This is the new book I am working on. M Heart Series is about how a group of girls formed a new generation of empowered girls inside the M Heart Secret Sisterhood and their journey to a greater life. I need your thoughts, comments and help to give...
The M Heart book series is about how each girl got recruited into the secret sisterhood, while I will be changing some locations, names and things for security reasons, a lot is based on real things, anyhow. Now I want you to meet the first character that would appear on the series. Tell me what you think of her and her bio.
Again, I would love your help with your comments, don't be shy and share with me your every thought. Thanks. With love, Kendall.
Starting Character Bio. (Before starting the path into being an M Heart Girl.)
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Name. Kendall Acosta. Gender. Female. Age. 14
Orientation. Bisexual. Nickname. None.
Physical Appearance.
5'2 feet tall. Very pale skin tone. Chestnut-brunette wavy hair styled below shoulder length. Behind thick glasses, big almond -shaped green eyes with long lashes and thick chestnut-color semi-curved eyebrows. Very delicate facial features, starting with a small pointy nose, a small very light patch of freckles starting at the bridge of the nose and expanding towards the cheeks. Small mouth with full heart-shaped lips
Body Complexion.
Skinny, yet very athletic, with long limbs and neck. Small feet and hands. Slightly short torso and small head. Barely a B bra cup Breasts. Tight round butt. Flat belly.
Personality.
Shy, insecure, features a mid-level social anxiety, fears tend to take control over her decisions. Nerdy, but with C and B grades at school. Introverted.
Hobbies.
Ballet Dancing. Cooking. Riding her bicycle and jogging at the nearby park.
Background.
Living in in a middle-class hard-working household formed by Kendall's stepfather, Jhon Carroll, with who she has a tense relationship at best. Lucia Carroll, Kendall's biological mother with whom she has a stable yet fragile relationship and Sophie Carroll, Kendall's 12-year-old sister with who she has a great relationship, despite the disfunction strain finances and highly conservative rules in the family bring. Financially speaking, the Carroll family has been struggling for some time, and Kendall is no exception, having any luxury goods a rare thing to happen, same as for good opportunities in life. At school, Kendall is like a ghost, with total lack of popularity and constantly bullied.
Character progression as the story advances. (After starting the path into being an M Heart Girl.)
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Height growth to 5'6 feet tall. Fair porcelain skin tone with no imperfections. Bright red hair. Nose correction to balance perfectly all facial features. After laser surgery, glasses are no longer needed. Breasts have naturally grown from nearly B bra cup to barely D cup in record time. Kendall's limbs and belly are perfectly tonified. Kendall had discovered the greatness of being submissive to her Master. Hopeless romantic, always willing to help other girls. Extroverted. Social anxiety has vanished from her life.
Personality Changes.
Becomes far more outgoing and bubbly. Self-confidence has been boosted permanently, no longer hides from her fears, but face them head on. No longer a nerdy girl, but her school grades are constantly A or A+ grades with little to no effort. Very popular.
Hobbies Changes.
Kendall becomes a Cheerleader with a high gymnastics level, Cooking, every day Bdsm lifestyle, wellness and fitness forms part of her routines. Horse riding, Business entrepreneur. Kendall becomes and enjoys being a model and actress. Traveling and posting about her greater life makes her a better influencer. Time with her M Heart Sisters also has become a big priority in her life.
Main Background changes.
Kendall finally gets liberated from the fears and chains that tie her to the ground, accomplishing early emancipation from parents and all others who want to hinder her progress in life. The relationship with her stepfather gets harder, yet the man is unable to affect Kendall anymore, Things with her mother become smoother and more loving. With Sophie, the relationship is far more intimate, loving and close. Finances are no longer a problem or an issue in Kendall's life. Kendall's popularity has placed her on top of the cool kids at school.
AUTHOR'S NOTES.
Please give me your thoughts about Kendall Acosta, and what you would like to know about her when reading the story. All comments, as always, are more than welcome. And if you are intuitive, you can guess who the character represents.
Comments.
As always, your comments and all input are highly appreciated. I would love to know what you like the most about my stories, same as about the things you don't like. I want to know about the things you want to see more of, same as for all you would like to see added to the plot, please, let me know.
Other authors have said it, and I shall say it again here, the comments of all readers or other authors truly help to motivate more writing. Remember the feedback to one author is feedback to us all.
Don't know what to say? Want to comment but don't have a clue... try this... Just answer the questions below. Again, the feedback is appreciated.
1. What age range do you like to see more in the stories?
2. Is there any type of character you would like to see or have a better story development?
3. What kind of sexy content you would like to see more of?
a) Group b) BDSM c) Virgins d) Golden shower e) PG13 rate
f) Gentle love. g) wild love. h) forbidden love. i) Age gap love.
