Okay guys so it's March 31 I spent the last week updating and changing the whole story.
I wrote this in like, middle school?
Yeah
Bad.
Anyways I'm fully about to graduate highschool now and so I'm rereading and cringing at this horribly written book.
BUTTTT I fluffed everything up.
New content includes in depth thoughts between the characters.
Correct grammar and punctuation but most of all, an actual consistent story.
The premise stayed the same but the reader's ambition and drive how now been fully fledged out as the same with Giorno.
Basically= everything makes sense now. It isn't rushed. And actually has meaning.
I suggest reread the book. 100% it has more meaningful moments and you'll actually be able to appreciate it and get closer to Giorno himself.
Anyways, I totally don't mind continuing the book. Buuuuut only if there's an audience for it. Please give it a chance if you'd like but I strongly believe you'll like the new creation way more.
JE LEEST
A Twisted Tale : 𝓕𝓪𝓽𝓮 and 🅳🅴🆂🆃🅸🅽🆈
FanfictieYou had moved on from your early years only now to start working undercover you were always interested in the ways things worked. You had a charm that helped you get what you wanted, at times you were intelligent and careful. Giorno always loved the...
