Fairy Tail Next Generation: The Lost Dragneel

Chapter 1-Mystery Girl

Igneel's POV
      Her chocolate brown eyes looked into my multicolored ones. She gave a weak smile and said " I love you, big brother." I didn't say anything I just cried. Before I could say something a bright light surrounded her. She started to float, I tried to keep her on the ground but she slipped out of my hold. The light got brighter so I closed my eyes. When I opened my eyes I didn't see her.

     I woke up in a cold sweat. I looked at the clock 6:30. I took a shower and got dressed. I walked downstairs to the smell of mom's cooking. Dad was sitting at the table arguing with Happy. Mom handed me a plate of pancakes. I ate them and left the house. I walked all the way to Fairy Tail.

       The guild was as normal as it could be. Fights breaking out, chairs being thrown. I sighed and walked to the bar and ordered a vanilla milkshake. Just gonna be another regular day.

~~~~~~~Somewhere Else~~~~~
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      Magnolia. After arriving here we set off to Fairy Tail. Zera and August were walking at both of my sides. We were in front of two large doors leading to Fairy Tail. Even standing outside I could hear all the chaos going on in there.

   "Are you sure this is the strongest guild in Fiore?" I asked,nobody in particular.

   "Yes." They both said. I sighed and together we all pushed open the doors. It got really quiet and I knew all eyes were on us. Zera cleared her throat.

   "We would like to see Makarav." The guild was deathly quiet. I was actually thinking of running into the forest.
" What do you want?" a voice said, I look around to find the speaker. There he was a little old man standing on the railing of the second floor.
" Hi Maky!!" Zera shouted, I snorted at the nickname.
"Excuse me? Do I know you?" he asked Zera.
"It's me, Zera!" she said taking off the hood of her cloak. Makarav's eyes widened from realizing who she was.

      "Follow me" he commanded, we all followed him. We were all getting weird looks from Fairy Tail. As we were entering Makarav's office, I was thinking of ways to escape. I have to leave now. Zera and Makarav were talking but I didn't listen. Even though they didn't show it, I knew Zera and August were on guard. I mean last time I tried to run , I did kick August were the sun don't shine but still.
"And what's your name?" said Makarav,I faced the old man. I'm not telling you I thought. The old man sighed and went back to talking to Zera. After they stopped talking we were out on the second floor the old man then shouted "OK LISTEN UP BRATS! THIS IS OUR NEW MEMBER OF THE GUILD SO TREAT HIM WELL!" Once he was done shouting I walked towards August.

"Hey dude, are you joining Fairy Tail?" a smile tugged his mouth. "I'm already apart of this guild. I think he meant you." he was now smiling while Zera was giggling.

"So boy what do you think about your new guild." I smiled at him then two seconds later Zera, August and two others were holding me down on the floor while three redheads were making a protective wall between me and the old geezer. I was yelling at him and trying to lunge at him even with all these people holding me to the ground.

After about two hours I calmed down but only a little bit. Zera then explained that I was a girl. After that he apologized but I was still mad.
"Sorry about that um miss." I ignored him. "Also old gezzer I don't want to be apart of your guild." I said as I was walking down the stairs to the first floor.

"What do you mean!?" the old man shouted confused. I turned to see the old man. "Read my lips I'm not joining your stupid guild." After I said that all hell broke lose. People were yelling to take that back, I looked back. My eyes widened Luna, Gale, and Reiki but they looked so much different from the kids I grew up with. I turned and quickly walked out of there.

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