@BlackbirdSwing(Juwarto)

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Will critique:

· Blurb/Summary

· Story


Focuses on:

· Grammar

· Plot Development

· Character Development

· Spelling

· Pacing

· Descriptions

· Word Usage


Rules:

· Will critique stories rated mature

· Will be very blunt but not very harsh

· Only accepts 2 stories at a time

· Will only critique 2 chapters of your story

· The payment is a credit


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*Maybe the excerpt is in the middle of the story and I might need to know a bit of background...

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⏰ Last updated: May 31, 2016 ⏰

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