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What happened when an arrogant rude business tycoon the ' VANSH RAI SINGHANIA ' started an aimless journey b... More

Prologue...
CHAPTER 2 : TUM HO MERI PROBLEM.
Character sketch :
CHAPTER 1: WHEN THEY MET.๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜
CHAPTER 3: MAI TUMHAR SATH NAHI CHORUNGI
CHAPTER 4 : AAO KHABHI HAVELI PE ๐Ÿฐ
CHAPTER 5 : YEH KYA HAIN..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
CHAPTER 6 : ANEWALA HAI NANHA MAHEMAN ๐Ÿ‘ผ
CHAPTER 7 : KARLE TU BHI MOHABBAT โค๐Ÿ’—
CHAPTER 8 : . PEHALA INKAR.๐Ÿ’”
CHAPTER 9 : NAYA MOOR..
CHAPTER 10 : FAKE LOVE STORY.โค
CHAPTER 11 : BHAGAM BHAG..๐Ÿƒโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿƒโ€โ™€๏ธ
CHAPTER 12 : PECHA HAI BARATI๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿคต
CHAPTER 13 : AJNABE AHESAS..๐Ÿ’—โค
CHAPTER 14 : PHIR MILEGA.....
CHAPTER 15 :CHAL DIA....
CHAPTER 16 : NAYI SUBHA......
CHAPTER 17 : SAGAR KINARE...๐Ÿ’—โค
CHAPTER 18 : CHAKAR KIYA HAI..
NOT AN UPDATE...
THANK YOU..โค๐Ÿ˜˜
CHAPTER 19 : KAHAN HOO TUM.๐Ÿ’—
CHAPTER 20 : KHT PART 2
Sorry guys....
CHAPTER 21 : TU CHAHIYA..๐Ÿ’—โค
CHAPTER 22 : TUM MILE...๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—
CHAPTER 23 : TU MERA HUMDARD HAI...๐Ÿ’—โค๐Ÿ’—
CHAPTER 24: YEH DURIYA...๐Ÿ’”
CHAPTER 25 : KYA HONA THA KYA HOGAYA...๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿค”
CHAPTER 26: PYAR TO HONA HI THA...
CHAPTER 27 : JAB SE MILA HAI TU DIL KO MILA SUKOON..โค๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’“
CHAPTER 27:(PART 2)
CHAPTER 28 : AJ KI RAT.... ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿฅ‚
CHAPTER 29 : LOVE ME BABY..๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’‹
CHAPTER 30 : TIT FOR TAT...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
CHAPTER 31 : PAGAL PANTI....๐Ÿ‘„๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’ƒ
Galti hogayi...
CHAPTER 32 : CHORKE NA JAA...๐Ÿ’”
CHAPTER 33: MILA TU...๐Ÿ’•โค
CHAPTER 34: MEHENDI HAI RACHNEWWLI.
CHAPTER 35: ISHQ KA RANG..
sneak and pick....
CHAPTER 36 : SHAGUN KI HALDI ๐Ÿงก
CHAPTER 37 : RIANSH KI SHADI.๐Ÿ’‘
CHAPTER 38: DIL KE ARMAN...๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜˜
New Story Alert..
CHAPTER 39: ASU MAI BAHEGAYE.๐Ÿ˜ญ
CHAPTER 40 : RECEPTIONIST NIGHT.
CHAPTER 41: THE FIRST TIME โค๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ‘„
CHAPTER 42: HONEYMOON PLAN โค๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜˜
CHAPTER 43: BEACH ROMANCE ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ‘„
CHAPTER 44: GHOOM TE RAHO. ๐Ÿ˜‰
CHAPTER 45: TERA PYAR MERA PYAR.
CHAPTER 46 : KHATI METHI YADE.
CHAPTER 47: HOGAYI SHADI. ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
CHAPTER 48 : GOOD NEWS
CHAPTER 49: WOH BHUL GAYA. ๐Ÿ˜‘โ˜น
CHAPTER 50: MUSIBAT
CHAPTER 51: SHAK KI DARAR....
CHAPTER 52 :JUDA HUA HAI..
CHAPTER 53 : TUTE ARMAN..
CHAPTER 54 : BIKHRE HUM.๐Ÿ’”
CHAPTER 55: LAUT AYE WO.
CHAPTER 56: TASHN-E-ISHQ
CHAPTER 57 : SACH KA SAMNA
CHAPTER 58: KURBA HUA.
CHAPTER 59: RAAZ KA KHULASA.
CHAPTER 60: MUQAMAL..โค
CHAPTER 61: WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
CHAPTER 62 : WE ARE FAMILY
CHAPTER 64 : BIGRE NAWAB
thank youโคโค
CHAPTER 65 : WELCOME ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ
CHAPTER 66 : PRINCESS'S PARTY..
new os alert
CHAPTER 67: AKHRI DAV..
CHAPTER 68: KUCH SAAL BAD..
CHAPTER 69: PADHARO MARE DESH.
CHAPTER 70: EPILOGUE. โค๐Ÿ’•
Additional chapter.. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜€

