Hi! I'm Mason Fawaz, a beta reader who focuses on real reader reactions, not just grammar.
I help writers understand how their story feels to someone reading it for the first time.
Here's what I look for:
Where readers get bored or confused
Which scenes hit emotionally
Pacing issues (slow or rushed chapters)
Plot holes or unclear motivations
What's working well and should be kept
I read your story like a normal reader would honestly and thoughtfully and then give clear feedback you can actually use.
Genres I read:
Romance / Dark Romance
Fantasy / YA
Thriller
Mafia / Werewolf / Spice
If you're open to constructive feedback and want to make your story stronger, I'd love to help.
📩 Send me a DM if you're interested.
ESTÁS LEYENDO
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