Forgive me, will you? (II)

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Judged by: MT

Username: boldwriter4

Title of Book (actually more like a chapter but idk): Forgive me, will you?

fUCCKKKKKK WHY MUST YOU RUIN MY BEAUTIFUL DAY JUST TO READ THIS FUCKING HELL I SWEAR TO GOD AHHHHHHHHH-

But the title kinda gives some of the plot away, letting know that it's angst so-

Grammar: For that 'Slap' part you can use italics and yOU FORGOT TO ADD THE GODDAMN FULL STOP WRITER.

Furthermore, it's called' FOR FUCK'S SAKE' okay.

Context: Unique, since it starts with no 'No dun leave me bae' 'sorry i must go' 'fuck why' and then end with a 'fUCK YOU'.

Uh I think most of you know what I mean. Happy angst. Yeah, happy angst. Legit, ain't it. Also Shuichi stop being so emo .

Also I see that Alexis and Shuichi can be great friends eh.

I like that paragraph that literally screams that Shuichi is a short emo boi that needs to be taken care of.

Summary: Uh angst?? Between siblings?? Don't worry no incest, just sibling love.

Cover Book: -nil-

Ratings: Normally I would give one-shots a 7 or 6 but this Imma give you a goddamn 8 outta 10 'kay.

Uh my first time judging so eh.





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