So yeah made a book cuz I have nothing to do this summer. I really like dark stuff so prepare yourself for heartbreak or regrettable laughter.
So the mcs here are twins of the Grey family, they are orphans cuz parents in a fantasy light novel is hard to write
Helion Baltazar Grey-
The big bro of the two. He is also known as the responsible one. He's the kind of guy to revoke you for trying to help him. He's also a ticking time bomb of anger
Lucius Levi Grey-
The "I'm never drunk but drink anyway" type of guy, basically he's really into socialising. He likes beer and ale NEVER drinks wine apparently to him it "weakens the fighters soul"
They both hate the nobles, so much so that they think of them not as fellow humans but as "Corrupt pig whores". Mostly because of their actions abusing the peasants and countless human/Elven slaves they bought off from the black market.
The world here is a difficult thing to describe probably because a dessert might be next to a mountain or a sea right next to the tundras. But the location their hometown is in is a general plain with good soil and very close to a pond, Southwest of them in fact. To the east of them is a mountain range spanning 134 miles northwest and 286 miles southeast. Things beyond the wall of mountains are unknown for simple peasants. The capital is directly to the north of them and is 50-ish miles away. The capital will be a secret until the reveal... That might not even come, who knows if I'll finish this? Any way it's set in a medieval age where kingdoms and empires run amuck. Life as a peasant is hard duhh, but the most important part is that soldiers and other militia are given extra *cha-ching* because "Serving the country is the greatest and most noble work out there" as their father put it. Any way enjoy the book?? I made a couple mistake so just keep it in mind that I dont have a proofreader other than myself and you know thats kinda like hard to check any of MY work with MY views... Ahhh to shorten it I mean its like knowing what your favorite flavor of icecream is based on my favorite flavor (*good*vanilla). It took more than a year to wright half of this damn book but I don't expect anyone to read it.
Oh right this will start with a opening I feel very proud of... absolutely shitty so bear with it
I know you won't take this read as a serious one based on this introduction but I promise you this will be somewhat entertaining.
Now, please enjoy.
YOU ARE READING
Eclipse
FantasyFollow the story of two brother's rise to power as they destroy the ones they deem responsible for their despair
