1. Write shorter chapters that focus on one topic or challenge.
2. Allow them to seek appreciation from the women in their life.
3. Don't have them chase down an ulterior motive unless it is a serious threat.
4. Have them intimidate others to get their way.
5. Let them react poorly to being told they are wrong.
6. Don't ever have them turn down a challenge.
7. Let them try to impress a lady, no matter how embarrassing it may be.
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RandomThis book contains -Words to use instead of said, says, went, etc -Personalities -Characteristics - words to describe movement, looks, body language and more. and a whole lot of other things.
