I'd you're new welcome to my book. Now, this is my first book and I wrote it while I was 13.
It is now going to put under some MAJOR construction, so if you choose to continue reading it, that's fine.
1. The first dew chapters are short.
2. This is a cliche book, and since I was so young the characters move a lot quicker than they would in real life, its fiction.
3. There's a scene with Tray's dad, Zoe's Mom, and Zoe, that holds a conversation about adoption. I wasn't aware at the time that it made them siblings so I will try my best to change it around, no need to comment anymore that they're related.
4. There may be a lot of errors and a lotttt of cringey areas. Trust me. I cringed a lot while reading my book, but its okay.
My focus:
I aim to make the chapters linger and to reduce the cringey parts. Areas will make more sense and this book will become Better.
Thanks to all those who read the book, even with those issues, and I thank you, if you still choose to read this book.
Love to my readers ❤❤❤❤
YOU ARE READING
Finding Her ✔ (Editing)
Teen Fiction"You're mine now." He says looking at me straight in the eye. And I nod. Its kinda breathtaking the way he looks at me. And the fact that he just called me "His" Doesn't help. "Say it" he demands. "I'm yours" -------------------- Zoe is just trying...
