Naruto: love from neglect

prelims

appear on the screen "will the two contestants please come down to the stadium" finished the jonin as choji and zaku walk down from the stands about five feet away from each other as the procter starts the match zaku brought up his one good arm leaving his palm open and aimed at choji and yelled "sound cannon" again I could sense the chakra that he was shooting from his hands it seemed that choji already knew of this as he jumped out of the way then did some hand signs as he bloated his midsection and then made his limbs (including head) go into his body and started spinning saying some weird thing with each limb that went in, and chakra filled air shot out the plain weirdness of the whole thing made isobu wake up and look at him like he was insane and kurami-koi shut up

(yes I can sense what my tenants are doing, looking at, and/or hearing, what the fuck naruto get back in their I dont need you out here I got enough demons with me to begin with, huh what do you mean 'enough demons to begin with', I mean your a demon too dumb ass how when you marked  kurami you whent from half to full why because I felt like it, oh okay but I, no get the fuck out of here I barly have enough dimension tape as is *kicks naruto in the face sends him flying back into his world* good now let's fix this*grabs roll of dimension tape and fixes fourth wall* now back to the story)

'that was just weird' "you can say that again" "yes, yes you can" the last one came from isobu as choji started spinning as zaku broke from his stupor and started his next attack bit was to slow as he had to dodge out of the way of the attack as he dodged choji turned and hit the guy lets just say the man was flatter than flat stanley (again I don't own that either) and was out of it 'okay that was just pathetic' to which my tailed beasts just nodded their agreement "winner choji akimichi of the leaf next is" says the jonin as the names change again "neji hyuuga vs. hinata hyuuga, will the two contestants please come down to the arena" finished the jonin and I could see hinata shaking "hey hinata what's wrong why are you shaking" I asked hinata as she looks at me a bit afraid "I just don't have the best family relations with neji is all" hina says with a nervous smile as she walked down to the floor (same battle as cannon) I immediately flash in front of neji along with the other senses right before he could kill her I had my sword on his neck kurenai a kunai at his back asuma and guy had each one  of neji's hands after getting him to fully stop hinata coughed up blood and fainted 'shit to many vital hits major damage but nothing fatal' but why did she freeze and return to the level she was at when I met her?' I ask myself as I catch her before she hits the ground then give her to the medic nin I bend down and put three of my left fingers in hinata's blood the make a fist with said hand and rise again as I say "neji hyuga, I will show you that fate doesn't decide everything and I will show you the uzumaki meaning of family, I make this oath, this oath of blood" I said with hinata's blood dripping from my fist solidifying my oath he just glard and walked back up to the stands as the jonin called "winner: neji hyuuga next and final battle of the preliminary rounds" the final names appear "naruto uzumaki of the leaf vs. dosu of the sound please come down to the stadium" finishes the jonin

walks down the stairs after he gets into place I can hear kurenai-sensei and shika talking and saying that from the look in my eye the guy should run which is probably not wrong I mean come on (XD) I just watch my best friend get the snot beat out of her by her cousin and for a true uzumaki it's family above all, either way I'll give the guy a warning "look im pissed right now so, forfeit now or you get maimed or crippled" I warned the man with a sickly sweet smile that promised pain but he just ignored me 'oh well his funeral' then the procter started the match I started weaving hand signs for a water style jutsu he just stood there then flicked the thing on his arm a few seconds later I lost my balance and there's blood coming out of my ear 'what the, he just messed with my inner ear channel but how the  only thing he did was flick that thing on his arm' but then figured it out 'so ge uses that metal thing on his arm to make sound waves then amplifies those waves with his chakra messing with my balance, I guess I should thank the villagers for this one because if it wasn't for all those times I was nearly drained of blood, made it so that attack is useless on me' so I drew my so sword and channeled raiton chakra threw it causing the frequency to go to a level that can cancel his 'although he is still able to make me falter which would cost me so let's cancel out his attack I charge at him my sword in hand and charged with raitin chakrahe flick his device again and focussed his chakra through it sending out increasing the chakra in my sword and then flicking it myself countering his attack leaving him confused enough for me to get over to him and leave a gash across his chest and leaving him shocked with my raiton chakra snapping out of his stupor he charged at me too, obviously trying to increase the power of his attack so I increased the power of my counter when we were two feet apart he flicked his gauntlet the same second I flicked my sword canceling his attack I the struck him by cutting him in the chest then I shunshined behind him and sliced his back then I stepped forward and cut into his shoulder then stabbed between his ribs twisted it and sliced out of him I flicked the blood off, and sheathed my sword the then the procter called as the guy hit the floor from the damage  "winner naruto uzumaki, will the winners of the prelims please come to the floor" all the winners of the prelims were came down and stood with their teammates if they won it went like this the remainders of team seven through nine in numerical order the sand team and then me and shika, we each draw a piece of paper with a number on it it goes like this menma eleven, naruko nine, choji ten, shino four, neji two, lee seven, terimari five, kankuro three, gaara eight, shika four, and me one. after we all tell the jonin our numbers he holds up a board and says "round there is set up tournament style the battles will be like this,
round one: naruto vs. neji
round two: kankuro vs. shino
round three: shikamaru vs. terima
round four: gaara vs. lee
round five: choji vs. naruko
menma gets free pass to second round
round six :round one winner vs. round two winner
round seven: round three vs. round four winner
round eight: menma vs. round five winner
semi finales: round seven winne vs. round eight winner
round six winner moves onto finales
finales: round six winner vs. semi finales winner"

'yes I get the prick right off the bat I couldnt get luckier thank you kami' "you have one month to train and recover meat at the stadiom in the village then by noon" finishes the jonin. after that I shunshined to my room and crashed on my bed, and snuggled with kurami, in my mind scape.

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okay sorry about how long it took but its back to normal amount of words 2564 please dont kill me