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Chapter 1: BEGINNING

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Slowly Frisk drifted into consciousness, eyes opening to take in the sight of a huge cavern, a small pinpoint of light shining far above. Despite feeling like she'd been hit by a car, she smiled. It was good to be back. She stood up and stretched, bones aching. The bed of flowers she had risen from seemed reluctant to release her, and she was seriously considering going back to sleep. Ignoring the impulse, she began walking along a rock path towards a doorway in the side of the cavern. She had important things to do; she was going to SPARE everyone, and then maybe live for a while in a unified underground, or head to the surface with the others. Who knew, it was up to her, but first she needed to get some of the basic things sorted.
"Hi there!"
A golden flower was waiting for her, sprouting out of a small garden. It had two devious eyes and a charming smile, the likes of which were not normally seen on plants. Inwardly she sighed, but she smiled at it, hoping things would go differently this time.
"I'm Flowey! Flowey the flower!"
"No shit." Frisk muttered under her breath.
"What?"
"Nothing!" She responded quickly, smiling innocently.
"Hmmm... You're new to the underground, aren'tcha? Golly you must be so confused. Someone ought to teach you how things work around here! I guess little old me will have to do. Ready? Here we go!"
Five white pellets spear above Flowey.
"Down here, LOVE is shared through little white... 'friendliness pellets'. You want some LOVE don'tcha? Move around! Get as many as you can!"
So no, he hasn't changed at all Frisk thought sadly. She felt bad for him. He was empty. He couldn't feel anything. He had thought he was on top of the world, until she came along and stole the power of Determination right out from under his nonexistent feet (Petals?), over and over again.
And right at that moment as Frisk was feeling sorry for him, he decided to remind her why he deserved everything he'd gotten. Five white pellets slammed into her like mini-rockets, knocking her to the ground. She spat blood, and a blinking red number in the corner of her vision told her she had one HP left. But then something happened. Something different. Something so strange and unexplained that she was left baffled for the rest of the timeline.
"Oh golly are you ok? I thought you'd dodge... you dodged last time!"
Flowey was concerned. About her. After attacking her. And he remembered a past timeline.
Frisk got up slowly. This was new for her.
"You... you remember? What the hell is going on here!?" She demanded.
And then Flowey broke. Just completely broke. Half of his face became Asriels face, and the other half remained a flower. Both sides smiled, one menacing and the other gentle.
"You fool." The flower half spoke in a distorted voice.
"Oh! You've fallen down, haven't you? The other asked.
Frisk closed her eyes. What. The. Hell. Was. That?! The abomination was horrifying. There was no other way to put it. Waves of revulsion passed over her as the half-friend half-foe creature struggled to talk.
Something was seriously wrong with the world. Panicking, Frisk tried to reload an earlier save.
She couldn't.
She couldn't SAVE.
She was just like them now. Just like everyone else whose world had been RESET thousands of times, at the mercy of a god-like force, constantly at risk of being RESET and losing all memory of everything that happened.
Oh god she thought before passing out.

So this is my first time writing! I'm probably not very good, but if you could leave some comments on what you'd like next, that'd be great! It would really help me to make the story better. It might seem a bit weird right now but it should get better, or at least explained a bit as the plot progresses (I hope). Anyway, I know I haven't even introduced Chara yet, I'm going pretty slow, hopefully that's ok. I'm planning to have chapters alternating between Frisk's and Chara's perspectives, so hopefully I'll bring Chara into the story next chapter, although the whole Charisk thing is going to go pretty slowly... Chara is gonna start off as a very, very messed-up person. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed!