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Cover;
I will say I love your cover a lot. The picture is something I will say you are lucky to have as a cover to your book. But if you still have a copy of the picture, you can add the font of the writing. It is quite not visible.
Blurb;
Yep, as I was reading your blurb, I predicted words you will say next and coincidentally, I came face to face with it. Your blurb, generally is well written, I like your use of words and I bet it will attract more reads to your book.
Title;
I love the name of your book, as even said from it, it symbolizes something 'like no other'
Plot;
Every paranormal has a different plot and that is what makes it special. I like yours, how it goes, flows..... But you should try working on your organizing, it shows that you have a lot to write and it jumbled up on you making you to scatter everything up.
Character Development;
I like your characters' personalities, each owning one it self. I love how you explained on their feelings, it makes you book look real as it may give a reader a feeling of the character.
Language;
You have tenses problem, the small things we have done in our kindergarten classes are things we don't show much importance to, but you will be suprissed to see that it is a reason for a writer's failure. Try to read some articles on tenses so that you can improve on it.
Request proof reading to have another person's opinion and to clear the small mistakes you have.
As always, something I am used to saying in any of my reviews, English Language doesn't accept the use of abbreviations in something formal, unless in a character's speech.
You use too much of full stop, where you could have use a comma or (;)
Miscellaneous;
You use more of conversations than a description of what is happening, this prevents the reader from picturing out more on the surrounding of the book. Having dialogues more often makes your book to posses more of the drama features than those of prose.
You don't update much, and that is something readers don't like about books they are reading. It makes them turn around to another book, some temporarily and others permanently.
I really like the suspence of your book how a chapter ends is so amazing, and how my eyes try to skip a line to know what will happen next just with eagerness is really marvelous.
In naming your chapters, you should either write the name of the chapter only, or write 'Chapter ...' Or write the chapter before it.
You should try to differenciate between when a character is talking or thinking about the past, maybe using Italics or bold.
Your constant switching of Point of views might confuse a reader. You should try to stick up with one.
Overall;
I really like and enjoyed your book, you know, to go out of the normal lofe pattern and that is why I enjoy paranormal books. Try to look into my review and get to correct what we can. Improvement is all we want.
Reviewed by; Admin Tynker {Tynkerrrr}
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