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Making wonders together

Book: Making wonders together

Author: Abhidhi16

Genre: General Fiction

Status: Ongoing

Chapters read: 33

Cover: I'm in love with the cover seriously! It looks vibrant and also suites the story very well.

Title: I'm not convinced with your title. Though you have mentioned it once in a chapter it doesn't go well with others. I personally would prefer a very better title for it as the story is so much interesting.

Description: Description was the only reason that made me read this book but after going through the whole story i realised that it doesn't go with what you have described. As per your description the story should mainly concentrate on Neil and Aditi but when i read the story it was about all his/her known close relatives. You could've described it like the short summary that you've given to us.

Characters: The book at first revolves around Aditi , her brother Raghav ,her friend Nikitha and Neil. Later it concentrates on Adhiv , Priya(Neil's cousin), Arjun , Amaya. Everyone's story is well described without any clumsiness. I love the way you give importance to each character in every chapter.

Plot: I'm quiet impressed by the plot. Though it's relatable in few places , you never failed to make it more interesting. The attitude of each character and their opposites is what i love the most. 

Chapters: I like the way the story started. the first few chapters are like a dream,the marriage alliance,the way they meet accidentally,Raghav's misunderstanding, Neil having crush over aditi since his college time, Raghav and Aditi's bond, Neil's family and all.

After Neil and Aditi's marriage the story takes a diversion to Raghav and Nikkita's love for each other and how they couldn't accept it. Simultaneously the author writes about Priya and Adhiv's beginnings. I'm amazed by the way you relate all the threads without any confusions. 

With all these new relationships getting stronger,now enters Priya. She is Raghav's colleague and also his secret admirer. she becomes a doctor only because Raghav is also a medico. She loves him since a very long time but never expresses it. she get's frustrated after knowing Nikki's love for Raghav and kidnaps them. The later part is what i hate personally but love it as a reviewer. I was engrossed thinking how can one person be good at every genre. Yes,the way you wrote the hate and evil part are lit. your way of explaining every emotion is very real. well, i don't want to disclose the story so i ain't gonna write a lot about it. 

After all the fuss in everyone's life everything becomes perfect again and so many things happen in a good way that are going to change few life's now. In-between all this drama there is another love story of Adhiv and Priya(my fav duo, so i prefer not to tell anything about them. just that they are cool.). 

Overall: A book i would love to reread,an amazing skills of writing, cool plot.                                              A book worth reading and be loved as well.

Suggestions: # Work on description

                          # Give an apt title that would be more catchy and attractive.

                         # Work on  Neil's story as it's being neglected.

                        # Personally i would love to read some romance between Neil and Aditi which is necessary because of the way you've written their feelings. people look forward for some action which expresses more than few words.

Note: This is completely my point of view. Respect everyone's opinion.#nooffence

Review by: Pranushna

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