Girl next door

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Hi, uh, it's Mela,
You know guys, I think I should twist up my writing style a bit, all my books are so similar, like if you read, My Crush, My Bully and then happen to stumble upon this one --Girl next door-- you can instantly tell it's the same writer. So I need your advice guys, should I stop putting snippets in my books, and make my authors note more formal and to the point?, Your choice😁

Anywho, let's get down to it...

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*Sarah*
I dashed down the hall barely avoiding a bullet grazing by my cheekbone, the heat from the bullet, making my cheek bleed, I swerved right and stood in front of the exit, Fin-fucking-ally.

I put my hand in my pocket and tried to bring out an exit pass, but that was really difficult, with a guy that weighed about 180 pounds unconscious on your back.

Damn it Chris, how the fuck are you so light headed.

After a lot of failed attempts, I eventually dropped Chris on the floor and pulled the exit card out, swiping it across the machine.

I slid under the slowly rising door, pulling Chris's arm behind me, just as we were about to scale under the door, I heard two sounding gunshots "bang, bang"

I gasped as my body felt pushed forward by a gust of wind, I gripped onto the pavement beside me for support.

I looked at Chris who had a bullet in his arm, his eyes wide open, where's the second bullet?.

"Chris, you're hurt, get up, let's get you to Alyssa, she'll help" I said with a grunted noise.

I stood up and held my hand out to Chris for support, he looked at me with pain in his eyes.

"It's okay Chris, just get up, I'll piggyback you to the car, just try to get up" I said my eyes glossed with tears.

"S-s-sarah" Chris said

"Huh?, I'm right here, it's fine, you'll be fine I promise"

"S-s-sarah"

"NO! Chris, you can't give me any of those last words shit, seeing you in pain right now hurts like crazy-"

"S-S-SARAH!" He yelled making me shut up, "does your back hurt, he said a bit softer now

I arched my back and hissed, must have sprained it, "a bit, why?" I asked, my eyebrows creased in confusion

"That's because.... You were shot"

I stood still in place shocked, so that's where the second bullet went, Chris was already crying, "th-there's b-blood everywhere and your organs are exposed and...hurt...pain...move....
Death.... hospital" I couldn't make out what he was saying between his blubbering anymore, his words just kept ringing in my head.

You were shot.

I turned around and saw my blood rushing like a river toward the main road, "is that mine?" I asked no one in particular, "my organs w-were shot a-and its numb, so...I'm....dying....."

Then everything went black.

Authors note:

Cliffhanger!!
Sorry y'all, but this scene doesn't come up until much later in the book, I already have the first 10 chapters planned out, so expect a weekly update, and add it to your goddamn reading list, will ya?

            Happy reading
          With love, Mela 😘