CHAPTER 63 : WELCOME BACK HOME

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In Riddhima's ward..

Riansh are kissing each other suddenly there was a knock at the door.

And all family members came inside.

Vansh (mumbles)- Agaye mera romance k dushman.

Riddhima-Shhh..

Uma- kasi hai tu Riddhima?

Riddhima- Mai thik hoo maa.

Siya looking at the babies..

Siya- so...cute... bhabi kitne pyare lag raha hai... pure apke jase hai..

Vansh (in mind)- Mera jase hai...

Aryan- Hai...bhabi..apke jase bare akhen.. nak..lips...sab ap jase..

Vansh- Really!!😠

Angree- Bhai mera matlab..apke jase bhi hai.. Jase....Jase...bal...aur baki sab..

Vansh- Tum sab badmai milo batata hoo..

Aryan- Jobhi ho.. mera bhabi pe gaye hai..

Vansh- Aryannnn!(shouts)

Due to this the babies started crying..

Uma- Riddhima tu.. inhe Feed karwa dai... hum jate hai..

Riddhima- ok maa..

All left except Vansh..

Riddhima- Vansh, bacho ko do..mai feed  karwa deti hu..

Vansh- Riddhima are you sure..tumse ho payega na...kitne chote hai..dono

Riddhima glares Vansh..

Riddhima- Vansh..mane in dono ko 9 mahine apne andar rakha..unhe Deliver kiya..ab tumhe lagta hai..mai nahi sambhal sakte..do mujhe abhiii..

Vansh- okkk...

Vansh lifted them from the cradle and kept them in Riddhima's lap..
And Riddhima started breast feeding her..all the time babies were staring at their mama..

Riddhima (smiling)- Hi...babies... apko pata hai mama kabse apdono ka wait kar rahe hai.. I had missed you so much.. wase apdono kick to bohot sir sai marte tha.. kyu.. sportsman bana hai.ap dono ko..hmmm

Listening her..babies started giggling

Vansh's was adoring the scene.

After sometime Riddhima made them sleep in her arms..and Vansh led them to the cradle and made Riddhima also sleep and sat beside his babies..

After 1 hour Vansh heard some coing sound..he lifted his head And saw his babies were staring at him.he got panicked and thought they will cry.. but they were staring at him..as if he is the most interesting thing to see..

Vansh (in baby language)-Hi...baby... kase ho tum dono.. tumdono nai na.. mujhe aur tumhare mama ko bohot pareshan kiya hai..kitna tensions mai the hum... wase pata hai sab bol rahe hai ki ap apne mama pe gaye ho..lekin ek secret bolu.. ap dono ki akhen ekdum meri jase hai..deep hazelnut brown..chalo ise bat pai..hi-i karte hai..

He raised his hand and both the boys Also lifted their hand and did hi-fi..

Vansh was so happy..

On over excitement he yelled..and due to it Riddhima jerked up from her sleep

Riddhima- kya Hua..bache thik hai..

