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It was New Year's Eve 2022, and everyone in my family was full of joy and excitement. I'm Ana Larson, a 21-year-old girl who lives in California with my parents. I joyfully wished everyone a happy new year as the clock hit midnight, and we gathered around to cut the cake. Even though I'm not a huge lover of cakes, I do occasionally like them. At the TV launch, we all danced and cheered while savouring the night before the new year.

While everyone else was dancing, I started feeling ill and chose to sit in a corner and view everyone. Suddenly, my attention was directed to the storeroom, where I observed a person. It seemed obscure to me, yet I couldn't take my eyes off it. It seemed like someone was observing me from there. My heart began to pound, and I came out in a cold sweat. I summoned the courage to approach the storehouse, compelled by curiosity and anxiety. When I got there, I saw something incredible. The awful thing I witnessed cannot be accurately described in words. I felt as though I were being mesmerized by a creature with dark, penetrating eyes. The person wore ragged clothing, twisted his body in strange ways, and had a frightening smirk on his face. Right then, I collapsed and lost consciousness.

When I awoke the next day, I had a high temperature. My mother was in tears, but when I explained what had happened the night before, my parents disregarded it as a figment of my mind. They argued that I was overthinking things and advised me to take a nap. I was sure that what I had gone through was true, but I refrained from telling anyone since I knew they wouldn't believe me.

As time passed, I gradually began to feel more normal. My family planned a trip to New York after 15 days, but I was unable to go because of my academic obligations. As a result, I was left alone at home. I woke up at 1 a.m. one night while lying in bed, overcome by thirst. I went to the kitchen to get some water. I saw a person sitting on the sofa as I entered the living room. I moved slowly toward it, but before I could get there, the figure disappeared in front of my eyes. I ran back into my room and quickly locked the door after being shocked. I started crying and praying when I heard footsteps outside my door after a short time. Suddenly, there was a strong kick on my door, which was shaken severely. I could feel my body shaking throughout my entire existence as the crashing sound echoed around the home. I don't remember what occurred after that, but when I came to, it was already two o'clock the next afternoon. I was dizzy and had a terrible headache. Everything seemed normal as I came out of my room as if I had just had a bad dream, but I couldn't get rid of the lingering worry. I grabbed breakfast and a coffee before getting ready and went to the college for my classes.

I couldn't keep my feelings secret any longer, so I told my childhood friend Mia, who quickly became my support system. She said that she thought I was under the control of evil powers. I decided to spend the night at her place because I was so scared. I told my parents I was going to spend the night at Mia's, but I didn't tell them anything about what happened.

The next day, Sunday, Mia and I decided to see a movie and have some late-night burgers. We selected a romantic movie because we both like that genre after placing our food order. We decided on "The Kissing Booth," and while we ate our burgers and watched the film, I briefly forgot the problems that had been bothering me. It seemed like a perfect night. However, after a few hours of sleep, another horrific incident happened.

I was shocked to find myself back in my own home, resting on my bed. I screamed and sobbed in pain, wanting to contact my parents so badly, but I didn't have a phone. All around me was covered in darkness until I saw someone coming. My cries became louder as my bed began to hang and the door started to swing wildly. I felt as though an unknown force was assaulting me. I tried to defend myself, but my hands were twisted backward, giving me excruciating pain. I felt helpless and knew I had no one to turn to. I turned to prayer in my pain, seeking comfort in God's presence. The next morning was an ordinary day; however, I don't remember how everything was handled. The light in my room gave a glimpse of hope that reminded me of heaven even though I was still experiencing physical and mental suffering. During those terrifying times, I realized that I was never completely alone. The presence of a supernatural power gave me the strength to survive. Nonetheless, I learned a lot from the experience. Others may turn their backs on you when you're in need, but your faith in God will never falter. Although I was aware that genuine sympathy and understanding are few, I found solace in my faith.

My daily life has been greatly affected by these incidents. Fear and anxiety became common friends, and the discomfort from the contorted hands lingered. I struggled, but I persevered because of my unbreakable trust in God, which gave me comfort. Relationships with others were difficult since I was unable to share these experiences with anybody. I put on a mask, pretended everything was okay, and kept those haunting memories to myself. I couldn't get rid of the unanswered question of what happened and who that figure was.

Now I try to live as normally as I can, even though I have not yet entirely recovered inside. Others' support and understanding may be rare, but I found peace in my faith and my friendship with Mia. In uncertain times, they were my pillar of support. Even though I still experience pain and worry, I've learned to draw strength from my unwavering faith. The events of those nights are still a mystery and will always be a part of who I am, but they also helped me become the strong person I am today.

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