon kar dete.....

Hearing this prafulla looks him shocked where as shivi glares her.

After hearing the truth, shiva was so angry that he was ready to kill prafulla that moment only.

Sh: (angrily) aaj toh main maami ki jaan le lunga.....

Saying this he started to leave but dev and gautum held him.

Ga: dekh shiva main jaanta hu ki tujhe maami pe gussa aa rha hai par gusse me kaam bigad jaate hai....

Dev: hn shiva shaant ho ja...

Sh: (pushes dev) tu chup reh samjha.....tujhe shakk tha na raavi pe...toh ab kuch karu muh band rakh

Dev: (guilty) shiva....bhai mujhe maaf karde par main darr gya tha rishita ke liye.....tu toh samjh sakta hai na.....aur raavi ke liye mere se jayada tera bharosa jaroori hai...jo ki uske paas tha....

Shiva got his point. And why not. Rishita is his wife. She means to dev they way raavi means to him.

Sh: (hugs dev) sorry bhai....main sajh sakta hu tujhe kaisa laga hoga....

Dev: sorry....

An: shiva...please meri ek baat dhyaan se sun......humare paas koi proof nhi hai kip hui ne aisa kiya.....toh agr hum unke paas jayenge bhi toh koi fayada nhi....

Sh: toh tu kya chahti hai main haath pe haath rakhe baitha rahu....aaj usne khaane me zehr mila diya....kal ghr me aag laga degi.....

An: main samjhti hu...par kuch aisa karna hoga jisse maasi khud accept karle ki unhone ye kiya.....

Ga: aur tujhe lagta hai ye itna aasan hoga anita....

An: nhi....

"ek cheez kar sakte hai" said rishita excitedly.

After listening to rishita's plan,

Sh: (standing up from his seat) mujhse nhi hoga....

Ri: kyunnn.....

Sh: (rolling his eyes) aapko sach me lagta hai Bhabhi yeh kaam karega?

Ga: hn rishita yeh kuch ajeeb nhi hai......

An: nhi gautum.....jab phui ko lagega ki vo jeet gyi hai....unka dhyaan iss topic se hatt jyega aur hum unke khilaaf sayad koi sabut juta le.....

Sh: toh iske liye raavi se meri ladai ki kya jaroorat hai.....seedha seedha bata do na raavi ko.....

An: tujhe kya lagta hai shiva ki raavi ko pta chale ga toh vo shant rahegi.....kaali ban ke tandav karegi.....tujhe pta bhi hai jab tera accident hua tha tab phui pe kya barshi thi raavi......

Ri: aur ladai nhi karni hai......aisa karna hai ki rishta hi khatam...over.....

Sh: Bhabhi samjho.....uske do aasun nikale ge nhi ki mere dimaag ghum jayega.....main iss tareeke se usse hurt nhi kar sakta......

An: shiva agr tu chahta ki phui aage koi bakheda na kare.....toh ye tujhe karna hoga.......

Ri: phir finally shiva plan ke liye maan gya....

Sh: (looks at raavi) par galti ki maan ke.....agr maine pehle hi isse sab bta diya hota toh-

His words died in his throat only and his eyes filled with tears.


and this is what we call typical story......kahin bhi kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai...😅🤷‍♀️

so finally your doubts are sort....things are still left will be covered in next parts.....just 3-4 parts more and I'll end the story.....

logic jayada mat dhundna sar dard ho jaye....this kind of stuff is not logical🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

hope you like this highly dramatic part.....I can say if other ps writer would have written this then it would equally or more dramtic....😂😂

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