Hey everyone! It's been a while! Just want you to know, I plan to go through and edit the chapters, so I hope to get this book in good shape within the month so we can start updating it! It would help a lot if you could leave helpful tips below each chapter, just to let me know what you might like to see.
Don't like a character? Is the pace too fast or slow? Are you confused about something> Do I describe certain scenes too much? Heck, just say "Eh, could be better". I want to hear from you!
Lastly, please keep in mind that you should probably go through and reread the story. It will help you remember stuff that you forgot, and I guarentee that there will be new scenes and new information! Just look for the "Edited" at the beginning of a chapter to see which ones are all pretty now!
Enjoy ------>