Story Time Updates

And i do the same thing

I realize that the more i keep telling the authors that the main characters are falling in love too quickly i be noticing myself kinda doin the same thing i need to stop, but it's like when ur writing the story its different cuz ur in control and thats how u want the characters and the story to be but when ur reading someone else's work it's like the total opposite and u can't tell the characters nor the author what to do. un un ray ray moving to fast on home girl, aint he just got out of an abusive relationship and now he wants to have sex with a girl he jst met within 3 hours like stawp, but hey i the author wants to do that go right ahead. sometimes i like to speed time up and mention how far in the relay the characters have for each other. save time and hopefully clarity and not confusion.