My Random And Bored Mind

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Hi clouds!!! The picture above is the picture I gave my sister, Addie, and she had the idea of the plot, I guess you could call it that, just like everyone other than me in this book will. This is not to show off how I might be better, but to show people we all are different people and are very unique. Continue.

Sisters version of story:
I was a happy teenage girl, I was dating the hottest guy in school but then one day that all changed. First let's go back to where this all started. I was sitting alone at a table he asked if I were sitting with anyone else, I said no so he sat down. He told me there was something on my lip so he leaned in close then kissed me. We started dating and one day at school I told him something wasn't right that he was hot and that I was nothing to other people. So I broke up with him, I regretted it the second I said it and that's how I ended up walking down a dark hallway alone (picture). But what he didn't know I was going to another guy more my type.

So she recently added the story after I wrote mine so we will have different endings. My way I would write this:

I was a happy teen, I had a home, wifi, a phone, and a boyfriend. One day, he wasn't. We met in the most cheesiest way. I was sitting alone at a table eating my lunch, observing every clique there was in highschool. The new kid I believe, the hottest guy on school, looked at me quickly the looked back to his friends. Every now and then I could feel his quick glances. I looked to the table I sat at and started daydreaming. I heard a tray clank to the seat next to me, it was him, the new kid. We talked and talked until something seemed to bother him. "Are you okay? Something seems to be bothering you," I say worriedly.

He shook his head "no, it's just..." he leaned in and kissed the corner of my lip "something was on the corner on the corner of your mouth "something was on your lip" he whispered, his lips landed onto mine. My eyes were wide, it was my first kiss. I soon started to kiss back and ever since we date.

We skipped classes and walked in the empty halls. My grades fell but I didn't care, I was in love. But soon, I felt uneasy about him, I felt like nothing to him but he still held my heart tightly in his hands. I broke up with him, I regretted it write after a saw his smirk, I felt my heart crack to a million pieces but still was there, I knew because of the beating to my ribbcage.

"It's fine, I've been sing an even better girl than you, I grew bored of toying with you," he said calmly. I turned and walked angrily through the empty halls, this time alone (Picture)

Thanks for reading, bye!!!