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I just realized I accepted your request despite the fact I don't read nor write poetry and that is on me.
So instead of a review this will just be. short appreciation chapter.
For someone who's never read poetry I do think yours have a lot more, I guess, depth.
The analogies and metaphors doesn't feel shallow or trying too much to be deep but really it isn't.
(I have seen a few of those actually.)
There wer
e lines that I think should be framed lol and although I read only two chapters, my eyes widened (literally) in interest and in awe.
My personal favorites were:
Anyway, I'll just say, You're a great poet and I'm glad your readers think so too.
Okay, I know it's short but I do apologize for accepting the request despite not reading the request thoroughly. I have raised hopes for nothing (or maybe you weren't hoping for a review at all.... either way, apologies.)