A diamond hidden within the g...

By Spiky314

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Imagine a alternate world where the mario universe has a modern feel to it, and is full of action. Full of se... More

A diamond hidden within the gray line introduction
Chapter 1: Uneasy ground towards a new beginning.
Chapter 2: New experience.
Chapter 3: The best first day. Part one.
Chapter 4: The best first day. Part two.
Chapter 5: Unique reunion between childhood friends.
Chapter 6: Max's ballsy stunt and his new room.
Chapter 7: Examining a new room and a new morning.
Chapter 8: The phone call leading to concern.
Chapter 9: Magical emergency.
Chapter 10: Pivotal memories, and a challenge issued by roy and morton.
Chapter 11: Handicap battle and mike's request.
Chapter 12: Wholesome bond.
Chapter 13: Kamek's reveal and a wholesome encounter.
Chapter 14: Tutelage for max.
Chapter 15: Bizzare encounter.
Chapter 16: Strange memories and a agonizing temporary transformation.
Chapter 17: Bowser's reveal and max's bombshell.
Chapter 18: Updating mike on what's going on and a clever idea.
Chapter 19: Subtle guidance and the arrival of the magishadow.
Chapter 20: Unavoidable choice.
Chapter 21: Mike's reveal and larry's suspicion.
Chapter 22: Tense trip, max's prowess against the odds and marx's surprise.
Chapter 23: The return of fawful and a bloody sacrifice.
Chapter 24: Roy's rage max's acceptance and fawful's blunder.
Chapter 25: Brutal fury, a undeserving end and a strange name.
Chapter 26: The encounter within the darkness, the dollhouse and the barn.
Chapter 27: Seconds make a difference, and max's awakening.
Chapter 28: Max's surprise and reveal leading to kamek's realization.
Chapter 29: Rising emotions.
Chapter 30: Mike's grief and rylie's arrival.
Chapter 31: Uncanny likeness, roy's emotional turmoil and familiar eyes.
First a/n
Chapter 32: New feet to stand on.
Chapter 33: Unique discovery and a familiar number.
Chapter 34: Touching reunion and a hilarious memory.
Chapter 35: Unexpected media, the offer, lemmy's idea and marx's gift.
Chapter 36: Strange but useful gift, unintended melancholy and max's grief.
Chapter 37: Uraveling the bandages and max's new shades.
Second a/n.
Chapter 38: Comforting support and marx's advice.
Chapter 39: Scattered puzzle pieces and the second visit.
Chapter 40: Candymaker's arrival and wrath, and the key to the first vision.
Chapter 41: First vision and larry's curiosity.
Chapter 42: Mad dash for home, and larry's helpless horror.
Chapter 43: Silent admiration.
Chapter 44: Recapping events, and important clues part one.
Chapter 45: Recapping events and important clues part two.
Third a/n.
Chapter 46: Heated conversation and future uncertainty.
Chapter 47: Unique revealations.
Chapter 48: Max's brief trip down memory lane and the intense encounter.
Chapter 49: Puzzling questions and a nightmare's beginning.
Chapter 50: Nightmare's mercilessness and a unexpected assist from the shadows.
Chapter 51: Prideful avoidance, and bowser's gift.
Chapter 52: The airship, mike's gift and a familiar face.
Chapter 53: Reporter's lucky day, the clown copters and marx's prediction.
Chapter 54: The view from the sky and jasper's recording for later.
Chapter 55: Bowser's airship and surprising information.
Chapter 56: Song of the past, and mike's challenge to max.
Chapter 58: Bowser's castle and a ominously creepy encounter.
Chapter 59: A wholesome moment and the grand tour.
Chapter 60: Raw emotions, max's rememberance and ludwig's reveal.
Chapter 61: The burning question and the dread that knocks.
Chapter 62: The encounter and the dark power's wrath.
Chapter 63: Chilling words, thunderous vengeance and digging deeper.
Fourth a/n.
Chapter 64: Bombshells and revealtions. Part one.
Chapter 65: Bombshells and revelations. Part two.
Chapter 66: Kooky's letter, mike's heartache and max's wisdom.
Chapter 67: family ties and junior's turmoil.
Chapter 68: Tyson's theories and offer.
Chapter 69: A haunting feeling and the second vision inside the dollhouse.
Chapter 70: Kooky's surprise and rememberance of the past.
Chapter 71: Max's crazy ideas and bowser's offer to mike.
Chapter 72: Junior's frustration, ludwig's realization and a partial memory.
Chapter 73: Rite of passage, max's mask and unexpected visitors.
Chapter 74: New outfit, intense meeting, improvised name and a familiar smell.
Fifth a/n.
Chapter 75: candymaker's return and the whisper only they hear.
Chapter 76: Kylie's new assignment and helpless horror.
Chapter 77: Marx's warning, subject change and a unexpected reunion.
Chapter 78: Unforgtten memory, nate's secrets and max's first mission.
Chapter 79: Personal family matter.
Sixth a/n:
Chapter 80: Max's return, the burning scar and zΓΆhm's words.
Chapter 81: Nate's letters and gifts and the starlight crystal's purpose.
Chapter 82: Mixed reactions and the box.
Chapter 83: The box's contents, kooky's history lessons and a week to prepare.
Chapter 84: Preparations and max's encounter leading to unexplained guilt.
Chapter 85: Conflicting emotions, mike and marx's worry and max's theory.
Chapter 86: The starlight saber's history and mike's silent theory.
Chapter 87: The saber's ignition and special training.
Chapter 88: The rematch and bowser's phone call.
Seventh a/n:
Chapter 89: Jasper's interview and the phone call with a familiar voice.
Chaper 90: Recap, aftermath and the same stare.
Chapter 91: Unspoken guidance and mike's phone call.
Chapter 92: Old yet familiar and max's unintentional hilarity.
Chapter 93: Ghostly encounter and the warning that sets off raw emotion.
Chapter 94: King boo's true form, max's raw emotional speech and admittance.
Chapter 95: Emotional reunion, a haunting revelation and a promise to keep.
Eighth a/n
Chapter 96: Shouting match and max's verbal admittance.
Chapter 97: Memory lane, the letter, emotional response and mike's explanation.
Chapter 98: A father's assurance and a familiar smell.
Chapter 99: Mike's realizations and bowser's speech before the encounter.
Chapter 100: Unexpected surprise, marx's return and zΓΆhm's sudden appearance.
Chapter 101: Candymaker's departure, family bond and raw tension.
Ninth a/n
Chapter 102: Baron's thoughts, brotherly confrontation and nate's text.
Chapter 103: Max's change.
Chapter 104: A scarf's legend and arrival at the gate of the abyss.
Chapter 105: The eventual meeting and max's crazy entrance and unmasking.

