Karna The Mortal God

By MAYANKKUKREJA26

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What if when Kunti abandoned Karna Surya Dev the Father of Karna save him and take him to his lok Surya lok w... More

Karna Birth
Sangya accept Karna as his Son
Kunti Marry Pandu
Birth of Kauravas and Pandavas
Karna goes to Parshuram
Dronacharya
Karna Vs Indra
Karna return to Surya lok
Karna to became Dev
Bleesing from Gods
Suryaprasth
Contest
Karna Vs Arjun
Gurudakshina
War on Drupad
War
Coronation
Krishna visits Suryaprasth
Karna Slays Arankasur
Lakshagraha
Pandavas in Rakshasavrat
Dhristdyumna The Fire Born Prince
Draupadi The Fire Born Princess
Duryodhan Yuvraj Abhishek
Krishna meet his Sakhi
Invitation of Swayamvar
Karna's Birthday
Truth
Ghatotkach
Draupadi Swayamvar
Karna Draupadi Marriage
In Search of lost Pandav Prince
Visiting Hastinapur
Pandavas Arrival
Finding Answers
Karna Kunti
Karna Kunti Confrantation
Acceptance
Indraprasth
Indraprasth 2
Pandav Wife's Cast
Unknown Fellings
Krishna's Boon
Swayamvar
Nakul Naiytri
Journey to Dwarka
Saving Subhadra
A Proposal for Naiytri
Nakul Naiytri Marrige
Nakul Naiytri Marrige 2
Welcoming Newly wed
Arjun's Exile
Arjun Subhadra Vivaha
The End of Asurasur
Blissful Night
Good News
Cravings + 9 Month's
Birth
Rajyasuya Yagya
Revenge of Humiliation
Karna In Patal Lok
Dyut Sabha
Cheerharan
Aftermath
Vanvaas
Tapasya
End of Vanvaas
Agyatvas In Matsya
Keechak Vadh
Virat War
New Generation New Entries
Attack on Hastinapur
Sambha abducts Lakshmana
Uppandavas In Matsya
The First Meet
Tara's truth
Marrige
Propsal of Peace
Krishna Vishwarrop
Mission To Dwarka
Kurukshetra

Aditya Saves Tara

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By MAYANKKUKREJA26

Tara was standing on the gate of the room she listened everything tears formed in her eyes the girl who never cried in any problem or situation faced it with courage she was crying Tara ran in her room and closed the door and sit on ground and cried

Tara(crying and Sobbing)- I....a..am not...my...parents....daughter...it can't be...true...but what...I listened It's..... true then

All the memories of her childhood start coming coming infront of her eyes how her parents loved her completed every wish of her

Virat and Sudeshna went to meet Karna and Draupadi

Karna- Maharaj Virat Maharani Sudeshna what happend is everything fine

Virat- Yes Samrat we come here to talk about something that is related to Tara

Draupadi- What Maharaj

Sudeshna- Samragini Tara is not our Daughter

It was shock a for Karna and Draupadi

Karna- What are you saying Maharani Sudeshna

Virat- She is saying the truth Maharaj Years ago Me and Sudeshna were gone In a forest for hunting we lost our way to return

Flashback

Virat and Sudeshna were lost in the jungle they don't where they have to go

Sudeshna- Arya I need water

Virat- Sure Sudeshna

Virat looked in the bottle the water was finished then Virat here the noise of water

Virat- Sudeshna get up I think we are near a Waterfall or River we can get water their come let's go

Sudeshna and Virat reach near the river and they were drinking water when Sudeshna saw a basket a hear crying sound

Sudeshna- Arya look at the basket I think someone is their in the basket

In No time Virat jump in the river get the basket and come out the river and Sudeshna come near him and they both looked the basket a very cute baby girl wrapped in pink cloth with big black eyes were looking at them she has tear marks on her face
Sudeshna take the baby from the basket and she looked at baby girl and baby give a smile to her world just stop for her all the motherly love which was hidden in her heart just come out after looking at the baby girl

Sudeshna- Arya look at the baby how cute she is

Virat- Yes Sudeshna she really cute

Sudeshna- Arya can we adopt her

Virat- Sudeshna she is not our Daughter she belongs to someone else her family must searching for her we should search for them and give her back

