Rewrite?

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Hey guys what's up!
Been awhile Holy Ship!
Lots of view I am si proud of this guys and I'm glad you enjoyed it but I've seen it and oh god what's wrong with me back then....Yeah
Something was wrong with me Back then anyway guys
I'm thinking of rewriting
This but I'm asking you guys
Should I rewrite this?
Please comment guys I
Need your opinion
And help comment and love this story thanks!
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