Chapter 57: Max vs mike, unexpected result and the ominous feeling.

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-Narration-

Mike and max walk to the middle of the airship, the difference in height made apparent to all of bowser's army who watched in anticipation. "Don't you dare hold back. Come at me like you're gonna kill me...got it?" Mike says to max which surprises everyone. "Got it." Max replies, who is just as surprised as everyone else.

-Max pov-

I can't help but think that mike has been looking forward to this for quite awhile. He's the one who taught me how to fight, and there's no doubt that he's fast! Am i that fast..? I guess there's one way to find out.

-Bowser pov-

That crazy pikachu...i like this request! You best believe i would have enjoyed seeing this happen back then too...now i get the chance just what max and mike can do! I just hope they don't actually kill each other though...

-Roy pov-

You gotta be kidding me...mike is saying that to max?! Oh, that settles it..max has to be getting some sort of special treatment...dis some bullshit if that's the case!

-Mike pov-

I've been wanting to fight max ever since i sensed his dormant aura once he turned 13, but his mom would never let me. I thought it was just her being overprotective at the time, but..that was before i realized that she was clearly hiding max from the magishadow and from this 'z' guy. Come to think of it...you would think we'd be seeing this guy appear from out of nowhere...while i can't help but think that guy is all talk, these magishadow definitely aren't.

But for now? It's time to see what max can do against me!

-Narration

Mike gets into kung fu stance showing that he's ready to go while max responds by sliding his foot on the ground in a circle pattern and goes in the same stance. "Fancy footwork won't help you!" Mike says with a chuckle. "Yeah? How 'bout this?" Max proceeds to suddenly throw a punch at mike who just barely blocks it. "Oh. This'll be good!" Marx says with a chuckle as max and mike went at it with punches, kicks, and even landing a few hits on one another while everyone sat there in complete awe in what they were seeing while the spar began to get faster before cheering began to happen once both of them got faster.

-Bowser pov-

BWAHAHA!! This is AWESOME!! I never imagined a koopa can stand toe to toe with a pokemon! From what i hear, many pokémon are powerful...heh, not as powerful as me! And apparently the same can be said about max!

-Marx pov-

Oh, i wish i had some popcorn while watching this...it's like seeing a movie, but you're actually seeing it play live!

-Kamek pov-

As much as i detest hand to hand combat, i must admit that this is amazing! Not even my king can move that fast without a power up! I would rather enjoy seeing a magical spar in all honesty...

-Ludwig pov-

I always knew that mike is fast, but max too?! Good lord, this is insane! I can only imagine what would have happened if dad had met him earlier...

-Lemmy pov-

Wooow...i didn't know max can be that fast! If only i can be that fast...and fight like that!

-Roy pov-

You've got to be kidding me...he's just as fast as mike! I thought the difference in height would be a problem for max, which would've been hilarious, but fucking hell, that's not happening! "GET 'EM! GET 'EM!!" I yell while the other guys cheered on. I've gotta do what he's doing!

-Iggy pov-

Meh..i wish i were able to at least defend myself, especially when roy loved punching me for being a 'four eyes', or just for the hell of it! Seeing this makes me WISH i could throw a punch! Hey, maybe that would actually help beat mario?!

-Wendy pov-

How i detest fighting with my hands...as if i would ruin my good looks! Though i gotta say..i never knew how fast max can be!

