love at first sight (Luis Coronel fan-fiction)

Meeting Alerta Zero

(Marissa's POV)
Today I have a "date" with luis. Were going to the beach . Am really happy with Luis. Kimberly is taking care of Janet. I just found out that Kimberly and Kevin are going out. Am really happy because my bestfriend is dating my brother . They make a cute couple lol. So rn am changing. Am wearing a white crop top and blue high waisted shorts. Under my clothes am wearing my bikini (on top) . Me and Luis had gone shopping and we got matching swimsuits. I was done getting ready and that's when I got a text.
J.S= Jonatan Sanchez | M.O= Marissa Ortiz
J.S: hey
M.O: hey
J.S: can I take Janet ? I'll take her back next week
M.O: I guess since your the dad . Are you still in Miami?
J.S: yeah
M.O: what hotel are you in?
J.S: the same one as you lol am with your brother rn
M.O: oh alright well am gonna get her stuff ready and I'll take her
J.S: alright and I'll just go get her
M.O: okay fine when are you leaving?
J.S: today when are you guys leaving?
M.O: today at midnight . Are you going with your mom or dad?
J.S: oh and with my mom
M.O: alright well I'll see you in a bit
J.S: alright bye

Rissa: Kimberly!!
Kim: what
Rissa: Jonatan is taking Janet for a week so can you help me pack her stuff?
Kim: yea Kevin messaged me and told he that he has Janet
Rissa: okay tell him to bring her
Kim: alright

*Luis's and Marissa's covo*
M.O: babe
L.C: yes babe
M.O: am ready but I have to pack Janet's stuff because her dad is taking her for a week
L.C: aw Fr I was going to tell you if you wanted to stay here for a week
M.O: Fr babe?
L.C: yea do you still want to stay? Just me and you
M.O: yes
L.C: okay I love you
M.O: I love you to

*5 minutes later*
Rissa: finally you bring her
Kevin: oh sorry lol I forgot
Rissa: Ush alright well bye
Kevin: aye use protection while your with Luis
Rissa: what? Lmao
Kevin: he told us already that you guys are staying for a week
Rissa: oh & nothing is going to happen so don't worry about it
Kevin: sure am just saying I don't want you to be pregnant again
Rissa: shut up .
*Kevin leaves*
Rissa: princess your going with your daddy for a week okay
Janet: your not coming with us mommy?
Rissa: No princess
*knock on door*
Rissa: Kim could you get that
Kim: yea

Janet: but why mommy
Rissa: because I can't go princess
Janet: I hate you. I don't love you anymore
Rissa: Janet don't say that
Janet: no I hate you go die !

*Jonatan walks in*
Jonatan: hey Janet don't say that to your mom
Janet: am just saying that I hate her daddy
Jonatan: Janet tell her your sorry and that you love her
Janet: no because I hate her can we leave now?
Jonatan: yes get your stuff
Janet: okay
Jonatan: go give your mommy a hug and a kiss
Janet: no
*Janet walks up to Kimberly and hugs her*
Rissa: Janet I love you
Janet: I hate you your not my mom anymore
Rissa: Janet don't say that
Janet: bye Marissa and Kimberly
*she walks away *
Jonatan: you know she doesn't mean that
*he hugs Marissa while she was crying. And Luis comes in *
Luis: what's going on here?
Rissa: Luis its not what it looks like Jonatan: well bye I'll take her to your house next week
Rissa: alright bye
*he leaves*
Luis: why was he hugging you?
Rissa: Janet was telling me that she hates me and that am not her mom anymore and when she was about to leave she said bye Marissa and that's when Jonatan said that she didn't mean that and he saw that I was crying so he huged me that's when you walked in
Luis: oh babe you know she didn't mean that
Rissa: lets go Luis I don't want to be here anymore
Luis: okay
*skip car ride. Until they get to the beach*
Rissa: look babe I think there filming something
Luis: where?
Rissa: over there (said pointing where there was cameras)
Luis: oh
Rissa: come on let's go (said pulling his hand)
Luis: okay
*they walked to the sand*
Luis: right here babe?
Rissa: yea
*with alerta zero*
Memo: look Danny that looks like Marissa Ortiz and Luis Coronel
Danny: yea what if it is them?
Elio: what makes you guys think that's them? Just because they look like them doesn't mean anything.
Danny: maybe because yesterday was Premios Juventud
Elio: oh yea true
Jose Luis: ay tan menso
Sahrel: ay ya callen se y pongan atención
Jr: si orita cuando acabemos de grabar van a ver si es
Danny: dam alright

