Abducted with others

The Takening

" Mom I am leaving my friends are outside" said Raheema

"Ok know when curfew is and pay attention to your surroundings" said raheema's mom concerned 
"Ok mom"
I picked up my keys and phone off the counter and walked outside the house and texted my friend that I'm coming out

The text message
A: I'm out side
R: ok I'm coming out
A: Ok see you soon 😂

I hopped in the car
"Hey Alicia" I said excited
"Hey rah" she said Smiling at me
"You ready to go shopping" I said doing a happy dance
"Yeah always" she said nodding her head
Then she turned on the radio and played her favorite song
"And you just keep on taking me back and I don't know why you do cause I'm no good to you"
Then the mall showed up and we starting talking about the malls we were gonna shop at.
We started talking and walking around about all the boys in our school and how they were so disgusting. Then she talked about how she has 1 b in her math class and how mad she was cause she didn't get an A.
I wish I could get an A in math I have a d stop complaining I thought to my self
Then another thought popped up and I couldn't shake the feeling that we are being watched
"Hey Alicia do you have a feeling that you are being watched" I asked interrupting her

"Yeah I was just about to ask you that once I was finished bragging" she laughed

"No I'm being serious like I'm getting a bad feeling right now" I said sternly

"Ok ok just 1 more shop then we can go" she said with puppy eyes

"Oh ok " I said rolling my eyes

After we finished shopping it was around 10:30 but my curfew is supposed to be 11:00 we walked to the car and we were putting all of our bags in.

"Hey shopping with you was fun" I said excitedly

I didn't get a response so I said it again

"Hey SHOPPING with you was fun" I yelled laughing

Still no response that's weird I thought to myself
Maybe I should check on her still thinking
Then I walked to the drivers seat of the car and then i felt a hand behind me and blacked out

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