Sudeshna- No Arya she is mine Daughter if her family loves her then they never leave her in river to die Lord Mahadev has completed my wish he answered all prayer of mine he give me the fruit of my Tapasya like this she is our Daughter

All the fatherly love of Virat come out seeing the baby girl

Virat- OK Sudeshna she is our Daughter And I name her Tara

Sudeshna- Tara my daughter

And Sudeshna hugged Tara and soon Soldiers find them when they return with Tara everything changed in Matsya start getting more prosperous

Flashback Ends

Virat- Sorry Samrat we don't want that new relationship start with hiding something

Karna- You thought I will break Tara and Aditya alliance after knowing that Tara is my student after knowing her birth truth I get to know every

Sudeshna- What you get to know

Karna- When time will come you get to know about it but you should tell her she has right to know about herself her truth

Sudeshna- She will break after knowing this

Karna- I understand truth is bitter but if she get's to know about this from someone else she will break

Virat- I understand i will tell her

Aditya Room

Aditya was restless he doesn't know what is happening to him he can't understand this new feeling from the time he has meet Tara whenever he close his eyes her face come infront of her In the duel they were fighting but every time his heart want that Tara win the Duel his heart ached when he attacked her

Aditya- What ia happening to me

Abhimanyu- You are in love jysht with Rajkumari Tara

Aditya- What are you saying

Abhimanyu- The truth her face come infront of your eyes when you close your eyes You can't see her heart you wanted her happiness you want to protect her from everything you get lost sometime in her thoughts tell me Yes or No this happening with you right

Aditya- Yes but

Abhimanyu- Jyshat Mamashri says that if you are conflicted about something then ask your heart what your heart want

Aditya- My heart

Aditya close the eyes and put his hand on his heart and remember every moment Tara smile her anger her care everything he got his Answer

Aditya- I love Tara she is the one Thank you Abhi

Abhimanyu- It's Ok Jyshat

Tara Room

Tara cried alot after knowing that and then she get normal

Tara(in mind)- I have to leave the Palace I can't be the reason of Uttara pain if Gurudev and all get to know about me then will break alliance with us Uttara heart will break I know how much she love Rajkumar Abhimanyu

Tara takes a paper and writes a letter

Meanwhile

Shakuni get to know about the alliance of Aditya and Abhimanyu so he decide to destroy Matsya with the help of an Asur

(Diviwdh)

Tara left the Palace

Virat and Sudeshna went to meet Tara but found she was not their and find a letter they both get shocked to read the letter

Tara's letter

Parnipat Pitashri
When you find
This letter
I would have
Left the Palace
First thing
I love you and Mata
But now I know
My truth
That truth which
You hided from
Me for years
Yes Pitashri I get to know
That I am not your
Daughter you are
Not my Parents
I don't want to
Be a burden on anyone
Anymore I don't want
That because of me
My Uttara's future
Get ruined
Why Rajkumar
Aditya accept or his
Family accept
Me after knowing that
I am not your
Daughter not a
Rajkumari just
a commener
Who is raised in
Palace by
King and Queen
I will find my
Real parents
And ask
Them question
Why they left
Me to die
In River
I will do
Everything possible
To find them
But you
Both will be
My parents who
Truly loved me
Cared for me
Completed my every
Wish
Give love to Uttar and
Uttara
Your Daughter
Tara

Sudeshna start crying

Sudeshna(crying)- Arya I want my Daughter do anything but I want her back

Virat- Don't worry Sudeshna I send my soldiers and I will go myself and find her and bring her back don't worry

Virat order soldiers to search Tara and Pandavas also get to know about this

Karna- Maharaj don't we will search and bring Tara back

Aditya was shocked to know all this when he realised his feelings for Tara then she left only he decided that he will search for Tara and bring her back to Palace and in his life

Aditya- I will also go and find her

Karna- But Putra we all are going to search her

Aditya- Pitashri she going to be my wife and I have duties towards her as well don't take tension I will find her

Aditya left the palace to search Tara he entered In the jungle and start searching for Tara his heart said she would be in Jungle

Tara was standing near the cliff when someone pulled her she was shocked to see Aditya their

Aditya(shout)- What you were going to do answer me do you think about your parents your family about anyone

Tears come In her eyes

Tara(crying)- Which family are you talking about tell me I am nor the daughter of my parent's I am not a Rajkumari my real family leaved me in river to die

