Foreword

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Before you start reading, just be very aware that, although I wrote this when I was twelve years old, some of the grammar, spelling, sentence structure, and plot holes have been edited and revised. Also, many, many, many, many things have been added into the story. Where one detail goes out, another comes in. That's the glory of having matured quite a bit after writing the original draft of this story.

This being said, I have left in some major plot holes that seem like they are serious writing mistakes, but actually tie in with the sequel.

So, that's just a heads-up for you all. Thanks for being interested and reading this story! Without you guys, Pip wouldn't be where it is today. If you want to read the fully revised edition of Pip, go ahead and buy it!

But, without further ado, here's the (partially) revised full short story:

Pip - By McKenzie Reid.

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