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I'm not a pro especially about rules but I will give my opinion on your story based on what I read as a whole.
I may not be as detailed as I can be especially on technicali...
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Your story plot is hindi masyadong cliche. Nakakalito ba? What I mean is usually kasi ang nagsesecret identity are agents pero Yong sa story mo at trainees sa magkalabang entertainment company.
I still have to see what will happen to your characters on the next chapters since I got to read the 3 first chapters pa. Update mo nalang soon.
Okay, punt tayo sa set up ng content mo. I guess you need to check on the following areas and improve it.
📜 may sentences ka na parang kulang and medyo awkward basahin. Alam KO Yong gusto mong tumbukin pero may kulang na isa o dalawang salita para mas madaling intindihin.
📜 tamang gamit ng punctuation like comma, period, hypen and ". May times kasi na nag period ka na pero dapat isang sentence lang yon. Maybe nagkamali ka lang nang paglagay nun.
📜 spelling is important and refrain from using jejemon words or Yong parang nagttxt ka.
📜 captilaize first letter ng first word sa sentence.
📜 better put translation sa mga Korean words na gamit mo.
Sa ngayon, excited ako mabasa ang next chapters. Make it exciting and sana mapukaw mo Yong cravings ko to flip the pages of your book.
Good luck to that! Keep on writing!
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