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By SaucyMontana

Analise
July 19
12:55 pm

"I swear you would think we some fifty year olds in 22 year old bodies" I said to Dre as we laid in the bed.

"I ain lyin cause ion feel like gettin up"

"Me either"

I stretched my arm out, hitting him in the face on accident as I let out a yawn and he pushed my arm

"Heavy ass hand"

I couldn't help but laugh, rubbing his face "my bad baby.... I wish I could live like this everyday. No responsibility just laying up, traveling and doing what I wanna do... like my sister"

"Nah yo sister got responsibilities. She just don't give a fuck"

"And that's sad but now she pregnant again"

"Forreal?" Dre looked over at me, laughing

"Yeah and I will never feel bad when she start struggling to take care of that one"

"Yes you will"

"No I won't"

"You say that now but yo heart ain gone let you be like that. You got too good of a heart and you love yo family too much regardless"

"Maybe but Dre I can't do no more. I've helped my sister out more than I should have and I always have her ass to kiss in return. And it's like it shouldn't even have to be like that. Especially when I'm the youngest acting like the damn oldest"

"It be like that sometimes"

"But it shouldn't have to be though. I wish I could be like how you are with Darius and emoni. Darius stay ready to shoot bout you"

"Darius ass just always tryina find a reason to shoot. You blink at that nigga wrong and he ready to shoot. Ol trigger happy ass"

Dre's phone dinged from a text message so he grabbed it, seeing who it was

"GET HER MONI! GET HER!......BEAT THAT BITCH ASS EMONI. FUCK HER UP!" I could hear a video playing on his phone so I looked and to my surprise it was emoni fighting Aysia in the parking lot of the mall surrounded by a crowd

"What the hell" I muttered watching as emoni just straight beat Aysia's ass.

We leave outta state and everybody going wild.

Dre just casually watched the video as if it wasn't his sister and babymomma fighting each other. Once it was over he FaceTimed emoni who quickly answered standing in the bathroom while cleaning her face with a rag

"Yea favorite brother" she smiled and I laughed

"That girl crazy as hell"

"The hell happened?" Dre asked

"Yo bitch ass babymomma do too much of this" she did the talking motion with her hand "and she thought she was bold with that corny ass shit she put on Instagram last night. Like no bitch!"

"What she put on Instagram?"

"A video of another nigga that she barely even know her damn self holding my niece telling Gigi to call him daddy. And Dre I understand that you claim you done and you'on want no problems but that most definitely crossed the line and she heard my mouth so we went back and forth all last night and I told her it's on sight when I caught her"

"And you ran into her at the mall?" I asked and emoni shook her head

"No. I knew she was gone hide so I clocked her damn ig story and saw she was at the mall so I pulled up. Then her nigga gone get in my face like he bout some shit. Boy must not know who my brother is. I'll have Darius knock his ass off real quick" she said before going back to cleaning her face "and now I got scratches all over my face"

"She got my daughter calling another nigga what?" Dre finally spoke again

"DADDY" emoni repeated "and I hate to say it cause I love my Gigi baby... but I wish you would've made her get an abortion like Darius told you to cause you stuck dealing with this for 18 plus years"

Dre let out a deep sigh "Lemme call you back"

He then hung up the phone and sat it down before looking over at me

"You okay?" I asked

"Gimme a reason not to get on the next flight back home and beat the shit outta my babymomma and her nigga"

"Well...... for one if you do that you'll not only go to jail for putting your hands on her but you'll violate that protection order. Two.. regardless how you feel about her, she's still your daughter's mother. Three... emoni already did that good enough and four... you out here right now to take a break from the bullshit Dre. I need you to vacation boo." I said to him truthfully as I sat up in the bed, thinking "you know what. We going out tonight"

"I thought we said-"

I cut him off by putting my hand up "ion care bout that nomore. You enjoying this trip Deandre. Ya babymomma is NOT ruining this trip! If so Ima beat her ass myself"

"Ana.."

