Comatose (#Wattys2016)

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Third Person POV

Kalani was walking through the street, heading to school. She had the greatest life so far. She has had the dream life anyone could ever ask for.

But we all know after a while of everything going right and being perfect, something goes wrong.

One morning, Kalani woke up and started her daily routine. She showered, got dressed, brushed her teeth, put on her make-up and ate breakfast.

'Bye Mom. I love you. Thanks for breakfast." Kalani said as she gave her mom, Kira, a kiss on the cheek.

"Bye. Love you sweetie. Have fun at school." Kira replied.

Kalani went to the garage and went into her car. She opened the garage, put the key into the ignition. She drove off the school.

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School was normal. She saw her friends, kissed her boyfriend, got a crap ton of homework, you know the usually.

As she was driving home, she came to a red light. As the light turned green, she looked both ways to make sure it was clear and started driving straight.

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At work, Kira was getting ready for a business meeting when she got phone call.

"Hello" Kira said.

"Hi there. Is this Kira Hiliker" the person on the phone asked.

"Yes this is. Who are you?" Kira asked.

"I'm Dr. Col from Children's Hospital. Your daughter Kalani was in a car accident. She is currently surgery but she has a low chance of full recovery".