Hime and Empress bring you another sweet and fluffy treat, the Marshmallow Critiques! What more could you ask for?
Do come along... read the first few parts for more info ^^
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Requests [open]
Critics [waiting li...
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Ava accepts critiques from Romance, ChickLit, Teen Fiction, Sci-Fi and Fanfiction genre books. She accepts both Mature and LGBT stories.
She is online everyday and accepts a maximum of five chapters only from the beginning of your book. There is no set maximum requests she allows at one time, as Ava is always available.
After payment, Ava will immediately start on her critique.
Payment
-Honest reads and comments on the book of her choice with the same amount of chapters
Ava thinks marshmallows are sweet, sweet, sweet!
Remember to comment your form into this chapter if you would like Ava to critique your story and don't forget to tag her avaleeson so that she knows!
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