Aditya- I don't care tell me one thing that the years you spend with your parent's they ever make you fell that you are adopted

Tara nods in No

Aditya- Do they ever make difference between you and Uttara

Tara nods in No

Aditya- Do they ever miss treated you beat you

Tara nods in No

Aditya- So why don't you understand they care for you they love do you ever think what are they going through leave your parents do you think about me for a second The moment I realise that I love I want to spend my entire life with you you just left are you that Tara who was not ready to accept defeat in the duel that Tara who is my Pitashri's student

Tara(crying)- What you said

Aditya- I love you Tara I love you

Tara was shocked she don't know how to react she was sure now that she has felling for Aditya but she don't know that he had also feelings for her to

Tara cryingly hugged Aditya

Tara(sobbing)- I love you to I love you to Aditya I can't leave without you but I am not a Rajkumari

Aditya- I don't care whether you are a Rajkumari or not I care that I only love you

Aditya- Let's go back

When they were leaving they saw a Big Gorilla was coming their

A

ditya- Who are you

Diviwdh- I am your Death I come here to destroy Matsya and his people

Tara- Till the time I am alive you can't do anything to Matsya

Diviwdh- You will stop me

Aditya- Not only her but I will also stop you

Diviwdh laugh and attacked Aditya and Tara they fall down

Aditya- We have to kill him or he will destroy Matsya

Tara- You are right

Aditya and Tara invoke their bow attack Diviwdh respond to their attack Soldiers from other side saw this and run to inform everyone in the Palace

Soldier- Maharaj Maharani

Virat- What happend do you find Tara tell me

Soldier(scared)- Maharaj Rajkumari Tara and Rajkumar Aditya are in danger they are attacked by Big Gorilla and they are fighting with him

Arjun- Jyshat Bharta Bheem let's go they need our help

Bheem- Yes Jyshat

Karna- No one will go anywhere

Draupadi- Arya What are you saying their life is danger

Karna- Nothing will happen to them and I know that this their fight and we can't interfere in this

Arjun- But jysht

Karna- Belive me because what I know you all don't know

Draupadi- If anything happened to my Son Arya I will not forgive you

Meanwhile

Diviwdh was very strong he counter all the attacks of Aditya and Tara Diviwdh attack them with his power and they both fall down Aditya and Tara were lying down

Aditya closed his Eyes

Karna- Putra wake up you have found your soul mate you are ready remember what I said when you will find your soul mate

Aditya open his eyes and looked at Diviwdh

Diviwdh- Now I will kill you both then everyone in Matsya

Diviwdh attack Aditya but Aditya stop his hand

Aditya- You will not able to do anything

Diviwdh got angry and start attacking Aditya but Aditya counter all his attacks Diviwdh was shocked

Aditya- Now I will kill you

Diviwdh- No one can kill me I am Immortal Bharma Dev gas bleesed me with a Boon only a person who is born in a special Constellation who found Soul mate can kill with a weapon which is not a weapon yet a weapon

Aditya- You fool I am born in a special Constellation I found my soul mate and I know which weapon can kill you

Aditya raised his hand and a sword appeared

                  (5 Element Sword)

Aditya run towards Diviwdh and strike sword in his chest Diviwdh dies and Tara look all this and smiles faintly

Aditya run towards Tara

Aditya- Tara are you alright

Tara- Yes I am alright

Aditya make Tara stand Tara was little injured

Then Diviwdh body vanished and a Man Appeared

Man- Thank you for making me free from curse

Tara- Who are you

Man- I am Chitravan Gandharv

Aditya- Chitravan who Cursed yoh

Chitravan- Years ago Devrishi Narad Cursed me

Tara- But why

Chitravan- Fault was mine I have Ego of my Power Knowledge and Charm I used to trouble Rishi's who were doing Yagna one day Devrishi Narad was conducting a Yagna and I take form Gorilla and try to ruin his Yagna and In anger he Cursed me to bo a Gorilla I prayed him and requested him to take his curse but the given curse can't be taken back he said that when a Mortal descendant of Suryadev and her soulmate would free me  from the curse
And I was waiting for that day

Aditya- Can you tell me who send you

Chitravan- Gandhar Raj Shakuni

Aditya- Thank you Chitra for telling us this

Chitravan then vanished

Aditya- We should back to Palace and tell what happened

Tara nodded and they return to Palace

Precap- Marrige

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