love at first sight (Luis Coronel fan-fiction)

planning and break ups part 3

( Gerardo's POV )

It was like around 6:20am when I woke up and took a shower. I couldn't sleep yesterday because I was thinking what if she says no or something. Am going to ask her out on Saturday. When I finished taking a shower I started getting ready so I could take Marissa, Kevin and Oscar to school.Yesterday I heard Marissa crying at night because of what happened with Luis. It was like about 6:50 when Marissa walked downstairs all dressed and ready for school. I was sitting down drinking coffee in the kitchen. We started talking about stuff and that's when Kevin and Oscar come downstairs. There wasn't no food so we went to McDonald's. They are and I took them to a school. When I got home I decided to text Luis.
G: Luis are you busy rn?
L: no why
G: be ready in 5 minutes
L: alright
G:I'll text you when Am outside
L: alright

( Luis's POV )

I couldn't sleep yesterday because of what happened with Marissa yesterday. I really do love her but I don't think she loves me. I woke up like at 7:00am then I showered and got ready for the day . When I finished getting dressed i got a texted from Gerardo and he said that he was going to pick me up in like 5 minutes so I walked downstairs and I saw my mom cooking breakfast.

*in the kitchen with Luis and his mom*
Dt: buenos días hijo
Luis: buenos días ama
Dt: oye Luis ayer eras tu o bebe el que estaba llorando?
Luis: yo
Dt: y porque?
Luis: pues por Marissa
Dt: que paso?
Luis: eso no importa lo unico que importa es que no me quiere
Dt: y ya le preguntaste si te quiere o no
Luis: no
Dt: pues preguntale luis
Luis: al rato porque orita está en la escuela.
*Gerardo texted Luis that he was outside*
Luis: ama ya me voy al rato vengo
Dt: okay te cuidas eh
Luis: okay bye
*he walks outside and goes inside gerardos car*
Gerardo: wassup Luis
Luis: the sky & good morning
Gerardo: no duh the sky
Luis: so where are we going?
Gerardo: to a flower shop
Luis: alright
*skip car ride to the flower shop*
Gerardo: alright it's right here I think
Luis: what do you mean "I think" what if were lost
Gerardo: na it's right here I just saw the lady come out with flowers
Luis: alright well lets go
* they walk inside the flower shop and "el cholo" from Gerardo Ortiz is on the radio*
( Gerardo's POV )

When we walked inside the flower shop my song "El cholo" was on the radio.Then I saw a lady making a flower bouquet.
Gerardo: hola
Luis: hola
Lady: no lo puedo creer . Enfrente de mi esta Luis Coronel y Gerardo Ortiz
Gerardo: gracias
Luis: gracias
Lady: en que les puedo ayudar?
Gerardo: vengo a buscar pétalos de Rosas rojas y blancas y un ramo de Rosas
Lady: y para cuando las quiere?
Gerardo: pues las necesito para el domingo
Lady: okay pues las puedes venir a recoger o se las podemos llevar a su casa
Gerardo: okay me las pueden llevar a mi casa?
Lady: si
Gerardo: cuanto va ser?
Lady: $250
Gerardo: okay aquí esta
Lady: gracias , me puedo tomar foto con ustedes?
Gerardo: claro que si
*they take pictures and Gerardo and Luis walk out the Store. Then Gerardo gets a call*
Gerardo: Luis could you drive? I have to take this
Luis: yea
*phone call with Gerardo*
Gerardo: hello?
Principal: hello is this Gerardo Ortiz?
Gerardo: yes
Principal: okay well am calling to inform you that Marissa Ortiz has gotten into a fight and you have to come pick her up .
Gerardo: okay I'll be there in 10 minutes
Principal: okay thank you
*Gerardo hangs up*
Gerardo: Luis Marissa got into a fight and they want me to go pick her up. Do you mind driving there?
Luis: no I don't mind
Gerardo: okay thanks
*Gerardo gets a text from Marissa and they get to school. They walked in and they lady at the front desk told them to sign in. Then they went to the dean's office*
Assistant: how may I help you?
Gerardo: I came for my sister Marissa Ortiz
Assistant: oh yea the Dean will talk to you in a bit
Gerardo:okay
Assistant: please take a seat
Gerardo: okay
*the Dean came out and talked to Gerardo. He told him that Marissa got kicked out.*
( Luis's POV )