-Morton pov-

Holy SHIT!! Me and roy couldn't even imagine being this fast...we were completely pummeled by mike when we both fought him when he decided to show us his true speed, and max is actually showing us that he's just as fast!

-Larry pov-

Oh, this is so COOL!! This better than watching those action movies junior likes watching so much! Him seeing himself as the hero and the bad guy as mario and actually kicking his ass? Too bad that's only happened in his dreams, and in those movies. In fact..i'm surprised dad hasn't heard junior blasting his tv watching action movies while screaming for whoever the hero is to 'kick the plumber's ass'. It would be a dream come true to actually see that happen!

-Junior pov-

Wooow..cool! So cool! If this really was mario fighting max, then i would be loving this! Although..i will be the one to leave my mark on him!

-Narration-

Though they're both beaten up and slightly bloody, both mike and max were still on their feet while they lock hands in a struggle to make one or the other fall on one knee but as they crowd cheers on, neither of the two were budging. "Holy shit, these two are incredible!" A hammer bro exclaimed. "I would have thought the difference in height would be a disadvantage; But damn, i got proven wrong!" A goomba says with a chuckle; the admiration in his voice being quite apparent.

"Not bad! But, i KNOW you're better than this!" Mike quickly says with a smug chuckle. "How so?" Max wondered, unsure of just what he was talking about. "Ever since i met you, i could sense a dormant aura within you; Now that it's practically wide awake, the potential you have is incredible! Now, dig deep! Overpower me, if you can!" Mike says to him, before giving max his full power and actually making max step back a few steps.

-Mike pov-

After what happened back at that parking lot, it was as if the dormant aura max had had woken up and while it's largely untamed, there's no doubt that he has this...major potential to become something i have yet to understand.

-Max pov-

Dormant aura..? I had that? I had no idea I had something like that...maybe..maybe i gotta do as he says? Dig deep and overpower him? My grip began to tighten as i find myself pushing forward and i can see the immediate surprise in mike's eyes...i think i caught him off guard! Now's my chance!

-Narration-

What max is far from aware of, is that while he did dig deep as mike suggested, he now had a orange aura around his body as he begins to push mike back who is surprised to see this happening just as much as everyone else is. However, what mike also saw, is that max's eyes had changed as well. One eye had become a glowing blue...the other becoming a glowing red much like that of dark bowser, but majorly different as he also has a red outline on his body which made bowser worry. "U-um..is that normal..?" Iggy asked, now frightened. "I don't think so..." Roy says, his tone of voice suggesting that he is in total shock.

-Bowser pov-

Oh hell no..mike did tell him to dig deep, but..is max triggering his dark fury in process? I guess mike is about to get what he asked for, which would be amusing if not for what i'm seeing what's happening to max!

-Roy pov-

What is this..? What the hell has mike caused?! Shit, this just keeps getting crazier!

-Narration-

Max suddenly lifts his hands up while letting go of the hold he and mike had which makes mike stumble backward, and before he could even make move, max knees him in the gut so hard, that it sounded as if thunder has erupted from a thunderstorm while mike fell on one knee; the wind taken out of his body while max ends up falling his his knees while the aura around his body and the red outline dissipated while his eyes went back to normal. "Did i..win..?" Max wonders as a bowser and the koopalings looked on in total disbelief while max is unaware of what just happened to him.

"Oh my..i think mike bitten off more then he could chew! That was simply marvelous!" Marx says while clapping his hands in enjoyment. "That was the loudest knee to the gut i have ever heard..." a fire bro commented. "No kidding...this had to be most entertaining spar i've ever witnessed!" Says a burly looking koopa while roy and morton get out of their copters and tend to max and mike. "Y-yeah, you definitely won!" Morton says, finally able to say something. "Dude, what the hell did you do?" Roy questions mike who is still wheezing. "All..i did..was tell him to dig deep..." Mike says while breathing heavily.

-Max pov-

I won? Nice! But..as i look all around me...why is everyone so shocked..? I did what mike wanted, but..what did they see that i didn't?

-Kamek pov-

I can just stand here and look on in total shock...what did i just witness?! It was definitely nothing of magical origin...

-Wendy pov-

That last hit was like, so loud...i'm just glad max is on our side...

-Ludwig pov-

Good lord...that was..unexpected. Should we tell max, or do we let him find out on his own..?

-Marx pov-

Well, mike certainly got what he wanted! It appears that what we all saw, is but a taste of what max can do! However, it is largely something that is lacking control. It would appear that max has a long way to go...

-Mike pov-

Agh..he didn't have knee me in the gut so hard...just what the hell was that form he was in?! What the hell was that?!

-Narration-

"Just imagine if that was mario!" Junior says with a evil grin. "Oh, mario would've lost for sure!" Larry says in agreement. "That was impressive! Definitely fun to watch. But as of right now? We've arrived at the darklands." Ludwig says, hiding the fact that he is ultimately concerned as the sky gradually becomes that of the night sky with a lot of clouds. However, in that moment, max immediately felt as if something was..waiting for him...he never said anything, but there was a feeling of an ominous nature that felt like it had no business being there. Whatever it was...it only became stronger with each passing second the closer he gets to bowser's castle!

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