1. Write in third person..
Think like you're writing the description of an ad. You don't see people writing the description if the ads in first person.
2..
Don't say your climax, but hint at it. You want to draw in the reader, not spoil it for them.
3..
It's Oki to mess up TwT, When I made my first book in third grade, my description was absolutely trash, Maybe Because I was a third grader but you get my point