When Gerardo told me that Marissa had gotten into a fight I thought to my self is she okay? Then I started driving to the school and when we got there we had to sign in then we walked to the office. When I walked in I saw her . She looked so beautiful and when she saw me she was is shock. I could tell she was sad by her eyes. The Dean came out and started talking then he said that she was kicked out. Then he said that he wanted to talk to Gerardo so me and Marissa walked out . She walked out of school and went to the parking lot . I just stayed outside the office.When Gerardo came we walked to the parking lot. When we went inside the car Gerardo asked her why she got into a fight and she said me. Then she told him if he could go pick up Kimberly.

*they went to eat with Kimberly. Luis texted Marissa*
L: can I talk to you?
M:really Luis? Can't you just talk to me your right in front of me
L: I can't, look Marissa I love you with all my heart I want to know if you love me to
M: Luis what kind of questions is that? Yes I love you !
L: Ik it's not a good way to ask but ......
M: but what?
L: Marissa would you let me be the love of your life , your one and only, your boyfriend?
M: yes Luis i love you ❤
L: I love you to princess
* they kiss each other and Gerardo looks at them but he doesn't say anything*
(Car ride back to Gerardo's house)
Luis: babe
Marissa: yea
Luis: wanna know your birthday present?
Marissa: yes!
Luis: okay you get to go to Chicago with me ❤
Marissa: are you Fr?
Luis: babe you don't look excited
Marissa: I am but what if Gerardo doesn't let me go?
Gerardo: you could go!
Luis: see come on say yes!
Marissa: okay ❤
Luis: babe I love you
Marissa: I love you too ❤. So when do we leave and how many days are we staying?
Luis: we leave today and 4
Marissa: okay
*they get home and Marissa starts packing for Chicago*
(Lets skip to were there at the airport)
Gerardo: take care!
Marissa: I will you to !
*they hug*
Marissa: tell Kevin and Oscar that I'll miss them
Gerardo: okay I will
Marissa: bye
Gerardo:bye
* Marissa and Luis get on the plane*
Marissa: babe am scared
Luis: is this your first time on a plane?
Marissa: no lol I just get nervous
Luis: don't worry am here
* they finally get to chicago and they get to the hotel*
Marissa: babe!
Luis: yes!
Marissa: I love you
*they start kissing and they get to the bed*
Luis: babe are you sure about this?
Marissa: yes am sure
Luis: is this your first time?
Marissa: yes
Luis: don't worry I won't hurt you
*they started kissing again and Marissa started talking of Luis's clothes and he started talking of her clothes. They had sex.*
Marissa: babe I love you ❤
Luis: I love you too my princess ❤
Marissa: we should get some sleep.
Luis: yea we should
Marissa: okay but first let me post a picture of when we were landing
Luis: okay

@marissaortizoficial: guess where am at? Chicago with my love @luiscoronelmusic ❤.

Marissa: okay now we could go to sleep
Luis: okay
*next day its 6:30am*
(Luis's POV)
When I woke up I saw Marissa sleeping next to me and she looked so adorable I just had to take a picture and post it on instagram

@luiscoronelmusic: my princess ❤ am glad she came with me to Chicago ❤.

@gerardoortizoficial: aw my little sister she looks so peaceful
@Vanessa.coronel_: she's so beautiful ❤
@Ortiz.fans._: aww ❤
@Kevinortizoficial: I miss her already , Jk @gerardoortizoficial

A/n: so this is the last part of planning and break ups . I will be updating the next chapter. I still need the girls. If you want to be one of them message me. Sorry for any errors.
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