Vansh-soory..wo mane bacho ke sath HiFi kiya iseliya sorry..galti sai..

Suddenly THEY heard Baby's cry.

Riddhima- Dikh raha hai kitna sambhal rahe ho..do mujhe..idiot..

Like this....it went on....






After 3 days.
Riddhima got discharged and were going to VR MANSION..

VR MANSION was decorated like palace
With lights and all kinds of flowers as if any kind of festival was going on.. all were invited for the naming ceremony. Each and every business associates, employee everyone..

It was 10:30 am
When Riddhima and Vansh both enters VR MANSION with their kids..

Dadi did their arti..

In Dinning hall.

All were present.

Aryan to Riddhima- bhabi kasa laga decoration?

Riddhima- Bohot ache..

Dadi- Riddhima..mera pas Tera liya ek gif hai..
And present a gold cradle.

Dadi- Yeh humare khandani plans hai.. jabtak bache 3 mahine ke hai unhe isme hi rakhna..

Riddhima- Thanks Dadi. Mai unhe ismai hi rakhu gi..

Uma- Riddhima bacha.. 2 ghante mai nam karan hai.. Jake ready hole aur mera pote ko bhi ready karde..

With this Riddhima and Vansh gets up and went upstairs.

In corridor..

Vansh to Riddhima- jaan mera pass ek SURPRISE hai..pahela room mai nahi mera SATH chalo..

Coming near a DOOR

Vansh- ab bache mera pass hai....tum darwaza kholo..

Riddhima opens the door and she was fully numb for a second


Riddhima- yeh sab kya hai.

Vansh- Mane humare bacho kai liya phirse designer ko bulake design karwaya hai..

Iske sath mane study aur tree house aur play house bhi banaya hai..
Come...

Vansh- Kasa hai... acha hai..na.. you know what mane sab kuch plan karliya hai.. humara ek plot hai..bandra mai .. wahna ek school bahau ga.. unke schooling ke liya.. phir mane oxford university mai apply bhi kiya hai membership ke liya.. 5 sal mai miljayega..aur jaan.. bacho ko no bana hai wo bane ge .... ko hi pressure nahi hoga.. aur agar business continue karna to kare gai..  kyu.. acha plan kiya hai na..mane sab??😁😁

Riddhima (being frustrated)- Tumhara Dimag kharab hogaya hai VANSH RAI SINGHANIA..Pagal ho..humare bache shirf 3 din ke hai..aur tumne 30 sal ki planning karle hai..Pagal ho... meri bat kan kholke suno.. paheli bat.. mera bache normally school mai paregai.. apne papa kai school mai nahi.. jahan unhe galti karne par punishment mile..
Hume university mai membership nahi chahi ye..yeh souchoki hum kase bacho ko ek acha insan banaye..Unke papa ki tarha..taki future mai hume unke liya kisi ke samne sharminda na hona pare...samjhe..hume unko best education ke sath best value bhi deni hogi.. ok..  ab chalo ..

I am getting late..

Riddhima gets ready for the day .

Riddhima's look ⬇️


....

Now all have accumulated in the dining hall..after puja..

pandit- Bacho ka nam..'R' sai rakh sakte hai..

Aryan-milgaya..  Ranveer..  aur Ranbir

Sejal- Difference kya hai..

Aryan- Ek dipika ka pati hai..aur ek aliya ka..

Sejal- shut up. .. kuch acha nam socho. Ethics wala..

Aryan- TO..Rajiv Gandhi aur Rahul Gandhi ...

Siya- SHUT UP... bhabi ap bolo..

Riddhima- RIVAN...aur.. RIHAN..

Uma- Perfect..so..RIVAN RAI SINGHANIA aur.. RIHAN RAI SINGHANIA..






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6 MONTHS LATER...

In Riansh room..

At night..
9:00 pm

Riddhima is  folding rivan and rihan' s cloth an our muchkins are sleeping in their cradle.
Suddenly someone back hugged Riddhima..but instead of being shocked Riddhima kept her head in Vansh's chest..
Vansh started kissing her sholder

Riddhima- Mmmm... Vansh kya kar rahe hoon..choro..mujhe bohot kam hai... bache kabhi bhi ut jaye ga..

