Mush(@minusfractions)

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Any number of chapters but done one at a time (e.g. I do one, you do one and so on. Alternatively, you can do all of them first and I'll catch up, but please only do this after we've agreed to do an exchange)I aim to do one chapter every couple of days. I'll usually PM if it will be longer. Sometimes I will be quicker.

I will comment on the following areas (and anything else you ask for specifically) Please do something similar, or at least give a decent comment showing you've read the chapter.

- Opening

- Grammar (will correct and attempt to explain mistakes)

- Characters

- Plot

- Setting

- Ending

- Overall impressions

You can PM me after the critique if you have any chapter-specific questions or want to talk about anything in depth.

 I'll accept any rating – No issue with LGBT either

Form 

Title: 

Genre:

Number of Chapters:

Anything specific you want me to focus on as well as the above:

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