A diamond hidden within the g...

By Spiky314

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Imagine a alternate world where the mario universe has a modern feel to it, and is full of action. Full of se... More

A diamond hidden within the gray line introduction
Chapter 1: Uneasy ground towards a new beginning.
Chapter 2: New experience.
Chapter 3: The best first day. Part one.
Chapter 4: The best first day. Part two.
Chapter 5: Unique reunion between childhood friends.
Chapter 6: Max's ballsy stunt and his new room.
Chapter 7: Examining a new room and a new morning.
Chapter 8: The phone call leading to concern.
Chapter 9: Magical emergency.
Chapter 10: Pivotal memories, and a challenge issued by roy and morton.
Chapter 11: Handicap battle and mike's request.
Chapter 12: Wholesome bond.
Chapter 13: Kamek's reveal and a wholesome encounter.
Chapter 14: Tutelage for max.
Chapter 15: Bizzare encounter.
Chapter 16: Strange memories and a agonizing temporary transformation.
Chapter 17: Bowser's reveal and max's bombshell.
Chapter 18: Updating mike on what's going on and a clever idea.
Chapter 19: Subtle guidance and the arrival of the magishadow.
Chapter 20: Unavoidable choice.
Chapter 21: Mike's reveal and larry's suspicion.
Chapter 22: Tense trip, max's prowess against the odds and marx's surprise.
Chapter 23: The return of fawful and a bloody sacrifice.
Chapter 24: Roy's rage max's acceptance and fawful's blunder.
Chapter 25: Brutal fury, a undeserving end and a strange name.
Chapter 26: The encounter within the darkness, the dollhouse and the barn.
Chapter 27: Seconds make a difference, and max's awakening.
Chapter 28: Max's surprise and reveal leading to kamek's realization.
Chapter 29: Rising emotions.
Chapter 30: Mike's grief and rylie's arrival.
Chapter 31: Uncanny likeness, roy's emotional turmoil and familiar eyes.
First a/n
Chapter 32: New feet to stand on.
Chapter 33: Unique discovery and a familiar number.
Chapter 34: Touching reunion and a hilarious memory.
Chapter 35: Unexpected media, the offer, lemmy's idea and marx's gift.
Chapter 36: Strange but useful gift, unintended melancholy and max's grief.
Chapter 37: Uraveling the bandages and max's new shades.
Second a/n.
Chapter 38: Comforting support and marx's advice.
Chapter 39: Scattered puzzle pieces and the second visit.
Chapter 40: Candymaker's arrival and wrath, and the key to the first vision.
Chapter 41: First vision and larry's curiosity.
Chapter 42: Mad dash for home, and larry's helpless horror.
Chapter 43: Silent admiration.
Chapter 44: Recapping events, and important clues part one.
Chapter 45: Recapping events and important clues part two.
Third a/n.
Chapter 47: Unique revealations.
Chapter 48: Max's brief trip down memory lane and the intense encounter.
Chapter 49: Puzzling questions and a nightmare's beginning.
Chapter 50: Nightmare's mercilessness and a unexpected assist from the shadows.
Chapter 51: Prideful avoidance, and bowser's gift.
Chapter 52: The airship, mike's gift and a familiar face.
Chapter 53: Reporter's lucky day, the clown copters and marx's prediction.
Chapter 54: The view from the sky and jasper's recording for later.
Chapter 55: Bowser's airship and surprising information.
