AvNeil - A Special Bond of Destiny

Hello Again 😊

I received a very absurd comment from one of the readers. I don't know what the intention of this person was, but it seemed like they are not understanding the character of Avni and Neil. I generally don't bother much about folks who give negative feedback, but I do want to know this from my readers because this is the first time I am writing something. Is it not coming across as obsession through the story? They both are obsessively in love with their respective partners (i.e. Avni with Vidyut and Neil with Juhi). And even though they are aware of their relationship, they do not want to accept it, because they are blinded at the moment. I hope this is clear. Also, please understand that characters set in an alternate universe, will not have the same characterization that is originally depicted in the show. I am trying my best however to make them as much close as possible to the onscreen characters.

I hardly receive any feedback from most people here, and amidst that, feedback which says they don't understand the characters makes me doubt my writing as well as lose motivation.🙁 Please let me know through your feedback/comments on this post. Kindly comment if you are able to understand the tone of the characters. I hope I am not confusing anyone. Thank you once again and a big hug to everyone❤