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What The Heart Says

Title: What The Heart says!

Genre: Poetry

Chapters I Read: Dedication & A/N + 11 chapters

Review: Your poems are relatable AF. Especially on the lines I commented on in Chapter 11. I would recommend not using commas after each line. Maybe center the poems but it could just be me used to seeing poems lined up that way. I saw no grammatical errors.

Something I want to address is this low self-esteem in your work. Do not underestimate yourself and your art! Your poems are absolutely amazing and I can already tell from just reading them that people are looking up to them and looking forward for the next update. I know what it's like to be hesitant about something you create. It will always be there. However, you should never let that stop you from flourishing and expanding your horizon. Most people are afraid of being criticized or showing other people their work because they think their ideas are going to be completely rejected. Show confidence in what you do! Don't let fear or the idea that you or your work is not good enough.

If you fear, how will you ever grow?

Rating(1-10): 10/10