Vansh (while nuzzling)- Mai bhi to apna sabse impossible kam kar rahe hoon.. apni biwi ke sath romance.

Riddhima (turning around)- kya kar rahe hoon..bache ut jaye ga.. jayo yahan se..

Vansh- ok chala jaunga ..lekin ek kiss ke bad.

Riddhima-Noo.. just gooo..

Vansh- Nahi...mujhe ek kiss aj chahi ye..  warna mai tumhe nahi choruga..

After many attempts and struggling Riddhima finally got ready to kiss Vansh. They were few inches away WHEN they heard..

"Jaaajaaaajaa...."

They turned around and saw rihaan and rivan were staring at their mama and dada...
Like this ⬇️


Riddhima (pushing Vnash)- RIVAN aur rihan jag gaye..

Vansh pulling her- Thori unko samajh ayega..jaldi se kiss karo warna...mai tumhe nahi choruga..

Riddhima- Uffff..ok..

But suddenly our Boys started crying very loudly..

Riddhima left Vansh and immediately rushed to rihan and rivan. Took both of them in her embarras and kissed them.and turned to Vansh

Riddhima- Dekho tumhare wajase kitna bura hal hogaya hai dekho.. roh roh kar. Mai aj mera bacho le sath rahugi unke room mai..samjhe...

She took both of them in her arms and left the room..

While leaving boys were in her arms so they could show their faces to their dada..which had a winner smile and was showing him their hand in order to sai bye..bye..and left the room..

Vansh- kya bache hai..yeah.. meri biwi ko mujhse hi alag kardiya.. mai dekhluga unko..😤😤😫





...

Next day morning..

Vansh was sitting in the study when Aryan enters

And both the brother's were having a heart to heart talk as sejal was 2 months  pregnant and both were getting a good taste of making their wife pregnant.

After HEAR Vansh's dukhi kahani.

Aryan- Bhai ap bhabi ko leka date pai jayo..hum sab  dono champs ko sambhal lega..

Vansh- you sure...

Aryan- ofcourse

That night Riddhima half heartedly said yes as she was not willingto leave her kids BACK but got ready

Riddhima's attire ⬇️


Vansh was in a black suit pants.

In a hotel in a private area..

Both are sitting facing Each other but Riddhima was selecting menu so has covered her face with the help of menu card..

Vansh to Riddhima - JAAN fruit wine order kare??

Riddhima- Hmmmm

Vansh- aur MAIN course mai pasta..

Riddhima- hmmmm

Vansh- desert mai chocolava..

Riddhima- Hmmmm.

Vansh (frustrated)-Roast chicken order karu Tumhare liya..

Riddhima- Hmmmm

Vansh - Aur divorce papers bhi order kardu..

Riddhima- hmmmm

THAT was it Vansh snatched the menu card feom Riddhima and saw she was in phone..

Vansh (astonished)- Riddhima!

Riddhima- Vnash...wo mujhe bohot fiqar ho rahi thi rivan aur rihan ki to mai Siya ko call... I am Soory..

Vansh (irritated)- Riddhima... what is your problem..tum kyu asa kar rahi hoo
I know tumhe humare bacho ki fiqar hai aur honi bhi chahi ye..lekin this is our time Riddhima...
Riddhima hum mama ,dada bane k chakar mai aur duty nibhate nibhate
Husband aur wife ka rishta bbul gaye hai.. tum galat nahi hoo.lekin mujhe apne bacho ke mama ke sath tume meri purani wali Riddhima bhi chahi ye
Pls...Riddhima humare liya..mai nahi chata ki hum baki couple ki tarha boring banjaye parents bane k bad plss

Riddhima (sobing)- Mai kya karu Vansh
Mujhe humesha asa lagta hai..ki mai kohi galti to nahi kar rahi hu na.. kahi mai careless to nhai Hogayi hu..mujhse KOHI galti na hojaye..Vansh jo bhi ho..
Mera 1st miscarriage mera careless behaviour ke wajase hi hua tha.. mai wo galti nahi karna cha ti

Vansh hugs Riddhima..

