Book: PARALLEL HEARTS |JJK
Author: amamy15
Reviewer: Lina
Title: (9/10)
Book cover: (8/10)
It's very well done, it just doesn't really catch the eyes of the readers.
Blurb: (6/10)
For this kind of story I would recommend after the summary of the story, the author could add a little of the story to really captivate the reader and get him hooked to the book.
Overall theme: (8/10)
So far the theme is very interesting, but because the story is still in the beginning it has space for more plot twists that will make the story better.
First chapter/ Intro: (2/10)
The author took the blurb and turned it into the intro.
Character development: (2/10)
The story is in the beginning the characters still hadn't developed at all.
Grammar and vocabulary: (10/10)
Tips or changes:
For the improving of the intro I suggest doing a quick view of the personalities of the characters. During the rest of the book I suggest doing more JK Pov, as to get to know the character better and understand his past. Hope, that the author continues to write as this book has a lot of potential.
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