Alright, no trust is being cancelled guys. I'm sorry. I know play the womp womp noises... But, here is my explanation to why!
1. The lack of logic.
I have reread some of it and just sat there and wondered "WHERE IS THE BASIC LOGIC HERE????" i clearly rushed a LOT of this story. And, I didn't really know what I was doing.
2. The writing itself.
Okay. This one is just... Wow. I really hate it. I can't express how much I hate this. It's just a lot of big paragraphs with really dumb logic.
3. The way the story was going.
I didn't know, and still don't know, a lot about psychology and how this could actually affect real life people. I know a good few google searches and books later I can do it but that will be for another time.
4. The way I was doing the characters.
I didn't plan ANY of this!!! I drew a few doodles of the characters yes, but I didn't actually right or draw them. So I don't have anything to go off of.
5. The storyline itself.
Again, poor planning. I do have rough ideas of where this will go, but not a full daft of it.
So, here is what's gonna happen. I'm gonna post the drawing, what was gonna happen (roughly), everyone is welcome to ask questions!! I do have one chapter in progress that I will post. But, no trust is now no more!! Alright, thanks for bearing with me. Sushi out.
---sushi
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no trust (Cancelled)
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