Vansh- shhhhh.. jaan.. asa kabhi mat souchna.. you are the best mother Riddhima..tumse kabhi kohi galti nahi hosakte..aur tumse to kabhi nahi..ok..
An ek promise karo..ajse tum mujhe meri bacho k mama..k alava.. meri biwi bhi bano gi..
I WANT MY RIDDHIMA BACK..MY WIFE
MY LOVE... MY JAAN.. MY ANGEL...
MY SWEETHEART..
meri wo Riddhima jise MAI paheli bar train mai mila tha.. pls..
Kya wo ho sakta hai...

Riddhima- Ofcourse..ajse mai sab kuch thik kardu gi.. kisi k liya kisi ko avoid nahi karu gi.. aj se Mai.. Riddhima
Tumhare Riddhima...

BOTH smiles AND sealed their promise with a kiss of love and affection.



















...............

3 YEARS LATER...

In VR MANSION.

In kitchen..
At 8:30..am

Riddhima's attire ⬇️


Riddhima is cooking breakfast WHEN suddenly Vansh came and slides his hand in her waist and pulled her more close to him..and back hugged her.

Vansh (sleepy voice)- MORNING...

Riddhima- good morning Vansh..Abhi tak nind nahi gayi tumhare..

Vansh- kase jayegi..neei BIWI hai to an cheating karde..mujhe good morning kiss bhi nahi diya..aur Chali ayi pitch mai..

Riddhima- An thora jaldi mai hoo..ek meeting hai..office mai aur dev nahi a sakta diya ki delivery dates ise week hai.. iseliya mai rivan aur rihan ke liya breakfast bana rahi hu..

Vansh turns her  around

Vansh- Aur mera fast kab break hoga..(with a teasing simle)

Riddhima- MATLAB...mai kuch nahi janti..

Vansh- Tum to sab janti ho Riddhima..
Seriously..tumhe nahi lagta .. hume thori mahenat aur KARNI chahi ye..
You know..meei princess k liya..
Tumhare beta bohot pareshan karte hai
Itna kiya mai unlogo k liya ek choto bahen bhi nahi de paraha hu..

Riddhima (blushing)- STOP it.. kohi sunlega.. jayo..yahan se...mujhe bohot.........

She was stopped by a sudden steamy kiss by Vansh..
Riddhima reciprocated with same authority  like Vansh..

But they soon came back to earth when they hear..

"Moma... Dada..." in union

Riddhima quickly corrected her self and turned around and saw her two muchkins were standing together.

Rivan and Rihan ⬆️

Both were probably fighting on a lollipop.. and were coming to their moma..but the scene they saw made the lollipop slip their hand.
And now BOTH were sad.  ..

Suddenly out of the blue.

Rihan started screaming..

"Moma dada..  rasore mai kich (kiss) kar rahe hai...

With him rivan also started screaming
And started running around the hall.

Riddhima- god..Vansh roko unhe..sabko pata chal jaye ga..

VANSH was running to catching them but got slipped in the floor due to the saliva and the lolipop..

Due to which kids stoped running and.
Said in union...

'Ahhhhhhh'

Riddhima was fully shocked why Vansh fell down and why her kids were yelling due to pain.

She quickly ran to her kids..

Riddhima (to rihan and rivan)-  bache.. ap thik to hoon.. na..chilaye kyu..

Rivan (cutely)- moma..dada ko.. ahhh..ahh..hua na.. wo gil gaye..icheliya  hum hilaye.....

Rihan to Vansh - dada..apko ahh..ahh.. hua kya?dilayo(dikhayo).. moma apko bhi inletion (injection)dedegi..kyu moma.. rivan..bol....

Rivan - hai...moma...

Vansh and Riddhima were smiling at THEIR muchkins quietness..

When all members came due to rivan and Vihan's yell...