Chapter 56: Song of the past, and mike's challenge to max.
Chapter 57: Max vs mike, unexpected result and the ominous feeling.
Chapter 58: Bowser's castle and a ominously creepy encounter.
Chapter 59: A wholesome moment and the grand tour.
Chapter 60: Raw emotions, max's rememberance and ludwig's reveal.
Chapter 61: The burning question and the dread that knocks.
Chapter 62: The encounter and the dark power's wrath.
Chapter 63: Chilling words, thunderous vengeance and digging deeper.
Fourth a/n.
Chapter 64: Bombshells and revealtions. Part one.
Chapter 65: Bombshells and revelations. Part two.
Chapter 66: Kooky's letter, mike's heartache and max's wisdom.
Chapter 67: family ties and junior's turmoil.
Chapter 68: Tyson's theories and offer.
Chapter 69: A haunting feeling and the second vision inside the dollhouse.
Chapter 70: Kooky's surprise and rememberance of the past.
Chapter 71: Max's crazy ideas and bowser's offer to mike.
Chapter 72: Junior's frustration, ludwig's realization and a partial memory.
Chapter 73: Rite of passage, max's mask and unexpected visitors.
Chapter 74: New outfit, intense meeting, improvised name and a familiar smell.
Fifth a/n.
Chapter 75: candymaker's return and the whisper only they hear.
Chapter 76: Kylie's new assignment and helpless horror.
Chapter 77: Marx's warning, subject change and a unexpected reunion.
Chapter 78: Unforgtten memory, nate's secrets and max's first mission.
Chapter 79: Personal family matter.
Sixth a/n:
Chapter 80: Max's return, the burning scar and zöhm's words.
Chapter 81: Nate's letters and gifts and the starlight crystal's purpose.
Chapter 82: Mixed reactions and the box.
Chapter 83: The box's contents, kooky's history lessons and a week to prepare.
Chapter 84: Preparations and max's encounter leading to unexplained guilt.
Chapter 85: Conflicting emotions, mike and marx's worry and max's theory.
Chapter 86: The starlight saber's history and mike's silent theory.
Chapter 87: The saber's ignition and special training.
Chapter 88: The rematch and bowser's phone call.
Seventh a/n:
Chapter 89: Jasper's interview and the phone call with a familiar voice.
Chaper 90: Recap, aftermath and the same stare.
Chapter 91: Unspoken guidance and mike's phone call.
Chapter 92: Old yet familiar and max's unintentional hilarity.
Chapter 93: Ghostly encounter and the warning that sets off raw emotion.
Chapter 94: King boo's true form, max's raw emotional speech and admittance.
Chapter 95: Emotional reunion, a haunting revelation and a promise to keep.
Eighth a/n
Chapter 96: Shouting match and max's verbal admittance.
Chapter 97: Memory lane, the letter, emotional response and mike's explanation.
Chapter 98: A father's assurance and a familiar smell.
Chapter 99: Mike's realizations and bowser's speech before the encounter.
Chapter 100: Unexpected surprise, marx's return and zöhm's sudden appearance.
Chapter 101: Candymaker's departure, family bond and raw tension.
Ninth a/n
Chapter 102: Baron's thoughts, brotherly confrontation and nate's text.
Chapter 103: Max's change.
Chapter 104: A scarf's legend and arrival at the gate of the abyss.
Chapter 105: The eventual meeting and max's crazy entrance and unmasking.

