The whole story is getting a facelift!
I'm afraid some of the story was hard to read...and it was just... cringe Worth!
Part 1, has been re-written and more to follow!
What caused this?
I showed my sister this and honestly she said it was awful and the mistakes and story was just so hard to read and follow...she made me question if this was even worth anymore parts...
But I decided to continue it but first I want to fix things up..so the story more flows with less side plots
(The part where al was try to save the reader from the ex will be no more..
The pages are fixed and re-written will be tagged with a *redone* in the chapter section
YOU ARE READING
Alastor x reader
FanfictionBack in the living world alastor killed you... years later after purgatory...you are sent to hell...and guess who you meet.... (Just somthing im working on )