*back to Luis and Marissa*
Rissa: babe those guys keep on looking at us
Luis: just ignore them babe
Rissa: alright (takes out her phone and goes on snapchat)
Rissa: babe do you love me?
Luis: yes babe I love you
Rissa: aw Iove you to (kisses Luis and ends the video)
Luis: look babe the guys are coming over here
*the guys walk up to Marissa and Luis*
Memo: Hi am Memo from alerta zero and I was wondering if you guys want to hangout with us
Luis: Yea we'll hang out with you guys btw am Luis Coronel and This is my girlfriend Marissa Ortiz
Rissa: Hi nice to meet you
Memo: nice to meet you to . Well in alerta zero there's 7 members counting me
Luis: oh what do you guys sing?
Memo: Mexican romantic songs
Luis: oh that's cool
Memo: should we go?
Luis & Rissa: yea
*they walk to where the rest of alerta zero is at*
Memo: alright guys this is Marissa Ortiz and Luis Coronel
Danny: Hi am Danny nice to meet you
Rissa & Luis: nice to meet you to
Elio: Hi am elio
Rissa&Luis: nice to meet you
Jr: hey am Jr
Rissa& Luis: hey
Luis: Hi am Luis nice to meet you
Luis & Rissa: Hi
Jose Luis: Hi am Jose Luis nice to meet you
Luis&Rissa: Hi nice to meet you to
Sahrel: hey am sahrel nice to meet you
Luis&rissa: Hi nice to meet you to
Memo: dam Danny why you blushing
Danny: shut up memo
Memo: sorry about him he's a big as fan crush on you Marissa
Rissa: don't worry about it lol
LuisC: so why do your guys have cameras?
Sahrel: were doing a commercial for Dr pepper
LuisC: that's cool

*text Danny and memo*
Danny: memo ask her if we could take a picture
Memo: who just you two or all of us?
Danny: just me and her 
Memo: get some Danny
Danny:  lmao no she has a bf ✋
Memo: Ik how are you feeling that she's right in front of you?
Danny: am nervous , excited and happy
Memo: aw my little boy is looking at his first love ❤
Danny: shut up and ask her
Memo: alright holdup
Danny: alright

*back to them talking with Marissa and Luis* 
Memo: Marissa
Rissa: yes lol
Memo: can I talk to you over here ?
Rissa: yea . I'll be back
LuisC: okay 
*memo and Marissa walk to a different spot*
Rissa: so ? Why did you want to talk to me
Memo: well it's about Danny . Like I said he has a huge crush on you , he always talks about you . He see's you like his first love. He's basically obsessed with you. He keeps on telling me to ask you if he could take a picture with you
Rissa: uhm sure lol
Memo: alright thank I'll tell him to come right now
Rissa: okay

*back to the texts*
Memo: Danny she said yea get your ass over her boy
Danny: alright holdup boy

*Danny goes to where Marissa and memo are at*

Memo: Danny get ready lol
Danny: omg
Rissa: why are you nervous? lol am just a normal girl
Danny: a normal girl that I have a huge crush on
Rissa: lets take the picture already lol
Memo: okay
*Danny got next to Marissa while memo took the picture *
Danny: can we take a selfie now?
Rissa: yea lol
*he takes the selfie*
Danny: can I have your number so that we could hang out when you go to Chicago?
Rissa: Yea lol it's (***)***-****
Danny: thank you lol
Rissa: where's memo?
Danny: he left
Rissa: I think we should go
Danny: yea 
*they walk to were they are all at*
LuisC: well we should go already
Memo: okay can we all take a picture for the memory?
LuisC: yea
*they took the picture and Marissa and Luis left to the car*
Luis: so babe why did Memo want to talk to you?
Rissa: he said that Danny wanted to take a picture with me
Luis: oh
Rissa: babe don't get mad I told him that I love you and only you
Luis: I love you babe
Rissa: I love you to baby

A/N:I hope you guys like this chapter  . I really don't know what the name of the next chapter will be . Don't forget to Comment and Vote