Chapter 46: Heated conversation and future uncertainty.

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-Narration-

Ludwig raced up the stairs, panicking due the fact that kooky may come out, but quickly found that wasn't the case. Instead, ludwig felt as if that, while kooky is indeed very angry, he is also in shock. "I never thought my past would arise again...especially now." Kooky mutters as ludwig enters his room. "You need to explain, kooky. Why are you suddenly interested in what's happening?" Ludwig asks him as he looks at his dresser mirror. Who he sees is not only himself, but kooky as well who looks a lot like ludwig, but has messy hair.

Ludwig's room is straight out of gentleman's bedroom from the 1800's that has a plush carpet and has a grand piano close to his king sized bed with classic white sheets. He also had blue curtains to cover on his windows, and his walls had been painted during which he believes that his room is classiest, even though he assumed his room is considered the third biggest.

"Oh, i was interested in what was going on. I just wanted to see how it would all play out...the fact that max went to the ancestral plane...those visions...i never would have surmised that max could be.." Kooky says, before trailing off. "Could be what? Kooky, what are you saying??" Ludwig had a hard time understanding what kooky is taking about. "I wish to talk to max." Kooky answers.

"But..why? You're not gonna try to attack him are you?" Ludwig quickly asked. "Do you really think you can stop this from happening? I am far older than you, boy." Kooky says to ludwig with an agitated grunt that shocked ludwig to his core. "Just..just trust me." Kooky utters. "When would you want to speak with him?" Ludwig asks, unsure of what kooky's motive is.

-Ludwig pov-

He's...older than me? Why has he never said that me before?! I have have known him all of my life...he's been there to at least comfort me when i was young, and his influence has helped with a lot of ideas to help defeat mario...some of which had come close to actually beating him, but never succeeded! But now? This is something that i have never once seen from kooky. Could he..could he actually be from the ancient past and never told me?!

-Kooky pov-

So..after so many years..it is all coming back to the surface. I kept quiet about it out of shame, but i cannot do so any longer. I knew one day this would one day happen, and the fact that the von ghoul family and the magishadow were mentioned...i knew. I knew that i could no longer hide, but i chose to keep quiet in hopes that it would not be dragged out any further. I was wrong, and now all the painful moments of the past are about to be revealed. I have held my anger in for so long, and took it out on ludwig's family to alleviate myself from the pain...the shame...the guilt of not being able to save those kids...but it was only for a temporary moment.

Perhaps...with max...there is a chance?

-Ludwig pov-

"If what has been said is all true, then...surely you know who marx is, correct?" I ask him, believing that since marx seems to know what's going on, then surely kooky must know! "I have no memory of him ever existing. This marx creature is new to me." Kooky responds. Impossible...i can't believe it...they never met? It's quite obvious that marx has no malicious intent towards max, but i will always have my eye on him. "That is for me to decide. But do me a favor...don't be surprised if i have let out aggressive anger towards max." Kooky says, giving a blunt answer first, before giving the indication that max's eventual encounter won't exactly be a pleasant one.

I am scared for max...kooky is known for being violent and sometimes verbally abusive towards others, but not with girls. Sure, he might yell at them, but he's never physically attacked them. I'm just thankful that mario has never had to deal with him. Not that i give a damn about him...i would much rather see dad beat him than kooky.

-Narration-

Just outside ludwig's door max had just set door on the second floor when he hears ludwig and someone else talking. "Who is that..?" Max wonders, but didn't stand there long when bowser had arrived with junior in his arms who is already fast asleep. "You can hear them talking can you?" Bowser asks. "Yeah..but how is it that i have never met him?" Max asks. "It's..difficult to explain. But i have no doubt that you will encounter him at some point." Bowser says to max, worried about his safety.

-Max pov-

I don't like where this is going. Whoever this kooky person is, he seems to be someone i have never physically met. I better make sure i'm prepared for this meeting.

-Bowser pov-

It's a good thing that my son's room is close to my room...he's always wanted to be close with me, and he always wanted to be just like his old man. As for max? I now worry about him. Even more so when it's inevitable that he and kooky will meet. Kooky can be rather violent at times...he's even tried to to attack me once! None of which max is aware of. What's worse is the thought that the dark star  seems to be  playing a sick mind game with him...playing on his emotions...i will have answers, and i WILL have them soon rather than later!

-Narration-

"Good night, kiddo." Bowser says before walking up to the third floor. "Good night." Max says before walking to his room. He is very wary of a lot of things. One being xaczxar and the vision he has seen, whether or not the dark star is playing mind games with him, and finally, the one about kooky. He has no idea what will happen, no idea what to expect from tomorrow, and now he has no idea what the concealment spell has ultimately done to him aside from him no longer being human.

For now, all he can do is get some sleep...he will need it knowing that the uncertainty he and his family will start to finally unravel.

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