"Ion wanna hear it. We going out so go ahead and sleep in if you want but when nighttime hit you waking that ass up"

"I ain gotta do shit"

"Yes the hell you will"

Dre muttered something under his breath while I walked off to the bathroom, closing the door behind me

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11:48 pm

"Must be outta yo mind you think we ain spinnin for bro, we spinning for sho. Had a switch on me, not a thirty eight dummy, but we be spinning for ghost. The pull up for sho, we spinnin the cribs and the traps for sho. We spinnin his shows. And we took L's for sho. But in Chicago they know we winnin for sho" I drunkenly rapped lil durk while I held onto my cleavage which acted like it didn't wanna stay still in my dress tonight while I danced around in the club

I was most definitely 3 strong ass drinks and 2 shots in and I was most definitely feeling myself. The minute I bent over and started twerking on Dre I knew I was most definitely through because my lil thang was most definitely moving which was something I absolutely can not do sober

Dre was most definitely lit as well and was hyping me up like crazy. When I stopped twerking and turned around to face dre and he pulled up on my dress some

"Yo titties bout to fall out and shit"

"I knowww"

I then laid my head on him "ima regret this in the morning"

"Drinking?"

I nodded " yeah"

"Hell yeah"

"Can I get y'all anything else?" One of the bottle girls asked as she approached us

"Nah we good"

She nodded while walking off and I lifted my head up watching her walk off before looking at Dre

"I wanna do that?"

"Do what?"

"Be a bottle girl... or a stripper"

Dre laughed and so did I

"Why you laughingggg?"

"Cause you drunk"

"I am.. that, I am" I nodded while grabbing the bridge of my nose "yeah I think I'm ready to go"

"Come on" he grabbed my hand and as we started to walk off to leave, thot shit started playing so I let his hand go

"We can leave after this, this my shit"

I started dancing on Dre again and he couldn't help but laugh. I'm pretty sure he was kinda used to it at this point being that it wasn't my first time being drunk around him but he can if, I didn't care. Drunk Ana is a wholeeee different breed

"Showin out" Dre said as he gripped onto my waist while I danced on him. I continued to grind right against the dick because that was what I most definitely wanted tonight

I surprisingly danced on him too the whole time the song played but again I knew I was gonna regret that in the morning the way my 50 in a 22 year old body is set up.

Once I was done dancing we eventually left. The club we went to was literally down the road from the Airbnb we were staying at so we walked. Well I took 5 steps outside of the club and almost bust my ass so Dre carried me on his back

"You know what" I randomly said "can I be honest for a minute"

"Ion even know if I wanna know"

"Forreal Dre" I looked down at him while he continued walking "honestly I was scared when I first got with you"

"Why?"

"Because. I didn't know what to expect. I'm not too big on relationships and shit because I've always been played. And you, you fine as hell, you make money.. no matter what eat you get it, you make it, you a great father regardless of what Aysia do. You was just too good to be true"

"So you was waiting for a fuck up"

"Yeahhhh. As crazy as it sounds. I don't even know what you saw in me cause I was most definitely looking a mess when you first met me"

"Who said you looked a mess?"

"Me"

Dre laughed "no you didn't babygirl"

"Well still. I don't know what you saw in me, or even still see cause the way I broke up with you was wrong and I honestly feel bad. Especially cause you waited"

"You broke up wimme for the right intentions, even if it ain last long and I can't be mad at that. The fact that you care about me getting my daughter that much says a lot"

"Yeah... I do.... And I still want you to get her"

"In due time mama" he said as we approached the Airbnb

"Can't be if you dropped the case. I should drop kick your ass for doing that" I bluntly blurted out and Dre looked at me

"Damn it's like that"

"I did not mean for that to come out. It's the liquor talking. But it's also the truth"

"At this point what ima do Ana? I'm tired of fighting"

I hopped off of his back, stumbling a little but got my balance straight and grabbed his hands

"Gianna needs you more than you need her honestly Dre because you see where shits headed with her momma. Do WHATEVER you gotta do to get your babygirl. You don't even have to think everything through right now just start by reopening that case. Please" I begged him and he sighed

"Ima think on it"

"Okay. That's cool. But in the meantime can you open the door because a bitch bout to pass out and sleep right here on the ground" I told him and he shook his head

"Ol drunk ass"


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