Author: @sboufath
Genre: Science Fiction
Summary: Kaley Langstrom is your typical 15-year-old girl. She lives in her ordinary house in her ordinary neighborhood, she goes to her ordinary high school, and has her ordinary friends. Well, she's not that typical: Kaley has an obsession with the weird and the paranormal. She believes that humans are not the only living beings in the galaxy. But others do not agree with her. Until one night something not so ordinary happens that will change Kaley's life forever. She later makes a new friend who is far, far from ordinary. Kaley wants to introduce her new friend to this world as well as protect him from those who might see him as a threat, especially if they're from the government. Will Kaley keep her secrecy protected or end up in the clutches of harm?
Age Category: Young Adult
Chapters Reviewed: Complete Book
•MY REVIEW•
•Category 1- cover & description•
The cover is really cool in the description is OK.
4.5/5
•Category 2- word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence & paragraph structure•
There were some grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors. The word choice could definitely use some work. Some of the paragraphs should be split up into separate paragraphs.
10/20
•Category 3- plot, setting, background/stories, characters•
The plot is interesting. The characters really didn't make much sense. They rationally did things all the time and they weren't well developed.
12/30
•Category 4- writing styles & pace of the story•
There wasn't really anything interesting about the authors writing style. The pace of the store was super slow in the beginning.
8/15
•Category 5- details & descriptions•
The author was a little limited on their descriptive words. They used a lot of the same words.
10/20
•Category 6- originality & overall creativity•
The story is really creative and original.
10/10
54.5/100