Uma- Kya Hua.. mere bacho ko..

Rivan and Rihan hugging Uma' s legs..

Rihan - Dadi..dada gil gaye... humne dekha ki dada aur moma rasore mai kich kar rahe hai aur hilaya..dada humare piche bhage...Aur..dhummm..
Dada gil gaye... Soory dada.. next time hum nahi hilayega..agar ap air moma kich kare ge to... kyu rivan?

Rivan- hmmmm..promich....

By now both riansh were hell embarrassed due to their dear muchkins but Vansh tired to sound heavy.

Vansh to rihan and rivan- Tum dono ko parna warna nahi ata.... tumhare age mai mane..pure alphabets rata karliya the..

Rivan- Alpha....Kya.dada?

Rihan slapping Rivan's head..

Rihan- budhu..alpha..are..moma.. hume sikhaya..na... A ... B..C...D... so wale.

Rivan- Dada humko bhi pata hai..ruko..
Ri ek sath bole ge..ok..👍

Rihan- ok
.

And started telling A to Z to their dada..

Vansh (frustrated)- ok..ab small letters wale alphabets learn karo..go..

Both nods their head and LEFT to their room while giggling...

Sudden Vansh got the call that diya was in hospital and it was time for delivery.










In hospital..

All rai singhania came except sejal as she was in home with her 1 year old son 'aditiya'

Rihan Rivan was also present.

In corridor.

Vansh to dev- don't worry..sab thik hoga

Dev- Thanks yar..

Then they got the New Diya was blessed with twins but girls...

After sometime all went inside to see the new born babies and diya..

All were admiring the girls..but our Rivan and Rihan were unable to see them.

.so Aryan lifted them and places near  the cradel in the bed.


Rihan Rivan were very happy after seeing the babies..
They held  babies  hand and they also clutched their fingures.
Rihan Rivan being very happy kissed the girls in  their checks due to that the girls started crying ..

All were shocked with the sudden act. Riddhima was literally embarrassed but only Vansh and diya were laughing

Dev - what the hell..Vansh..tere beto ko bol meri betiyo se dur rahe..

Vansh- Mai kya bolu...unki life..unki choices..

Riddhima- Vansh!!! To dev- I am so Soory  ..

Diya- Ridzz.. it's ok..bache hito hai..

Dev- phir bhi mere betiyo ko mera samne kiss kiya..

Rivan to diya - Disa.. mai aur Rivan dolls ko humare sath lejaye..humare sath..plccchhh.. hum c
Achese care kare ge.. bohot khale ga..plssss.

Rihan- hai...disa..pls..manjayo na..pls..

Dev- No way...
To vansh- Ay...sambhal apne beto ko..kya lejayega   kaha ...

Rihan- Dej unchel...plssss.. dono  doll ko dedona... hume wo chahe ye.

Dev- no...nahi ..never..

Riddhima- bacha dono..chote hai.. are nahi asakte..w/o apne ghar mai rahega
Kabhi kabhi milne ayega..aww kase hum unhe leja sakte hai

Rihan- kyu.. moma..ap.. seju mauchi to raheta ho.....to dolls bhi hum dono ke sath rahegi kyu.. Ri?

Rivan- hai..moma..plss..

Riddhima- wo to meri aur seju mausi ki shadi ho gayi hai..

Rivan and Rihan (in union)- To hum bhi unse shadi kar lega phir eksath rahe ga

Dev- Vanshhh..sambhal apne bacho ko kya bol rahe hai..

Vansh (suppress his laugh)- ok mera beto nai galat bolo..mai bolta hu..

"TO RISHTA PAKA SAMJHU "

And ran out of the OT with rivan and rihan .

And all STARTED laughing..




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Precape-
In Dinning table in FRONT of everyone

Rivan- Shadi ki rat bhi kohi sota hai Kya!

Rihan- kitna kuch karna hota hai..nind kase ayegi

All were shocked after this  .

Riddhima was hell embarrassed.

(🤣🤣🤣😂😂)





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Forgive for any grammatical mistakes.

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